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kyun ab is jahaan me jazbaaton ki koi qadar hi na rahi,
kyun yahaan log kapdon ki tarah pyaar badal lete hain,

jo khat likhe the kabhi pyaar se unki ehmiyat hi na rahi,
un khaton ke lifaafe aur unpe likhe naam badal lete hain,

jo vaade kiye the sang jeene marne ke unki keemat hi na rahi,
kyun aajkal log mausam ki tarah apne khayaal badal lete hain,

jo the naam waale unki duniya mein pehchaan hi na rahi,
kyun girgeet ki tarah aajkal log apne rang badal lete hain,

chahat ko pooja samajhte the kal tak ab wo chahat hi na rahi,
kyun subah se shaam hone tak log bhagwaan badal lete hain.


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«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2010, 09:38:20 PM »
Bahut khoob Kapil ji.great and marvelous creation.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2010, 09:44:30 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Bahut khoob Kapil ji.great and marvelous creation.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2010, 12:49:35 AM »
GREAT
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2010, 06:13:35 AM »


    Good one kapil ji. Achha likha hai aapne. hello2
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2010, 06:31:56 AM »
Wah wah kya baat hai......kapil-ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mat poochho eyis kaljug mai kya-kya hota hai
Log chand sikko k liye emaan badal lete hain

Jism kee kya baat karein hum eyis kali-yug main
Bhookh se laachaar log Khuda ko bhi bech lete hain





kyun ab is jahaan me jazbaaton ki koi qadar hi na rahi,
kyun yahaan log kapdon ki tarah pyaar badal lete hain,

jo khat likhe the kabhi pyaar se unki ehmiyat hi na rahi,
un khaton ke lifaafe aur unpe likhe naam badal lete hain,

jo vaade kiye the sang jeene marne ke unki keemat hi na rahi,
kyun aajkal log mausam ki tarah apne khayaal badal lete hain,

jo the naam waale unki duniya mein pehchaan hi na rahi,
kyun girgeet ki tarah aajkal log apne rang badal lete hain,

chahat ko pooja samajhte the kal tak ab wo chahat hi na rahi,
kyun subah se shaam hone tak log bhagwaan badal lete hain.

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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2010, 02:33:26 PM »
Thank u so much Manoj ji...!!!

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«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2010, 06:16:11 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji hamari kavita ko waqt dene ke liye aur ise pasand karne ke liye...!!!


    Good one kapil ji. Achha likha hai aapne. hello2
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«Reply #8 on: May 31, 2010, 06:59:17 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji...!!!

aapne bhi bahut bahut khoob likha hai...!!!
Applause Applause Applause

ab insaano me insaaniyat hi nahi rahi,
    log khoon ke rishtey bhool jaate hain,

matlabi duniya aur matlabi log hain yahan,
    dosti karke log nibhaana bhool jaate hain...


Wah wah kya baat hai......kapil-ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mat poochho eyis kaljug mai kya-kya hota hai
Log chand sikko k liye emaan badal lete hain

Jism kee kya baat karein hum eyis kali-yug main
Bhookh se laachaar log Khuda ko bhi bech lete hain


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«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2010, 08:35:54 PM »
Kapil Dost..Bahaut sunder likha hai apne! Wakei bahaut bahaut ache! Applause Applause

Koyal di, Tooooo good!
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«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2010, 08:51:14 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Kapil Dost..Bahaut sunder likha hai apne! Wakei bahaut bahaut ache! Applause Applause

Koyal di, Tooooo good!
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2010, 05:32:33 AM »
Thanks for my lines.......
bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji...!!!

aapne bhi bahut bahut khoob likha hai...!!!
Applause Applause Applause

ab insaano me insaaniyat hi nahi rahi,
    log khoon ke rishtey bhool jaate hain,

matlabi duniya aur matlabi log hain yahan,
    dosti karke log nibhaana bhool jaate hain...


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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2010, 01:35:07 PM »
U r welcome Koyal ji...!!!

Thanks for my lines.......
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«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2010, 02:54:21 PM »
Bahut khoob Kapil
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2010, 02:18:56 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Bahut khoob Kapil
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