mai duur khada !!!

by sarfira on April 03, 2012, 06:41:54 PM
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wo meri aankhon se nindeN churaata raha
mai duur khada muskuraata raha--

bebas meri aansuoN par thahaake lagte rahe
mai naadaan gidgidaata raha--
dastoor jahaN ka samjh na paaya
mai hardum thokareN khaata raha--

chaa gaya hai maatam sa !uski! ik kharocnh se
mai khud apne zakhm sehlaata raha--

behkaati rahi mujhe meri soch hi
mai dil lagaane ki saza !laakh! magar paata raha--
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2012, 06:43:52 PM »
maaar daalaaaa.... bahut bahut khoob janaab... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2012, 06:44:43 PM »
Khub..!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2012, 07:03:06 PM »
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Sarfira ji... Bahoot Khoob!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2012, 07:13:29 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 03, 2012, 06:43:52 PM
maaar daalaaaa.... bahut bahut khoob janaab... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
wo asal me avi me kisi se mob pr msg chat kr rha tha to achank se dil dardila ho utha--fir yhan ye likh gya tongue3
sarahne ka sukriya !
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2012, 07:55:45 PM »
Quote from: sarfira on April 03, 2012, 06:41:54 PM
wo meri aankhon se nindeN churaata raha
mai duur khada muskuraata raha--
ye mumkin to nahin per aapke saath kaisa bhi hadsa ho sakta hai aap bahut anokhe ho Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
bebas meri aansuoN par thahaake lagte rahe
mai naadaan gidgidaata raha--
bahut khoob.......! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
dastoor jahaN ka samjh na paaya
mai hardum thokareN khaata raha--
kya mataa-pitaa se kuch nahin haasil kiya Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
chaa gaya hai maatam sa !uski! ik kharocnh se
mai khud apne zakhm sehlaata raha--
acha kharoch se maatam chhaa jataa hai pahli baar pataa chala icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek
behkaati rahi mujhe meri soch hi
mai dil lagaane ki saza !laakh! magar paata raha--
sarfira ji kabhi kabhi dimaag bhi chalaana chchiye ,zaruri hai drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie


acha likha hai.................!
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2012, 11:59:23 PM »
Bhoot khoob.
Jis andaaz me aapne kalam pesh kiya h uski jitni tareef ki jaye kam h.
Daad daad daad
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2012, 03:53:03 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob sarfira bhai
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2012, 05:34:50 AM »
waaaah waaah ji shishya ji...kamaaal ji kamaaal ka likh diya.....Usual Smile..ye smiley ni htnevala...Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2012, 09:01:01 AM »
bahut khoob  sarfiraji.bahut purlutf magar khatarnaak peshkash hai.Khade khade kyun sote hain,jo wo neendein chura lein. Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2012, 11:48:52 AM »
Quote from: sarfira on April 03, 2012, 06:41:54 PM
wo meri aankhon se nindeN churaata raha
mai duur khada muskuraata raha--

bebas meri aansuoN par thahaake lagte rahe
mai naadaan gidgidaata raha--
dastoor jahaN ka samjh na paaya
mai hardum thokareN khaata raha--

chaa gaya hai maatam sa !uski! ik kharocnh se
mai khud apne zakhm sehlaata raha--

behkaati rahi mujhe meri soch hi
mai dil lagaane ki saza !laakh! magar paata raha--




Bahut Khooooooob S.f ji..

Gehre Khayalaat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2012, 03:55:22 PM »
 Applause :clap:bahut khub
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2012, 06:14:42 PM »
Quote from: Gyan Prakash on April 03, 2012, 06:44:43 PM
Khub..!!
thanx dear
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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2012, 06:49:11 AM »
bahut achhe
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