mai chahta bhi yahi tha vo bewafa niklay

by anmolkhan on August 27, 2008, 10:32:09 PM
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anmolkhan
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main chaahataa bhii yahii thaa vo bevafaa nikale
use samajhane kaa koi to sil_silaa nikale

kitaab-e-maazii ke auraaq ulat ke dekh zaraa
na jaane kaun saa safaah mura huaa nikale

jo dekhane main bahut hi qariib lagataa hai
usi ke baare me.n socho to faasalaa nikale

(NM)
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2008, 12:11:13 AM »
main chaahataa bhii yahii thaa vo bevafaa nikale
use samajhane kaa koi to sil_silaa nikale

kitaab-e-maazii ke auraaq ulat ke dekh zaraa
na jaane kaun saa safaah mura huaa nikale

jo dekhane main bahut hi qariib lagataa hai
usi ke baare me.n socho to faasalaa nikale

Very good lines

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syednaami
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2008, 02:37:55 AM »
Anmol jee, very beautiful work, keep going.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2008, 03:53:24 AM »
NICE SHARING
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gulzargul
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2008, 07:37:46 AM »
anmol anmol ji

gulzar
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R-U-Sudha
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2008, 10:59:57 AM »
main chaahataa bhii yahii thaa vo bevafaa nikale
use samajhane kaa koi to sil_silaa nikale


kitaab-e-maazii ke auraaq ulat ke dekh zaraa
na jaane kaun saa safaah mura huaa nikale

jo dekhane main bahut hi qariib lagataa hai
usi ke baare me.n socho to faasalaa nikale

(NM)

Anmol ji, aap ne yeh kya suna diya mujhe to aaina dikha diya.
Yun samjhiye ki lal rang mein pehli line main hun aur dusri line mere dil ki dharkan, jis ne bahot samjhaya par jab hum samjhe to woh kahin duur chali gayi.  tearyeyed

kash ki main deta javab uske savalon ke,
kitni tarpi hogi woh mujhe chup dekh ke.
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2008, 12:40:26 PM »
main chaahataa bhii yahii thaa vo bevafaa nikale
use samajhane kaa koi to sil_silaa nikale

kitaab-e-maazii ke auraaq ulat ke dekh zaraa
na jaane kaun saa safaah mura huaa nikale

jo dekhane main bahut hi qariib lagataa hai
usi ke baare me.n socho to faasalaa nikale

(NM)

Nice Sharing.
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