Main Akela

by klaskar on March 22, 2010, 10:08:49 PM
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ab mujhe na dard hai,
na yaadon me aati hai koi,
ab mujhe na pyaar hai,
na dil me rehti hai koi,
aaj panchhi hoon main azaad,
na saath mere hai koi,
aasmaan saara hai mera,
na aaj bandhan hai koi...

aaj udta hoon akela,
pankh faila ke gagan me,
aaj gaata hoon akela,
na sang mere gaata hai koi,
hasta bhi hoon main akela,
rota bhi hoon main akela,
aaj main hoon apne dhun me,
na mujhe rokta hai koi...

sochta hoon main kabhi ye,
kaash hoti mere sang tu,
pyaar thi meri hamesha ,
par le gaya tujhko koi,
main akela hoon to kya hai,
hota hai kiska koi,
aaye the is jahaan me akele,
na saath jayega koi...
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2010, 04:34:39 AM »
Good one Klashkar Ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2010, 04:44:39 AM »
klaShkar saaHeb:

namaste!

umdaah KhayaaloN ko peSh kartu hu'ii aapki yeh rachanaa Khoob rahiiN!

liKhate raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN..!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2010, 04:50:29 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Klaskar ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2010, 06:09:09 AM »
Bahut khoob Kapil ji. Badi achhi poem hai.
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2010, 12:59:48 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh Ji... !!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on March 23, 2010, 04:34:39 AM
Good one Klashkar Ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2010, 01:08:36 PM »
Bahut bahut dhanyawaad aapka Riyaz Ji jo aapne hamare kavita ko pasand kiya...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on March 23, 2010, 06:09:09 AM
Bahut khoob Kapil ji. Badi achhi poem hai.
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2010, 01:12:07 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB KLASKARJI. icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
AAPNE SACH BAYAAN KIYA.BAHUT HI UMDA .
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2010, 01:59:31 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya aapka Madhuwesh ji....achcha laga jaanke ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi...  koshish karte hain hum kabhi kabhi apne ehsaas ko shabdo me utaarne ki...

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 23, 2010, 04:50:29 AM
Bahut bahut khoob Klaskar ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2010, 02:02:01 PM »
Dhanyawaad Suresh Ji...!!!

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 23, 2010, 01:12:07 PM
BAHUT KHOOB KLASKARJI. icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
AAPNE SACH BAYAAN KIYA.BAHUT HI UMDA .
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2010, 02:05:44 PM »
Namaste Dhaval Ji,

Aap agar isi tarah keri kavitaon ko pasand karte rahenge to sach kehte hain hum bhi likhte rahenge. Khush rahenge. Apna khayal bhi rakhenge.

Aur duwa karenge ki hamesha aap bhi muskuraate rahe. Aur apna khayal rakhen.

Aapka
KLaskar

Quote from: Dhaval on March 23, 2010, 04:44:39 AM
klaShkar saaHeb:

namaste!

umdaah KhayaaloN ko peSh kartu hu'ii aapki yeh rachanaa Khoob rahiiN!

liKhate raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN..!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2010, 02:20:45 PM »
Bahut Khubbb
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2010, 02:27:20 PM »
Dhanyawaad ashued...!!!

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