Yoindia Shayariadab - Promoting Poetry.

Main Akela

by klaskar on March 22, 2010, 10:08:49 PM

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: Main Akela

Pages: [1]

Author

(Read 4063 times)

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

ab mujhe na dard hai,
na yaadon me aati hai koi,
ab mujhe na pyaar hai,
na dil me rehti hai koi,
aaj panchhi hoon main azaad,
na saath mere hai koi,
aasmaan saara hai mera,
na aaj bandhan hai koi...

aaj udta hoon akela,
pankh faila ke gagan me,
aaj gaata hoon akela,
na sang mere gaata hai koi,
hasta bhi hoon main akela,
rota bhi hoon main akela,
aaj main hoon apne dhun me,
na mujhe rokta hai koi...

sochta hoon main kabhi ye,
kaash hoti mere sang tu,
pyaar thi meri hamesha ,
par le gaya tujhko koi,
main akela hoon to kya hai,
hota hai kiska koi,
aaye the is jahaan me akele,
na saath jayega koi...


	Logged

Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
	MAIN AKELA....... by gumnam in Shayri-E-Dard
	Main Akela by ~Hriday~ in Share:Poetry of Separation
	Main Akela by ~Hriday~ in Share: Poetry of Pain
	Akela tha main …………………………(sahal) by sahal in Shairi - E - Zindagi
	kitna akela hoon main by aru12 in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2 All »

Rajesh Harish

Guest

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2010, 04:34:39 AM »

Good one Klashkar Ji


	Logged

DhavalRami

Guest

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2010, 04:44:39 AM »

klaShkar saaHeb:

namaste!

umdaah KhayaaloN ko peSh kartu hu'ii aapki yeh rachanaa Khoob rahiiN!

liKhate raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN..!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval


	Logged

madhuwesh

Guest

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2010, 04:50:29 AM »

Bahut bahut khoob Klaskar ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.excellent Hats off to you!


	Logged

riyaz106

Guest

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2010, 06:09:09 AM »

Bahut khoob Kapil ji. Badi achhi poem hai.


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2010, 12:59:48 PM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh Ji... !!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on March 23, 2010, 04:34:39 AM

Good one Klashkar Ji


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2010, 01:08:36 PM »

Bahut bahut dhanyawaad aapka Riyaz Ji jo aapne hamare kavita ko pasand kiya...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on March 23, 2010, 06:09:09 AM

Bahut khoob Kapil ji. Badi achhi poem hai.


	Logged

SURESH SANGWAN

Guest

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2010, 01:12:07 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB KLASKARJI. icon_flower

AAPNE SACH BAYAAN KIYA.BAHUT HI UMDA .


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2010, 01:59:31 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya aapka Madhuwesh ji....achcha laga jaanke ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi... koshish karte hain hum kabhi kabhi apne ehsaas ko shabdo me utaarne ki...

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 23, 2010, 04:50:29 AM

Bahut bahut khoob Klaskar ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.excellent Hats off to you!


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2010, 02:02:01 PM »

Dhanyawaad Suresh Ji...!!!

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 23, 2010, 01:12:07 PM

BAHUT KHOOB KLASKARJI. icon_flower

AAPNE SACH BAYAAN KIYA.BAHUT HI UMDA .


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: Main Akela

«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2010, 02:05:44 PM »

Namaste Dhaval Ji,

Aap agar isi tarah keri kavitaon ko pasand karte rahenge to sach kehte hain hum bhi likhte rahenge. Khush rahenge. Apna khayal bhi rakhenge.

Aur duwa karenge ki hamesha aap bhi muskuraate rahe. Aur apna khayal rakhen.

Aapka
KLaskar

Quote from: Dhaval on March 23, 2010, 04:44:39 AM

klaShkar saaHeb:

namaste!

umdaah KhayaaloN ko peSh kartu hu'ii aapki yeh rachanaa Khoob rahiiN!

liKhate raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN..!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval