Lo Chalaa Mein......AnAAm

by ANAAM on April 09, 2011, 02:20:12 PM
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sad5 sad7 tearyeyed Lo Chalaa Mein  tearyeyed sad7 sad5

Deh se ukta gaya hai aaj ruuh ka mann
Dil mai chhid gaya hai aaj koi toofaan

Reh reh uuth raha hai bebasi ka uufaan
Lag raha hai aaj le jayega ye meri jaan

Ye nahi kay mein hu tere pyaar se anjaan
G liya ab tak kyuki tha mujhe eska dhyaan

Sabra ka baandh bhi aaj tod na de apni aan
Aaj kar raha hu jag-jaahir lo tum bhee jaan

Khata nahi isme kisi ki hai vidhi ka vidhaan
Lo chalaa mein sanam chhod ye tera jahaan
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2011, 03:57:56 PM »
duniya se toote hue dil ki bhavnao ko bakhubi lafjon mein piroya hai aapne Anaam ji......first line mein hi poora saar likh diya.....dil ko chhu gayi aapki ye creation...jo talash rahi  thi wo aapki iss kavita mein padhne ko mila..bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2011, 04:04:35 PM »
kya kahun humnaam........

feel aur wordings aur jis tarah tumne har ek line me use sanjoya hai wo ghutan saaf nazar aa rahi hai....

tareef nahin karungi iski kyunki dard par taaliyan nahin bajti mujhse.....
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2011, 04:17:27 PM »
Aap ka tahe dil se shukriya Nikhaar ji.........Dard ko wo samajh sakta hai jisk dil me dard ho.....
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2011, 08:24:15 AM »
bht accha likha hai aapne anaam ji..
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2011, 09:27:24 AM »
Nice work Anaam ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2011, 10:53:53 AM »
really good
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2014, 09:44:59 AM »
YE UDDGAAR AAPKE DIL KO CHHU GAYE MERA PRAYAAS SAFAL HUAA....
AABHAAR NIKHAAR JI...HUMNAAM AUR KILL-BILL..
POOJA JI AAPKE COMMENT SE TOU RACHNA ME CHAR CHAND LAG GAYE JI
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