Maa ka dard--- Kumaar

by kumaar on May 04, 2015, 02:55:32 PM
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Andheri ratoN mei kabhi tapti dhoop mei apne aanchal mei sulaya,
Wo beta pad-likhkar bana afsar par maa ka pyar na samjh paya!!

Daulat ki bhookh bhadti rahi maa se dooriyaN bhadti rahi,
Banawati matlabi duniya ko mana apna maa ke aansuN na dekh paya!!

Desh mei naukari nahi maa videsh mei kamane jaana hai,
Bas isi juth se bete ke sukh mei maa ne apna sab Kuchh gawaya!!

Aye maa ko rulane wale tera fir bhi bal na banka ho kahe ye har maa,
Ki maa ko maa se jyada kon samjha kon samjha paya!!!

Jai Kumar
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2015, 05:55:20 PM »
Andheri ratoN mei kabhi tapti dhoop mei apne aanchal mei sulaya,
Wo beta pad-likhkar bana afsar par maa ka pyar na samjh paya!!

Daulat ki bhookh bhadti rahi maa se dooriyaN bhadti rahi,
Banawati matlabi duniya ko mana apna maa ke aansuN na dekh paya!!

Desh mei naukari nahi maa videsh mei kamane jaana hai,
Bas isi juth se bete ke sukh mei maa ne apna sab Kuchh gawaya!!

Aye maa ko rulane wale tera fir bhi bal na banka ho kahe ye har maa,
Ki maa ko maa se jyada kon samjha kon samjha paya!!!

Jai Kumar
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2015, 06:06:06 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2015, 08:23:26 PM »
bahut sunder ehsaas hai Kumaar Sahib.
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2015, 07:43:16 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2015, 11:36:35 AM »
बहुत ही सुंदर रचना है कुमार जी -आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2015, 03:39:08 PM »
Andheri ratoN mei kabhi tapti dhoop mei apne aanchal mei sulaya,
Wo beta pad-likhkar bana afsar par maa ka pyar na samjh paya!!

Daulat ki bhookh bhadti rahi maa se dooriyaN bhadti rahi,
Banawati matlabi duniya ko mana apna maa ke aansuN na dekh paya!!

Desh mei naukari nahi maa videsh mei kamane jaana hai,
Bas isi juth se bete ke sukh mei maa ne apna sab Kuchh gawaya!!

Aye maa ko rulane wale tera fir bhi bal na banka ho kahe ye har maa,
Ki maa ko maa se jyada kon samjha kon samjha paya!!!

Jai Kumar


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