-----/// Maasoom mohabbat ki daastaan ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on September 11, 2013, 02:16:47 AM
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kaagaz  ki   kashti  thi   apni,  baarish   mein   pighal gayi
yeh un  kaa humar thaa, woh ladkhadaa ke sambhal gayi

kisi   ne   aag  aisaa   lagaayaa, ki   kuch  naa baaki rahaa
maasoom mohabbat   thi apni, woh sholon mein jal gayi

yeh  un kaa naseeb  thaa jo unhein farsh majboot milaa
chikni  to   yeh   zameen  thi, jo   pairon  tale  fisal  gayi

harpal unke haseen saath kaa dekhte rahe khwaab hum
thaam  ke  haath   kisi   aur kaa, muskuraa  ke nikal gayi

dil  mein  thodaa  dard  hai  bas, kuch  hare zakham hain
aansoo  ki  boondein  hain  kuch  jo aaj  ban ghazal gayi

kasoor  naa  kabhi  un  kaa thaa, naa kami hum mein thi
woh  to  kismat  thi  apni, jo   waqt  ke saath badal gayi


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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2013, 02:36:10 AM »
Waah-Waah Bahut Khoob
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 11, 2013, 02:16:47 AM


kaagaz  ki   kashti  thi   apni,  baarish   mein   pighal gayi
yeh un  kaa humar thaa, woh ladkhadaa ke sambhal gayi

kisi   ne   aag  aisaa   lagaayaa, ki   kuch  naa baaki rahaa
maasoom mohabbat   thi apni, woh sholon mein jal gayi

yeh  un kaa naseeb  thaa jo unhein farsh majboot milaa
chikni  to   yeh   zameen  thi, jo   pairon  tale  fisal  gayi

harpal unke haseen saath kaa dekhte rahe khwaab hum
thaam  ke  haath   kisi   aur kaa, muskuraa  ke nikal gayi

dil  mein  thodaa  dard  hai  bas, kuch  hare zakham hain
aansoo  ki  boondein  hain  kuch  jo aaj  ban ghazal gayi

kasoor  naa  kabhi  un  kaa thaa, naa kami hum mein thi
woh  to  kismat  thi  apni, jo   waqt  ke saath badal gayi


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Hriday Ji.
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2013, 08:30:17 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2013, 08:46:06 AM »
wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2013, 09:32:31 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob............ Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2013, 10:45:06 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2013, 01:34:14 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 11, 2013, 02:16:47 AM


kaagaz  ki   kashti  thi   apni,  baarish   mein   pighal gayi
yeh un  kaa humar thaa, woh ladkhadaa ke sambhal gayi
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kisi   ne   aag  aisaa   lagaayaa, ki   kuch  naa baaki rahaa
maasoom mohabbat   thi apni, woh sholon mein jal gayi
Clapping Smiley
Clapping Smiley

yeh  un kaa naseeb  thaa jo unhein farsh majboot milaa
chikni  to   yeh   zameen  thi, jo   pairon  tale  fisal  gayi
Clapping Smiley
Clapping Smiley

harpal unke haseen saath kaa dekhte rahe khwaab hum
thaam  ke  haath   kisi   aur kaa, muskuraa  ke nikal gayi
Clapping Smiley
Clapping Smiley

dil  mein  thodaa  dard  hai  bas, kuch  hare zakham hain
aansoo  ki  boondein  hain  kuch  jo aaj  ban ghazal gayi
Clapping Smiley
Clapping Smiley

kasoor  naa  kabhi  un  kaa thaa, naa kami hum mein thi
woh  to  kismat  thi  apni, jo   waqt  ke saath badal gayi
Clapping Smiley
Clapping Smiley



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waah waah hriday ji bohut khoob likha hai apne lajawaab
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2013, 03:09:43 PM »
harpal unke haseen saath kaa dekhte rahe khwaab hum
thaam  ke  haath   kisi   aur kaa, muskuraa  ke nikal gayi

Dard ke saath mazahiyapan bhi jhalak raha hai
bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2013, 03:10:50 PM »
khubsurat qalaam. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2013, 03:12:56 PM »
bahot achey, dheron daad, waaaah waah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2013, 08:43:26 PM »
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Waaaaaaah hriday ji.. kya kehne is khoob kalaam ke.. aur in ashaaron par to main jaise fida ho gayi.. behad khooooob... hazaron hazaron dili daad..


harpal unke haseen saath kaa dekhte rahe khwaab hum
thaam  ke  haath   kisi   aur kaa, muskuraa  ke nikal gayi

dil  mein  thodaa  dard  hai  bas, kuch  hare zakham hain
aansoo  ki  boondein  hain  kuch  jo aaj  ban ghazal gayi

kasoor  naa  kabhi  un  kaa thaa, naa kami hum mein thi
woh  to  kismat  thi  apni, jo   waqt  ke saath badal gayi
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2013, 01:51:51 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Ravi ji.....!!!

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Waah-Waah Bahut Khoob Hriday Ji.
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«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2014, 02:54:37 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sabhi kaa jo aapne ise waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaaa....!!!
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