-----/// Main apnaa ghar dhundtaa hoon ///----- Hriday

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main apne hi galiyon mein apnaa  shahar dhundtaa hoon
chhaaon mile thodi  jahaan aisi  dopahar dhundtaa hoon

bhatkaa saa main  raahi  hoon,  manzil  kaa  pataa nahee
ab main apne hi jeewan  kaa  sahi  safar  dhundtaa hoon

niklaa thaa talaash mein, dhundoo main humsafar apnaa
jo  dekhe  sirf mujhe  hi, aisi  main nazar  dhundtaa hoon

ghar  to  hai  bas   naam  kaa, hai  sirf deewaarein jahaan
deewaaron se zyaadaa ho  aisaa koi ghar dhundtaa hoon

jab  tak   woh   saath  the tab har baat hi kuch khaas thi
aaj zindagi  hi  hai nahi  main  ab  jidhar  dhundtaa  hoon

mumkin nahi  hai muskuraanaaa, aansuon  kaa  saath hai
kabhi jeene ki  chaah  thi, ab  bas  zeher dhundtaa  hoon

khoyaa kuch khaas hai, magar  kyaa khoyaa maloom nahi
kabhi idhar dhundtaa hoon, kabhi udhar dhundtaa hoon


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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2013, 01:00:48 AM »
Very expressive and wonderful .

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khoyaa kuch khaas hai, magar  kyaa khoyaa maloom nahi
kabhi idhar dhundtaa hoon, kabhi udhar dhundtaa hoon
Puri kalaam ek sher ne pura kar diya.

Keep writing.
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2013, 01:42:28 AM »
wah wah wahhhhhhh wah

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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2013, 02:06:57 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 10, 2013, 12:38:29 AM


main apne hi galiyon mein apnaa shahr dhundtaa hoon
chhaaon mile thodi  jahaan aisi  dopahar dhundtaa hoon

bhatkaa saa main  raahi  hoon,  manzil  kaa  pataa nahee
ab main apne hi jeewan  kaa  sahi  safar  dhundtaa hoon

niklaa thaa talaash mein, dhundoo main humsafar apnaa
jo  dekhe  sirf mujhe  hi, aisi  main nazar  dhundtaa hoon

ghar  to  hai  bas   naam  kaa, hai  sirf deewaarein jahaan
deewaaron se zyaadaa ho  aisaa koi ghar dhundtaa hoon

jab  tak   woh   saath  the tab har baat hi kuch khaas thi
aaj zindagi  hi  hai nahi  main  ab  jidhar  dhundtaa  hoon

mumkin nahi  hai muskuraanaaa, aansuon  kaa  saath hai
kabhi jeene ki  chaah  thi, ab  bas zahr dhundtaa  hoon

khoyaa kuch khaas hai, magar  kyaa khoyaa maloom nahi
kabhi idhar dhundtaa hoon, kabhi udhar dhundtaa hoon


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nice,sir....shahr and zahr are not similar to ghar,idhar,dopahar
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2013, 02:10:35 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 10, 2013, 12:38:29 AM


main apne hi galiyon mein apnaa  shahar dhundtaa hoon
chhaaon mile thodi  jahaan aisi  dopahar dhundtaa hoon

bhatkaa saa main  raahi  hoon,  manzil  kaa  pataa nahee
ab main apne hi jeewan  kaa  sahi  safar  dhundtaa hoon

niklaa thaa talaash mein, dhundoo main humsafar apnaa
jo  dekhe  sirf mujhe  hi, aisi  main nazar  dhundtaa hoon

ghar  to  hai  bas   naam  kaa, hai  sirf deewaarein jahaan
deewaaron se zyaadaa ho  aisaa koi ghar dhundtaa hoon

jab  tak   woh   saath  the tab har baat hi kuch khaas thi
aaj zindagi  hi  hai nahi  main  ab  zidhar  dhundtaa  hoon

mumkin nahi  hai muskuraanaaa, aansuon  kaa  saath hai
kabhi jeene ki  chaah  thi, ab  bas  zeher dhundtaa  hoon

khoyaa kuch khaas hai, magar  kyaa khoyaa maloom nahi
kabhi idhar dhundtaa hoon, kabhi udhar dhundtaa hoon


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nyc effort hirday ji,.............bohat c daad,.....
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2013, 10:23:19 AM »
ek lambe time ke baad aapki rachna padh rahe hai hriday bhai........bahut heee khubsurat qalaam rahaaa aapka hamesa ki tarah..


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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2013, 12:09:31 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 10, 2013, 12:38:29 AM


main apne hi galiyon mein apnaa  shahar dhundtaa hoon
chhaaon mile thodi  jahaan aisi  dopahar dhundtaa hoon

bhatkaa saa main  raahi  hoon,  manzil  kaa  pataa nahee
ab main apne hi jeewan  kaa  sahi  safar  dhundtaa hoon

niklaa thaa talaash mein, dhundoo main humsafar apnaa
jo  dekhe  sirf mujhe  hi, aisi  main nazar  dhundtaa hoon

ghar  to  hai  bas   naam  kaa, hai  sirf deewaarein jahaan
deewaaron se zyaadaa ho  aisaa koi ghar dhundtaa hoon

jab  tak   woh   saath  the tab har baat hi kuch khaas thi
aaj zindagi  hi  hai nahi  main  ab  jidhar  dhundtaa  hoon

mumkin nahi  hai muskuraanaaa, aansuon  kaa  saath hai
kabhi jeene ki  chaah  thi, ab  bas  zeher dhundtaa  hoon

khoyaa kuch khaas hai, magar  kyaa khoyaa maloom nahi
kabhi idhar dhundtaa hoon, kabhi udhar dhundtaa hoon


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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2013, 12:55:55 PM »
 Applause nice
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2013, 01:19:18 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah Hridayji,
Bahut umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2013, 06:47:30 PM »
jab  tak   woh   saath  the tab har baat hi kuch khaas thi
aaj zindagi  hi  hai nahi  main  ab  jidhar  dhundtaa  hoon


waah waah waah waah.... bahut bahut aur bahut khoob kapil ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2013, 01:12:14 PM »
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kaafi lambe arse ke baad aapki koi kalaam padhne ko mili hai hridayji. aur har baar ki tarah is baar bahut achcha likhe ho aap. meri dili daad qubool kijiyega.
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2013, 05:26:05 PM »
wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2013, 04:27:38 AM »
Thanks a lot Ricky ji....!!!

Quote from: Ricky on June 10, 2013, 01:00:48 AM
Very expressive and wonderful .
Puri kalaam ek sher ne pura kar diya.

Keep writing.
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2013, 02:07:20 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Jasbir ji....!!!

Quote from: jasbirsingh on June 10, 2013, 01:42:28 AM
wah wah wahhhhhhh wah

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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2013, 01:55:10 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa M_B ji....!!!

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on June 10, 2013, 02:06:57 AM
nice,sir....shahr and zahr are not similar to ghar,idhar,dopahar
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