~~~Maar daala...~~~

by vitasta on May 21, 2009, 02:31:08 PM
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ada-o-saadgi ke ghazab mel ne maar daala
suroor-e-mohabbat ke khel ne maar daala

tune kabhi is gali ka rukh na kara 'Noor'
khanjar nahi, tarkash-e-nazar maar daala

tilmila ke jo josh-e-ishq ne tamaashe kiye
dil karta kya, mujhe kambakht ne maar daala

jhuka ke sar pahunchi jo sajda karne tere dar
parastish mein doobe kaafiron ne maar daala

ab tak kyun nahi mari yahi socha na 'Noor?' mera
haunsla dekh maut ko farishton ne maar daala

'Viti' ko tadpaana achcha nahi, soch agar kabhi
phir pata chale use khwaish-e-'Noor' ne maar daala
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2009, 02:35:22 PM »
Quote from: vitasta on May 21, 2009, 02:31:08 PM
ada-o-saadgi ke ghazab mel ne maar daala
suroor-e-mohabbat ke khel ne maar daala

tune kabhi is gali ka rukh na kara 'Noor'
khanjar nahi, tarkash-e-nazar maar daala

tilmila ke jo josh-e-ishq ne tamaashe kiye
dil karta kya, mujhe kambakht ne maar daala

jhuka ke sar pahunchi jo sajda karne tere dar
parastish mein doobe kaafiron ne maar daala

ab tak kyun nahi mari yahi socha na 'Noor?' mera
haunsla dekh maut ko farishton ne maar daala

'Viti' ko tadpaana achcha nahi, soch agar kabhi
phir pata chale use khwaish-e-'Noor' ne maar daala



ahaaa. Nice again. (Ab Noor sb ka jawab aayega kya?  tongue3 )
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vitasta
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2009, 02:53:13 PM »
Quote from: Roja on May 21, 2009, 02:35:22 PM

ahaaa. Nice again. (Ab Noor sb ka jawab aayega kya?  tongue3 )
hehe, maybe Winking
thanks Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2009, 03:08:16 PM »
bahoot Khoob Vitasta. Keep writing..... Usual Smile
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vitasta
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2009, 03:09:19 PM »
sophi ji khoon to nahi kiya kisi ka abhi tak Winking just kidding Grin
thanks!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2009, 03:12:20 PM »
Ops... Spell Mistake.. I mean Bahoot Khoob Dear.Winking
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2009, 02:44:59 AM »
Nice one Viti
Keep writing...
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vitasta
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2009, 02:59:37 AM »
thanks angel!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2009, 05:55:41 AM »
very very nice vitasta ji. Applause
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vitasta
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«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2009, 06:07:22 AM »
thanks a lot madhuwesh ji Usual Smile
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