MAA KE AANCHAL KI CHAON......soudagar

by soudagar on July 30, 2012, 04:32:50 AM
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Maa mujhe apne pyar bhari aanchal ki chaon mein kho lene de
bahut dard hai mere seene mein bahon mein teri ro lene de

dunia ke sang chalne ki khatir maine bahut paap kama liye
maa mere gunaho ko tere pyar ki gangaa mein dho lene de

ik umr tak chala hai bure khawabo ka silsila mere zehan mein
maa teri goud mein aakar mujhe meethe khawabo ke beej bo lene
 de

jhuthi duniadari ki chahat mein tere pyar ki maala tod di thi maine
apni bhul sudharne de maa mujhe wo pyar ki maala piro lene de

ik raat bhi soya nahi,doudta raha jhuthi khawahisho ke peeche
bahut thak chuka hoon maa,teri goud mein ek umar ki neend so lene de
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2012, 04:45:53 AM »
Bohut Khoob saudagar jee bohut umda  Bohut sachi, Bohut Achchi, bohut Bhawuk, Bohut Nazuk, Lajwab,Peshkash ,  Dheerrooon daaad qubool kijiye,   Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2012, 04:48:07 AM »
bhut hi umda.lajawab.......badhai ho.....
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2012, 05:20:18 AM »
waaaahhhh wwwwaaaahhh wwwaaaahhhh wwwaaaaahhh wwwwaaaaahhhh wwwwaaaaahhhhh
LAJWAAAAAAAAABBBBBB

BOHOOT KHOOB BOOHHOOT UMDAA bhai dil ko chu gayi
Applause Applause Applause Applause

dil se dua deta hun saudagar bhai yuun he likhte rahiye
LAJWAAB  LAAJWAAB
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2012, 05:44:49 AM »
Maa mujhe apne pyar bhari aanchal ki chaon mein kho lene de
bahut dard hai mere seene mein bahon mein teri ro lene de

dunia ke sang chalne ki khatir maine bahut paap kama liye
maa mere gunaho ko tere pyar ki gangaa mein dho lene de

ik umr tak chala hai bure khawabo ka silsila mere zehan mein
maa teri goud mein aakar mujhe meethe khawabo ke beej bo lene
 de

jhuthi duniadari ki chahat mein tere pyar ki maala tod di thi maine
apni bhul sudharne de maa mujhe wo pyar ki maala piro lene de

ik raat bhi soya nahi,doudta raha jhuthi khawahisho ke peeche
bahut thak chuka hoon maa,teri goud mein ek umar ki neend so lene de
Bahut umda bahut hi pyaare aur masoom se khyalaat rakhe hai aapne is nazm me Soudagar ji. bahut bahut mubaarak baad aur daad qabool kariye . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2012, 05:45:50 AM »
Very touching ! Waqai maa ke aanchal mein har gham door hone aur har
paap dhulne ka ehsaas hota hai.Bahut khoob likha hai.
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Sanjeev kash
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2012, 06:24:36 AM »
BAhut BAhut Khub Likha Hai Soudagar Ji Daad Qabool Karen Applause Applause Applause
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mkv
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2012, 07:03:51 AM »
Bahut khoob saudagar jee

got emotional.. very nice Applause Applause
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ripan dev
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2012, 07:18:54 AM »
bahut khub... maa ki goud mein to ek jannat hi basti hai....
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2012, 07:33:41 AM »
bahut hee dil ko chhoo lene waalee pesh kash hardik sadhuwaad
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2012, 08:38:01 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya aarish bhai aapka....
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2012, 08:38:55 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya aarish bhai aapka....
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«Reply #12 on: July 30, 2012, 10:29:47 AM »
Waah waah bahoot khoob bahoot achcha janab.
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«Reply #13 on: July 30, 2012, 10:45:22 AM »
bahut khoob Soudagar Ji, Maa ke aanchal mein hi to jannat hai, pehle sher mein agar "BAHOON" ki jagah par "Aanchal" ya "God" jaisa kuch ho to jyaada sukun dega, kyonki bahoon to aksar mehbooba ki liye istemaal hota hai, yeh meri soch hai,
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«Reply #14 on: July 30, 2012, 02:36:02 PM »
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooooob Saudagarji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Anmol Jazbaat..

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