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raat raat bhar jaagkar mujhe maa sulati thi
naye naye pakwan banakar mujhe maa khilati thi
jeth ki dopahari mein khud dhoop mein tapti thi
par mujh par apne aanchal ki chaon karati thi
meri shararat se tang hokar log shikayat karte the
mujhe masoom sabit karne ko dunia se lad jati thi
jab bhi main dar jaata raat ko ghor andhere se
sath hoon main tere yeh kehkar seene se lagati thi
bhul jaati thi kabhi kabhi khuda ki ibadat karna bhi
par mere maathe ko choom kar pyar jatana na bhulati thi
maa kehkar jab bhi gehnri neend mein bhi bulata tha
palbhar mein hee mere sirahane ke pass aa jaati thi
meri sari galtiyon ko bhi muskra kar bhula deti thi
baba ki daant ko bhi khud par hee jhel jaati thi
jab kabhi bhi baichani ke kaaran main sou nahi pata tha
mathe pe hath pher mujhe pariyon ki kahani sunati thi ab tere bin suna ghar lagta hai khamoshi si rehti hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2013, 12:49:21 AM » |
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raat raat bhar jaagkar mujhe maa sulati thi
naye naye pakwan banakar mujhe maa khilati thi
jeth ki dopahari mein khud dhoop mein tapti thi
par mujh par apne aanchal ki chaon karati thi
meri shararat se tang hokar log shikayat karte the
mujhe masoom sabit karne ko dunia se lad jati thi
jab bhi main dar jaata raat ko ghor andhere se
sath hoon main tere yeh kehkar seene se lagati thi
bhul jaati thi kabhi kabhi khuda ki ibadat karna bhi
par mere maathe ko choom kar pyar jatana na bhulati thi
maa kehkar jab bhi gehnri neend mein bhi bulata tha
palbhar mein hee mere sirahane ke pass aa jaati thi
meri sari galtiyon ko bhi muskra kar bhula deti thi
baba ki daant ko bhi khud par hee jhel jaati thi
jab kabhi bhi baichani ke kaaran main sou nahi pata tha
mathe pe hath pher mujhe pariyon ki kahani sunati thi ab tere bin suna ghar lagta hai khamoshi si rehti hai
MAA TU YAAD BAN AB HAR SHAAM MERI AAKHON SE BEHTI HAI gr888888888888888888888,sir |
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2013, 01:07:25 AM » |
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 fantastic..sachche kavi ya shaayr ki nishani hai ki sunne wala bhavvibhor ho jata hai.. maa k aachal ki chaaon ....maa ki r aadat har baat..dil k kareeb hoti hai apki poetry n seriously...maa ki yaad dila di ...  nice. shraddha.....
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2013, 01:15:48 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2013, 01:33:55 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya MB sir
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2013, 01:37:35 AM » |
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Maa se badi cheez kya Kabhi unse puchna jinki duniya me ab maa na ... Very well poem |
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2013, 01:49:45 AM » |
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waah! nice expressions dear! daad!
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2013, 04:24:13 AM » |
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bahut khoob ..........!ammi ka ehsaas har baccho ko hota hai |
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«Reply #10 on: August 06, 2013, 07:20:57 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2013, 09:18:34 AM » |
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shukriya shardha ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2013, 10:12:55 AM » |
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shukriya AB bhai
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«Reply #14 on: August 06, 2013, 10:28:11 AM » |
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beautiful.
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