mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

by Pooja on August 27, 2004, 03:30:54 AM

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Pooja

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«Reply #45 on: August 08, 2007, 02:02:36 PM »

bahoot bahoot shukaria Vicky ji, BAHOOT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI APNE!!

Rooh milati hai rooh se
man bekarar rahta hai

Hatho ko, khalta hai khalipan
Ek adhurepan ka ahsaas rahta hai

Door talak sooni raah
Dil ko intzaar rahta hai

Mar jaata hai insaan, magar
Payar to payar hi rahta hai!!!


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mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #46 on: August 08, 2007, 02:47:00 PM »

Kya Baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Aaj Hum Bhi Chale aaye Aapko dekh kar Dard me.. !! Usual Smile

Bahut accha Likha Hai aapne.. !! Bahut Khooooooob.. !

Yun Pyaar Ki Duhaai Dekar, Chahat Ko Meri Ruswa Na Karo,
Intzaar Ko Adhurepan ka Naam dekhar, Sharminda Na Karo......

Mohabbat To Naam Hi Hai, Kuch Pane Ka Kuch Khone Ka,
KhaaliPan Me BhiE-Dilbar Tum, Ehasaas Mera Paaya karo.....!!!!!


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mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #47 on: August 08, 2007, 03:04:55 PM »

thank u vicky ji...nice one as well...didi...well done!! :D


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mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #48 on: August 15, 2007, 03:27:06 AM »

you are very welcome meena kurriye.....

bahoot khoob vicky ji...

Ahsaas hai hai aor kuch pass nahi
Rota hai dil, sujhati koi raah nahi
Juda ho gaye raste na jaan kab kaha
Tanhai hai ajj pass mere, aor koi baat nahi


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Re: mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #49 on: January 18, 2009, 10:03:05 AM »

Quote from: waheed_rose2004 on August 27, 2004, 05:58:54 AM

good one pooja.............................

Ye Khush Nazri Khush Nazar Aanay Ke Liyeh Hai
Under Ki Udassi Ko Chupanay Ke Liye Hai
Tujh Ko Nahi Maloom Magar Main Jan Chuka Hoon
Too Sath Fakat Sath Nibhanay Ke Liye Hai
Is Rah Pay Ek Umer Guzar Aaye To Dekha
Ye Rah Sirf Laut Ke Janay Ke Liye Hai.

aise loute ho ki ab koi pukar sunai na de
koi dost kisi dost ko aise tanhaai na de
kaha jakar bulaye tujhe e- mere dost
kisi adalat main koi aise reehai na de


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Re: mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #50 on: January 18, 2009, 10:39:47 AM »

bahoot dard bhari hai ye chaar lines


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Re: mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #51 on: January 18, 2009, 10:40:35 AM »

Quote from: waheed_rose2004 on August 28, 2004, 08:58:30 AM

Nice one pooja....................

Na Mujhse Saare Bandhan Na Saare Rishte Tor Ker Jao
Khuda Ke Waaste Kuch Dosti Ka Silsila Rakho

dost ko chorr kar tum he chale gaye waheed
Pooja to ab khud ko samjhaye, yaadon ka he silsila rakho


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Re: mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #52 on: January 18, 2009, 10:44:32 AM »

Quote from: waheed_rose2004 on August 29, 2004, 04:21:20 PM

Mundair Par Chiraagh Rakh Detey Hen Khud Jalayega
Voh Aane Walaa Shuks Jaane Kis Taraf Se Aayega.

anne wala ayega, jaane wala kidher gaya
jidher bhi di awaaz, her rasta tanha gaya


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Re: mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #53 on: January 18, 2009, 10:50:58 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 27, 2004, 03:30:54 AM

mere khayalo mai ajj bhi tum jinda ho
meri sanso mai ajj bhi mahak hai tumhari
mai kaise maan jau ki tum zinda nahi....

Tumhari ankhy ajj bhi meri dharkano mai dharkati hai
tumhaare galo ka dimple ajj bhi mere lubo per muskurata hai
mai kaise maan jau ki tum zinda nahi

tumhari shararty ajj bhi, muje khayalo mai chokanti hai
ajj bhi tumhaare naam se man sharmata hai
mai kaise maan jau ki tum zinda nahi......


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Re: mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #54 on: January 18, 2009, 12:08:59 PM »

shukaria bekarar ji.

Apne waise koi comments nahi likhe..


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Re: mai kaise maan jau ki tum jinda nahi

«Reply #55 on: January 18, 2009, 12:11:37 PM »

meri ek adhuri kavita ko poora kar-ke yahan post karna chah raha tha lekin lagta hai ki jaise un bhawnaon ko shabdon me dhal pana filhaal mumkin nahi ho paa raha ...jaise hi ban paya kuch is thread ko samarpit kar dunga