Mai Kitni Akeli Thi.......Suman

by suman59 on January 03, 2014, 04:41:35 AM
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Mai Kitni Akeli Thi

Mushkil dagar anjaan raasta, mai kitni akeli thi,
Na tha koi fikar karne wala, na sath koi saheli thi.

Yu to dil me hausla tha, Phir bhi lena kathin faisla tha,
Kaise bachu mai is zamane se, jiski niyat kitni maili thi.

Parwah na thi kisi ko mere sapno ki, bojh ban gayi mai apno ki,
Dil me daba reh gaya pyar aur kisi gair ki mehandi se saji hatheli thi.

Aasuno ko wo palko tak safar, her mod par bas darr hi darr,
Kuchal diya gaya mujhko kyu jabki mai to komal phool chameli thi.

Baccho ko kitna dular kiya, ro rokar bhi unko pyar diya,
Wafa ki gustakhi dohrane wali mai hi pagal ajab albeli thi.

Maine to sabki kadr ki, gam sehkar bhi sada fikar ki,
Par kyu koi na samajh paya mujhko jaise mai koyi paheli thi.

Mushkil dagar anjaan raasta, mai kitni akeli thi,
Na tha koyi fikar karne wala, na sath koyi saheli thi.
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2014, 08:31:21 AM »
main ek rau tumhaare saath kar detaa hoon
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2014, 10:40:20 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on January 03, 2014, 04:41:35 AM
Mai Kitni Akeli Thi

Mushkil dagar anjaan raasta, mai kitni akeli thi,
Na tha koi fikar karne wala, na sath koi saheli thi.

Yu to dil me hausla tha, Phir bhi lena kathin faisla tha,
Kaise bachu mai is zamane se, jiski niyat kitni maili thi.

Parwah na thi kisi ko mere sapno ki, bojh ban gayi mai apno ki,
Dil me daba reh gaya pyar aur kisi gair ki mehandi se saji hatheli thi.

Aasuno ko wo palko tak safar, her mod par bas darr hi darr,
Kuchal diya gaya mujhko kyu jabki mai to komal phool chameli thi.

Baccho ko kitna dular kiya, ro rokar bhi unko pyar diya,
Wafa ki gustakhi dohrane wali mai hi pagal ajab albeli thi.

Maine to sabki kadr ki, gam sehkar bhi sada fikar ki,
Par kyu koi na samajh paya mujhko jaise mai koyi paheli thi.

Mushkil dagar anjaan raasta, mai kitni akeli thi,
Na tha koyi fikar karne wala, na sath koyi saheli thi.


wah wah wah suman ji nahut khoob ek naya andaaz dekhne ko mila icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2014, 11:25:15 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on January 03, 2014, 04:41:35 AM
Mai Kitni Akeli Thi

Mushkil dagar anjaan raasta, mai kitni akeli thi,
Na tha koi fikar karne wala, na sath koi saheli thi.

Yu to dil me hausla tha, Phir bhi lena kathin faisla tha,
Kaise bachu mai is zamane se, jiski niyat kitni maili thi.

Parwah na thi kisi ko mere sapno ki, bojh ban gayi mai apno ki,
Dil me daba reh gaya pyar aur kisi gair ki mehandi se saji hatheli thi.

Aasuno ko wo palko tak safar, her mod par bas darr hi darr,
Kuchal diya gaya mujhko kyu jabki mai to komal phool chameli thi.

Baccho ko kitna dular kiya, ro rokar bhi unko pyar diya,
Wafa ki gustakhi dohrane wali mai hi pagal ajab albeli thi.

Maine to sabki kadr ki, gam sehkar bhi sada fikar ki,
Par kyu koi na samajh paya mujhko jaise mai koyi paheli thi.

Mushkil dagar anjaan raasta, mai kitni akeli thi,
Na tha koyi fikar karne wala, na sath koyi saheli thi.
Wha wha bhut khub suman ma'am
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2014, 11:57:32 AM »
Beautiful,bahut  khooooob.Sumanji,is peshkash per dil se daad aur mubarakbad.
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2014, 12:53:01 PM »
Bahot khoob suman ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2014, 03:08:38 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2014, 03:21:19 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2014, 03:36:53 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah suman ji..

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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2014, 06:32:23 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on January 03, 2014, 04:41:35 AM
Mai Kitni Akeli Thi

Mushkil dagar anjaan raasta, mai kitni akeli thi,
Na tha koi fikar karne wala, na sath koi saheli thi.

Yu to dil me hausla tha, Phir bhi lena kathin faisla tha,
Kaise bachu mai is zamane se, jiski niyat kitni maili thi.

Parwah na thi kisi ko mere sapno ki, bojh ban gayi mai apno ki,
Dil me daba reh gaya pyar aur kisi gair ki mehandi se saji hatheli thi.

Aasuno ko wo palko tak safar, her mod par bas darr hi darr,
Kuchal diya gaya mujhko kyu jabki mai to komal phool chameli thi.

Baccho ko kitna dular kiya, ro rokar bhi unko pyar diya,
Wafa ki gustakhi dohrane wali mai hi pagal ajab albeli thi.

Maine to sabki kadr ki, gam sehkar bhi sada fikar ki,
Par kyu koi na samajh paya mujhko jaise mai koyi paheli thi.

Mushkil dagar anjaan raasta, mai kitni akeli thi,
Na tha koyi fikar karne wala, na sath koyi saheli thi.


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«Reply #10 on: January 03, 2014, 07:43:43 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah suman ji... kaafi achchi peshkash rahi... seedhe dil ko chhoo gayi... dheron dheron daaaaaaad qubool kijiyega...
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«Reply #11 on: January 03, 2014, 08:45:19 PM »
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tahe dil se bahut saaari daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2014, 04:27:54 AM »
Wah Kya Kehne.
Kitni Khubsoorti Se Haal e Dil Ko
Lafzon Mein Piroya Hai Aapne
Bahut Khub Suman Jee Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2014, 02:31:54 PM »
Bahut  khoob  Suman  ji,really  touched   .

Maine  toh  sabki  ki  kadar  ki 
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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2014, 03:45:32 PM »
Thank you very much to all.

Saini sb., siddique sb, samir dilse ji, jeet ji, amit ji,
touhid ji, qalb ji, ashq , shihab ji, madhuwesh ji...
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