Maikhana is back

by niraj_191 on July 02, 2006, 06:29:00 PM
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Aakhri sanse chal rahi hai meri maikhane me
ek aarozoo deedar ki baki hai tere deewane me
tujhe nahi aana to ek botal bhej maikhane me
kyun ki chehra nazar aata hai tera mujhe har paimane me
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2006, 07:31:44 PM »
paimane ko shambhaliye k kahin yeh chalak na jaye...
dil ko thamiye k kahin yeh behek na jaye...
nazre jhukaye baithe hain paimane ki orr...
uthaiye inhe k kahin hasin pal paimane main hi guzar na jaye...!


gud work niraj ji...humne isse pehle paimane pe nahi likha aaj ek nakam khoshish ki hai...!
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2006, 02:44:20 AM »
bahut khub Roshni , Niraj ........

hamne khud piamana haath bada ke uthaya  hai
apni is payaas ko khud  hi apni trishna banaya hai
woh payala zeher bhi thaa aur amrit bhi mere liye
 har paimane mein mujhe akas sanam  ka hi nazar aaya hai
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Shikha12
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2006, 04:42:06 AM »
Very nice work...Niraj, Roshni and Ranjana

 =D>  =D>  =D>
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Meena is back
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2006, 09:49:20 AM »
very nice everyone...

apna ek alag sa jahan basaya hai paimane me,
duniya se chura ke chera uska sajaya hai paimane me,
roko na mujhe, ke nashe me aaj jeena ai humne,
dard ki aag ko humne bujaya hai paimane me!
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2006, 04:39:05 PM »
nice one ..........

ek shama jo jal rahi hai usko jalne do abhi
mere sabar ke paymaane ko chalkane do abhi
badh rahi hai jo bekhudi usko aur badne do abhi
woh azama rahe hai meri dosti ko unko azamane do abhi
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2006, 09:12:21 AM »
shukriya and nice one as well!

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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2006, 08:36:51 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Dost Sabne Bahoot Acha Likha Hai,..

Sharaab Dard Ki Dawaa Hai Peene Se Kharaabi Nahi,..
Dil Ke Dard Se Peete Hain Waise Hum Sharaabi Nahi,..

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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2006, 08:09:26 PM »
Quote from: "roshni246"
paimane ko shambhaliye k kahin yeh chalak na jaye...
dil ko thamiye k kahin yeh behek na jaye...
nazre jhukaye baithe hain paimane ki orr...
uthaiye inhe k kahin hasin pal paimane main hi guzar na jaye...!


gud work niraj ji...humne isse pehle paimane pe nahi likha aaj ek nakam khoshish ki hai...!


aapki koshish kamiyab rahi...

mere bajae paimane ki parva hai  mere yar ko
dil thamne ka kehte hai thukrake mere pyar ko
nazar paimane pe hai sirf tere deedar ko
is paimane ne hi diye hai haseen pal tere beemar ko
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2006, 08:14:19 PM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
bahut khub Roshni , Niraj ........

hamne khud piamana haath bada ke uthaya  hai
apni is payaas ko khud  hi apni trishna banaya hai
woh payala zeher bhi thaa aur amrit bhi mere liye
 har paimane mein mujhe akas sanam  ka hi nazar aaya hai


thx ranjana.. and nice words!!!

aaj mere khuda ne mujhpar gajab ka kaher dhaya hai
yad ne meri aaj unhe paimana pilaya hai
ab to hamne sharab ko bhi bewafa batlaya hai
kyonki usne mujhe unka aur ushe mere chehra dikhlaya hai
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2006, 08:25:26 PM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
nice one ..........

ek shama jo jal rahi hai usko jalne do abhi
mere sabar ke paymaane ko chalkane do abhi
badh rahi hai jo bekhudi usko aur badne do abhi
woh azama rahe hai meri dosti ko unko azamane do abhi


hum kabhi doston ki ajmaish nahi karte
sharab penewale kabhi sajish nahi karete
tute hue paimane sharab ki bandish nahi karte
jo badnam ho unhe badnam karne ki koshish nahi karte
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2006, 08:32:05 PM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
very nice everyone...

apna ek alag sa jahan basaya hai paimane me,
duniya se chura ke chera uska sajaya hai paimane me,
roko na mujhe, ke nashe me aaj jeena ai humne,
dard ki aag ko humne bujaya hai paimane me!


nice...

paimane ne humko aaj tarsaya hai
lagata hai usne mere mehboob ki aag ko bujaya hai
mudato ke bad qayamat ka din aaya hai
mohabat pe bhi aaj sharab ka nasha chhaya hai
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«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2006, 04:15:40 AM »
Quote from: "niraj_191"
Quote from: "ranjana"
nice one ..........

ek shama jo jal rahi hai usko jalne do abhi
mere sabar ke paymaane ko chalkane do abhi
badh rahi hai jo bekhudi usko aur badne do abhi
woh azama rahe hai meri dosti ko unko azamane do abhi


hum kabhi doston ki ajmaish nahi karte
sharab penewale kabhi sajish nahi karete
tute hue paimane sharab ki bandish nahi karte
jo badnam ho unhe badnam karne ki koshish nahi karte


shukriya........bahut khoob niraj..............

ek baar jo pee liya unki nazaro se hamne
toh ilzaam hum per rusawai ka laga
abhi paimaana chalka bhi na thaa jaam se
ki zamaana hamko badnaam karne laga
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2006, 10:35:39 AM »
Nice One Niraj And Ranjana Lage raho,..
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«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2006, 07:13:07 PM »
Quote from: "ranjana"


shukriya........bahut khoob niraj..............

ek baar jo pee liya unki nazaro se hamne
toh ilzaam hum per rusawai ka laga
abhi paimaana chalka bhi na thaa jaam se
ki zamaana hamko badnaam karne laga


hey ranjana i m impressed..... ultimate writing!!!! and thx janseen..

zuka mat nazrein e dil jalane wale
marjayege teri aankho se peene wale
hum aaj maikhane me sari jindgi jeene wale
nazar aate hai mujhe sharab ke bhare pyale
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