»--(¯`v´¯)--»Aansoo»--(¯`v´¯)--»

by imsujal on June 11, 2006, 08:47:15 PM
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 :cry: Aansoo bahe jo aankh se
to dil bhi toot kar bikhar gaya
Socha k ab ise sumate loon
to daaman hi chota per gaya :cry:
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ZindagiKhhoGai
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2006, 11:29:18 PM »
yE ansoo baresh ki ene ssee bounde nae hein yEaansoo anmol moutee nae hein ye ansoo sirf ppaane nae hein aankhou se ye aanso aap ki yaad ban kar behte hein
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ZindagiKhhoGai
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2006, 11:30:42 PM »
yE ansoo baresh ki ene ssee bounde nae hein yEaansoo anmol moutee nae hein ye ansoo sirf ppaane nae hein aankhou se ye aanso aap ki yaad ban kar behte hein
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2006, 11:32:29 PM »
yE ansoo baresh ki ene ssee bounde nae hein yEaansoo anmol moutee nae hein ye ansoo sirf ppaane nae hein aankhou se ye aanso aap ki yaad ban kar behte hein
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2006, 11:34:58 PM »
yE ansoo baresh ki ene ssee bounde nae hein yEaansoo anmol moutee nae hein ye ansoo sirf ppaane nae hein aankhou se ye aanso aap ki yaad ban kar behte hein
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imsujal
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2006, 06:44:18 PM »
Thnks for your compliments ZKG.

Kabhi kisi se Zikr-e-Judai na Kerna
Is Dil se kabhi ruswai na kerna
Jab dil uth jaye humse to bata dena
kabhi beghair bataye bewafai na kerna[/quote]
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2006, 05:07:50 AM »
Nice job ALl...
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imsujal
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2006, 10:52:03 AM »
Mujse mat pooch ki kyun aankh jhuka li maine,
teri tasveer thi jo tujhse chupa li maine,
jis pe likha tha ki tu mere muqaddar mein nahi,
apne maathe ki woh tehreer mita li meine,

har janm sabko yahaan sachha pyaar kahaan milta hai,
teri chaahat mein to umr bita li meine,
mujhko jaane kahaan ehsaas mere le jaayein,
waqt ke haathon se ek nazm utha li meine,

ghere rehti hai mujhe ek anokhi khushbu,
teri yaadon se har ek saans saja li meine,
jiske sheron ko woh sunke bahut roya tha,
bas wohi ek ghazal sabse chupa li meine.
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imsujal
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2006, 09:52:30 PM »
Har shaks ek naya ghum liye baitha hai
Koi zaada toh koi kum liye baitha hai
Dekhna yeh hai k kon hans k jeeta hai
Ro k jee lena to har kisi ko aata hai
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2006, 12:21:04 AM »
Bohat khoob Sujal.....
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imsujal
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2006, 12:45:46 PM »
Thnks 4 ur appreciation Mr Aryaan...............

Ghum itna mila k hans k pee gaye
khushi thodi si mili to mila k pee gaye
Yun to na thi janam se peene ki aadat
Sharab ko tanha paya to taras kha k pee gaye
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imsujal
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2006, 08:31:04 PM »
Unho ne dekha aur aansoo gir pade
bhari mehfil mein jaise moti bikher pade
dukh yeh nahi k unho ne humein alvida kaha
dukh to yeh hai k uske baad fir woh bhi ro pade
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2006, 07:03:30 PM »
Bohat khoob Sujal...

Yeh jo meri aankhon mein aansoo hain teri yaad ke hain
Warna aaj se pehle main kabhi roya tau na tha...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2006, 07:06:58 PM »

Aasuu saj jaatey hai baar baar yu aankhon par,
Dhalak jaatey hai phir chupkey sey galon par....
Khona inko humey bahut mehga padega soch tey hai yeh...
Is liye Hum sahej letey hai inko takiye mey chupa kar...
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imsujal
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«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2006, 08:16:13 PM »
Well said Aryaan and Shikha..............its good

Baad marne k mere tum jo kahani likhna
kaise barbaad hui meri zindagani likhna
Yeh bhi likhna k mere honth hansi ko tarse
Umr bhar aankh se behta raha paani likhna
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