LOOTNE LAGE HAIN....

by pritam tripathi on November 08, 2011, 02:59:21 PM
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 KISI KE BHAROSE KI KEEMAT KA ANDAAZA MAIN KYA LAGAUN
         LOG TO AB PAANI BHI BECHNE LAGE HAIN

 BESHAQ BAD MIZAAZ HOON MAIN MAGAR APNA MIZAAZ KYUN BADLUN
         JAB LOG MASOOMIAT SE DIL TODNE LAGE HAIN

 YE SIYASAT HAIN ISME KAISE MAIN DESH KI AABRU BACHAUN
         JAB RAKHWALE HI AABRU LOOTNE LAGE HAIN
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2011, 06:24:49 PM »
Tripati Jee Aadaab!

Achche khayaal kahe hai janab.. Aur bahut sahiN
kaha aapne... Usual Smile

Humari daad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Aapka lafzoN ko parosne ka hunar shayad abhi kachcha
hai.. koshish karte rahiye.. aur dusre bhi shayaroN ko
padhte rahiye.. Aapki lekhni meiN khud sudhar aa jayeNga.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile   

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pritam tripathi
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2011, 07:44:52 PM »
dhanyawad aapka
aapki salah jarror maanunga
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Dil Shah
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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2011, 04:19:29 AM »
pritam jiii wakayeee sach baat kahi apne...,
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2011, 12:50:09 PM »
Nice.Keep writing.
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pritam tripathi
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2011, 03:11:20 PM »
dhanyawad siddiqui ji
dhanyawad dilshah ji
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