Main Aur Kya Karta.!!!

by majid on July 09, 2008, 08:00:57 AM
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majid
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Aankhon Main Udaasi Ke Baadal Chhaye Hain.
Aise Main Na Muskuraata To Aur Kya Karta.

Aksar Apno Ko Dedi Khushiyan Apne Hissey Ki
Apni Tamannaon Ko Na Mitaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Andheron Ne Aksar Aake Maangi Roshini Mujhse
Main Apne Ghar Ko Na Jalaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Meri Tarha Woh Bhi Besahara Thi Is Duniya Main
Tanhaai Ko Gale Se Na Lagaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Lad To Sakta Tha Main Bhi Zamaane Se.e.Dost
Magar Sanam Hi Saath Na De To Aur Kya Karta.!!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2008, 08:06:12 AM »
Wah wah,,, Shihab baba kya khoob dard aur bebassi ka izhaar...
Kam hi aisa ashaar nazar aate hain...
Keep going,,,.
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2008, 08:07:58 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause bahoot kuch kah diya aapne dil ko choo gai aapki gazal...
in do lines ne to khas tour se

Meri Tarha Woh Bhi Besahara Thi Is Duniya Main
Tanhaai Ko Gale Se Na Lagaata To Aur Kya Karta
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2008, 08:27:54 AM »
shihab ji bohut hi achi rachna hai aapki
bohut hi sundar aur saral shabdon mei aapne dard ko bayaan kiya hai

tanhaai ko jab meine apni tanha paaya
to saath uska maine aur mera usne nibhaya
log to apna banakar loot le jaate hain sab kuch
tanhaai ne hamara yaadon ka aashiyaana sajaya
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Muhammed
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2008, 09:26:05 AM »

Andheron Ne Aksar Aake Maangi Roshini Mujhse
Main Apne Ghar Ko Na Jalaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Meri Tarha Woh Bhi Besahara Thi Is Duniya Main
Tanhaai Ko Gale Se Na Lagaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Bhai Shihaab
Bahot Bahot Badhiya Ash'aar Hai Aapke
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2008, 11:33:40 AM »
shihab Bhai Bahut Bahut.. bass isi Andaaz Ke to Kayal hain aapke..!!

Ki Bahut hi Saral Lafzon me aap Apne eahsaaas Bayan kar dete Hain.. !!!


**~** Mann **~**
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2008, 12:22:02 PM »
Bohot Khoob Shihab and Bhawna !
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2008, 08:22:25 PM »
sihaab bhai,

zabardast kavita padhne ko mil gayi.lutf aa gaya aapki shaayri pudh kur!

khushnaseeb hein woh
jinhe tanhai ne hi sahi
pur gale to lagaaya
apna kandha diya
jis pur sur rakh kur
tumne ashru bahaaya
kuch shaksh aise bhee he
is jahaan mein
jinhe apno ne sataaya
aur tanhai ne bhee
nahi apnaaya
mehaz bunkar reh gaya jo
ek shunya
aur sochta raha
woh is jahaan mein
kyon aaya..kyon aaya!

Prateek
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Sonia01
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2008, 02:26:45 AM »
Bahut accha likha hai sabne... sihab jee, sanjeev bhaiya, Bhawna jee,

Muhammad jee, Mann bhaiya, aur Prateek Mardia jee
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sarthika
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2008, 03:49:50 AM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 09, 2008, 08:22:25 PM
sihaab bhai,

zabardast kavita padhne ko mil gayi.lutf aa gaya aapki shaayri pudh kur!

khushnaseeb hein woh
jinhe tanhai ne hi sahi
pur gale to lagaaya
apna kandha diya
jis pur sur rakh kur
tumne ashru bahaaya
kuch shaksh aise bhee he
is jahaan mein
jinhe apno ne sataaya
aur tanhai ne bhee
nahi apnaaya
mehaz bunkar reh gaya jo
ek shunya
aur sochta raha
woh is jahaan mein
kyon aaya..kyon aaya!

