mai bhul nahi pata

by bekarar on December 02, 2008, 01:33:40 PM
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Aashna dil ka mera hi, gumon se aabad kyun hai
Mai bhool kyun nahi paata, mujhe sab yaad kyun hai

Mujhe aadat hai tere tanz se zakhmon ko sajane ki
Ab  marham-e-muskaan ke, Ye inamaat kyun hai,

Ye tay tha, Na tu mile mujhse, na mai tujhe yaad karun
Fir khwabon me tumse roj ye mulakaat kyun hai

Kuch soch ke banaya tha, Sehra me aashiyan
Yahan bhi mere khudaya, ye barsaat kyun hai,

Tum saath thi to, jo rahte the khafa-khafa mujhse,
Tere jaane ke baad wahi log mere saath kyun hai,

Har baar yun lagta hai ke lout ke aaogey tum fir-se,
tere bare me mere ye, jhuthe Khayalaat kyun hai,

wo kounsi majbooriyan thi, ki tune mujhe choda
sar-e-aam bewafai ke baad bhi, mere zahan me ye Sawalat kyun hai,

tumhaari baaten, mulakaten, shikwe, sitam, bewafai
mai bhool kun nahi paata, mujhe sab yaad kyun hai
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2008, 02:02:20 PM »
"Aah" pe "Waah" nahin karni chahiye..

Lekin itni khoobsurti se koi dard ka bayaan karey, toh uske andaaz-e-bayaan pe "Waah" kiye bina nahin raha jaata...

Bahut umda peshkash hai Sanjeev Ji.. Har ek sheir apne aap mein gazal jaisi khoobsurti samete hai..
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2008, 02:09:56 PM »
Bohat bohat khoobsurat kalam Sanjeev har sher me tumne ek naya pehlu bayaan kiya hain Terrific  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Itne khoobsurat kalam ke aage darta hu
Koi yeh na pooch bhaithe ghayel ne likha to likha q hain
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2008, 02:30:43 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on December 02, 2008, 01:33:40 PM
Aashna dil ka mera hi, gumon se aabad kyun hai
Mai bhool kyun nahi paata, mujhe sab yaad kyun hai

Mujhe aadat hai tere tanz se zakhmon ko sajane ki
Ab  marham-e-muskaan ke, Ye inamaat kyun hai,

Ye tay tha, Na tu mile mujhse, na mai tujhe yaad karun
Fir khwabon me tumse roj ye mulakaat kyun hai

Kuch soch ke banaya tha, Sehra me aashiyan
Yahan bhi mere khudaya, ye barsaat kyun hai,

Tum saath thi to, jo rahte the khafa-khafa mujhse,
Tere jaane ke baad wahi log mere saath kyun hai,

Har baar yun lagta hai ke lout ke aaogey tum fir-se,
tere bare me mere ye, jhuthe Khayalaat kyun hai,

wo kounsi majbooriyan thi, ki tune mujhe choda
sar-e-aam bewafai ke baad bhi, mere zahan me ye Sawalat kyun hai,

tumhaari baaten, mulakaten, shikwe, sitam, bewafai
mai bhool kun nahi paata, mujhe sab yaad kyun hai


Waah Mere Bhai,.
Kitni Khubsurat Nazm Likhi Hai,.
Nice One Bhai Once Again,.
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2008, 02:32:08 PM »
Us Bewafaa Ke Shehar Mein Jaakar Maine Ye Dekha,.
Dil Me Zakham Haaton Mein Patthar Tayyaar The,.

Shayad Ye Bewaafa Bhi Mere Dost Kisi Waqt Wafaadaar The,.

_______________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2008, 03:00:47 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on December 02, 2008, 02:02:20 PM
"Aah" pe "Waah" nahin karni chahiye..

Lekin itni khoobsurti se koi dard ka bayaan karey, toh uske andaaz-e-bayaan pe "Waah" kiye bina nahin raha jaata...

Bahut umda peshkash hai Sanjeev Ji.. Har ek sheir apne aap mein gazal jaisi khoobsurti samete hai..

bahoot shukriya shikha....aap bhi do sher likh detin dard-e-bewafai me bhi kuch wafa najar aati

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 02, 2008, 02:09:56 PM
Bohat bohat khoobsurat kalam Sanjeev har sher me tumne ek naya pehlu bayaan kiya hain Terrific  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Itne khoobsurat kalam ke aage darta hu
Koi yeh na pooch bhaithe ghayel ne likha to likha q hain

zarre ko aftab banana to koi aapse sikhe...sajid miyan
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 02, 2008, 02:30:43 PM
Waah Mere Bhai,.
Kitni Khubsurat Nazm Likhi Hai,.
Nice One Bhai Once Again,.

shukriya azeem  Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2008, 03:03:43 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 02, 2008, 02:32:08 PM
Us Bewafaa Ke Shehar Mein Jaakar Maine Ye Dekha,.
Dil Me Zakham Haaton Mein Patthar Tayyaar The,.

Shayad Ye Bewaafa Bhi Mere Dost Kisi Waqt Wafaadaar The,.

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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2008, 03:09:42 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on December 02, 2008, 03:03:43 PM
bahoot khoob azeem

Shukriya,.
Bekarar Ji,.
Silsila Aage Badhaao,.
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