Main Apni

by Rajiv'sshayri on August 15, 2007, 11:03:15 PM
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Rajiv'sshayri
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Main apni kis se kanhon
kaun sun sakega mujhe
Har ek shaksa yanha bediyon ka hami hai
Sabhi ke sar par saje hain salib ke sehare
kisi ko dosh na de go ki har shai fani hai


Kanhi se maut ko lao ki meri umra kate
Majar ek banao ki meri umra kate
Main apne Aap men bebak beirada hoon
Na mere but youn sajao, to meri umra kate
Kisi bhi shai se mujhe ab yanha gila hi kanha
Ai yaar jashna manao ki meri umra kate
rooh pe meri ibarat si ubhar Aayi hai
Ki mera wazood mitao ki meri umra kate
Mere Azizon mere waste salib gadoh
Dard youn mere jhulao ki mere umra kate!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2007, 11:36:48 PM »
Rajiv

Nice once again !

Please write in Shayari-e-Dard directly, instead of writing in the Other Languages forum !

Moving to the right forum !
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2007, 02:22:26 PM »
bahoot khoob!!

Thanks for sharing Rajani!!
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Rajiv'sshayri
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2007, 04:56:09 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
bahoot khoob!!

Thanks for sharing Rajani!!


You welcome pooja ji.
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2007, 05:20:37 PM »
Kanhi se maut ko lao ki meri umra kate
Majar ek banao ki meri umra kate

these lines were really touching, no doubt each and every word was too good Usual Smile
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Rajiv'sshayri
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2007, 07:58:24 PM »
Quote from: "angel4u"
Kanhi se maut ko lao ki meri umra kate
Majar ek banao ki meri umra kate

these lines were really touching, no doubt each and every word was too good Usual Smile


angel my dad wrote that shayri when he is in hospital and not well, he lost hope he thought he is not going to servive thank god he is alright. He knew I'm posting his shayri in yoindia and everybody in yoindia apriciates his work he's so glad about that he said to me"he's got aim to live" Meri ankhon main khushi ke ansoon Aa gaye ye sunkar. Thanks to everybody here. Angel samajhne ka bahut bahut shukriya.
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2007, 08:26:06 PM »
Quote from: "Rajiv'sshayri"
Quote from: "angel4u"
Kanhi se maut ko lao ki meri umra kate
Majar ek banao ki meri umra kate

these lines were really touching, no doubt each and every word was too good Usual Smile


angel my dad wrote that shayri when he is in hospital and not well, he lost hope he thought he is not going to servive thank god he is alright. He knew I'm posting his shayri in yoindia and everybody in yoindia apriciates his work he's so glad about that he said to me"he's got aim to live" Meri ankhon main khushi ke ansoon Aa gaye ye sunkar. Thanks to everybody here. Angel samajhne ka bahut bahut shukriya.


Oh i hope he is better now, our prayers are always with him dear, hope he gets well soooonnnnn... actually yoindia really gives hope to yoindians in some or the other way, same thing happened to me too when i had joined yoindia. its such a nice place, and these shayris written by your dad are really very very very nice, they are so touching.... i cant express the appreciation in words dear, i can just say they are great.

Please shukriya na kahiye, Usual Smile its our pleasure to read such good works.

Take Care...
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2007, 05:20:48 PM »
Nice one again. Rajni !!
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Rajiv'sshayri
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2007, 10:49:12 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Nice one again. Rajni !!


Thanks talat ji.
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2007, 04:36:32 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB RAJNI JI...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI..AAPKE DAD KO HAMARI TARAF SE SASRIAKAL KEHNA....FELT SO NICE READING THAT YOUR FATHER IS ALLRIGHT NOW..KISSI KA EK SHER YAAD AAYA...AAP SE SHARE KARNA CHAHTA HOON..THIS IS FOR YOUR DAD...

BAADLO KE DARMIYAAN KUCH AISI SAAZISH HUI
MERE MITTI KE GHAR PE HI BAARISH HUI
KHUDA KO BI ZID HAI,
YEH BIJLIYAN GIRANE KI,
AUR HUME BI ZID HAI,
AASHIANA BANANE KI...{NM}
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2007, 07:50:37 PM »
Quote from: "khwaish"
BAHUT KHOOB RAJNI JI...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI..AAPKE DAD KO HAMARI TARAF SE SASRIAKAL KEHNA....FELT SO NICE READING THAT YOUR FATHER IS ALLRIGHT NOW..KISSI KA EK SHER YAAD AAYA...AAP SE SHARE KARNA CHAHTA HOON..THIS IS FOR YOUR DAD...

BAADLO KE DARMIYAAN KUCH AISI SAAZISH HUI
MERE MITTI KE GHAR PE HI BAARISH HUI
KHUDA KO BI ZID HAI,
YEH BIJLIYAN GIRANE KI,
AUR HUME BI ZID HAI,
AASHIANA BANANE KI...{NM}


Shukriya khwaish ji aur kya shayri likhi hai lazwab hai.
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