Prateek


wah kaya likha hai:

kuch shaksh aise bhee he
is jahaan mein
jinhe apno ne sataaya
aur tanhai ne bhee
nahi apnaaya
mehaz bunkar reh gaya jo
ek shunya
aur sochta raha
woh is jahaan mein
kyon aaya..kyon aaya!
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sarthika
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2008, 03:50:33 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on July 09, 2008, 08:00:57 AM
Aankhon Main Udaasi Ke Baadal Chhaye Hain.
Aise Main Na Muskuraata To Aur Kya Karta.

Aksar Apno Ko Dedi Khushiyan Apne Hissey Ki
Apni Tamannaon Ko Na Mitaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Andheron Ne Aksar Aake Maangi Roshini Mujhse
Main Apne Ghar Ko Na Jalaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Meri Tarha Woh Bhi Besahara Thi Is Duniya Main
Tanhaai Ko Gale Se Na Lagaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Lad To Sakta Tha Main Bhi Zamaane Se.e.Dost
Magar Sanam Hi Saath Na De To Aur Kya Karta.!!!

bahoot khoob!!
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punam
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2008, 05:59:07 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on July 09, 2008, 08:00:57 AM
Aankhon Main Udaasi Ke Baadal Chhaye Hain.
Aise Main Na Muskuraata To Aur Kya Karta.

Aksar Apno Ko Dedi Khushiyan Apne Hissey Ki
Apni Tamannaon Ko Na Mitaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Andheron Ne Aksar Aake Maangi Roshini Mujhse
Main Apne Ghar Ko Na Jalaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Meri Tarha Woh Bhi Besahara Thi Is Duniya Main
Tanhaai Ko Gale Se Na Lagaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Lad To Sakta Tha Main Bhi Zamaane Se.e.Dost
Magar Sanam Hi Saath Na De To Aur Kya Karta.!!!

wowwwwwwwwww bahot khoob shihab ji..bahut khoobsurat andaaz hai dard bayan karne ka ...bahot acha laga...
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punam
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2008, 06:03:44 AM »
Bahot khoob  kaushikbhawna ji ...Muhammed ji...Prateek ji...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2008, 07:57:31 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on July 09, 2008, 08:00:57 AM
Aankhon Main Udaasi Ke Baadal Chhaye Hain.
Aise Main Na Muskuraata To Aur Kya Karta.

Aksar Apno Ko Dedi Khushiyan Apne Hissey Ki
Apni Tamannaon Ko Na Mitaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Andheron Ne Aksar Aake Maangi Roshini Mujhse
Main Apne Ghar Ko Na Jalaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Meri Tarha Woh Bhi Besahara Thi Is Duniya Main
Tanhaai Ko Gale Se Na Lagaata To Aur Kya Karta.

Lad To Sakta Tha Main Bhi Zamaane Se.e.Dost
Magar Sanam Hi Saath Na De To Aur Kya Karta.!!!
..

Bohat khoob likha hai shihab ... Thumbs UP
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syednaami
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2008, 08:25:00 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 09, 2008, 08:22:25 PM
sihaab bhai,

zabardast kavita padhne ko mil gayi.lutf aa gaya aapki shaayri pudh kur!

khushnaseeb hein woh
jinhe tanhai ne hi sahi
pur gale to lagaaya
apna kandha diya
jis pur sur rakh kur
tumne ashru bahaaya
kuch shaksh aise bhee he
is jahaan mein
jinhe apno ne sataaya
aur tanhai ne bhee
nahi apnaaya
mehaz bunkar reh gaya jo
ek shunya
aur sochta raha
woh is jahaan mein
kyon aaya..kyon aaya!

Prateek


Prateek Mitr,,,

Wah ,,, Kya andaaz-e-jawaab hai,,, jis tarz se diya khoob diya aur khoob munfarid laga... buhat pasand aaya...
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