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gumnam
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Main bhi Dariya hu magar Samundar meri manzil nahi,
Main bhi Samundar ho gaya to mera kya rah jaayega.
Kal subah bikhar jaaunga main bhi SHABNAM ki tarah,
Kirne chun legi mujhe aur jahaan dekhta rah jaayega...
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2006, 05:16:40 AM » |
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bahut khub ji..............
samandar se mil kar dariya ko kya mila
woh jab mila usse toh woh bhi khara ho gya
ek rawani thee uske paas samandar mein milne se pehle
mil ke us se dariya bhi thahara paani ho gya
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2006, 05:53:49 AM » |
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bilkul sahi farmaya aap logo ne..........lekin
dariya ne to keh diya,ki main uski manzil nahi
nadiya bhi hai bol padi,ki main uska sahil nahi
ashko se apne hi bana hoon main samunder aaj
khara hoon to kya hua,kya jeene ke bhi kabil nahi
................@fahi@...............
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2006, 04:24:13 AM » |
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bahut sundar likha hai aapne PJAG............
meethi nadiyan samjah na paayi geharai ki baat magar
geharai ha bahot jaruri yeh khara sagar bola thaa
aana padta hai jameen per aasman ke seene se
yeh jameen ke ek jare se tuta taara bola thaa.........n/m
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2006, 09:42:28 AM » |
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sukriya &.........nice reply ranjna ji
aasma ko na utaro zami per
ise thoda aur uper badhne do
ki ishq-e-imthaan hai dena
mujhe bina ruke udne do.
.......... @fahi@...............
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2006, 12:23:40 PM » |
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Gud JOb Gumnam bhai....Ranju and Jeans wale bhai :wink:
Tum kya karoge Zulm mujhpe.....
Humne toh harr Zakhm hasste hue khaya hai......
Kya karogi Vishwaas mera.......
Soch lena yeh sab Waqt ki badalti maya hai......
Na darr na hee bebasi hai yeh meri......
Bande ne bas mahobbat me teri khud ko majboor paya hai.......
Baha do khoon jaam ki jarurat nahi doston......
Aaj mehfil-e-Dard me Shayar Badnaam aya hai.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2006, 04:29:58 PM » |
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very nice Gaurav aur .....PJAG.........aapka naam kya hai......?  isko pad ke mujhe apna fvt ,gana yaad aa jata hai......... :D aasman chhone ki koshish mein pankh jal jaate hain udoge tum kitna ,parinde bhi aasman tak jaa ke fir wapas aate hain ishqe mein imthaano ka silasila thamata nahi...... yeh woh raha hai jindagi ki, jis mein hota pata manjil ka nahi............ |
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2006, 02:44:30 PM » |
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bahut khub ji..............
samandar se mil kar dariya ko kya mila
woh jab mila usse toh woh bhi khara ho gya
ek rawani thee uske paas samandar mein milne se pehle
mil ke us se dariya bhi thahara paani ho gya bahut khub.....
SAMUNDAR TO ASTITVA MITATA HAI JAHAAN KA,
FIR BHI LEHREIN NAHI TOD PAATI SEENA CHATTAAN KA..... |
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2006, 02:47:14 PM » |
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Gud JOb Gumnam bhai....Ranju and Jeans wale bhai :wink:
Tum kya karoge Zulm mujhpe.....
Humne toh harr Zakhm hasste hue khaya hai......
Kya karogi Vishwaas mera.......
Soch lena yeh sab Waqt ki badalti maya hai......
Na darr na hee bebasi hai yeh meri......
Bande ne bas mahobbat me teri khud ko majboor paya hai.......
Baha do khoon jaam ki jarurat nahi doston......
Aaj mehfil-e-Dard me Shayar Badnaam aya hai.........!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS BADNAM SHAYAR JI...AAPNE BHI BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI.....
BEBASI KI BAAT NA KAR MERE DOST,
SHAYAD TUNE MERE JABT AANSUO KO NAHI DEKHA.. |
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2006, 03:16:19 PM » |
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bahut khub ji..............
samandar se mil kar dariya ko kya mila
woh jab mila usse toh woh bhi khara ho gya
ek rawani thee uske paas samandar mein milne se pehle
mil ke us se dariya bhi thahara paani ho gya bahut khub.....
SAMUNDAR TO ASTITVA MITATA HAI JAHAAN KA,
FIR BHI LEHREIN NAHI TOD PAATI SEENA CHATTAAN KA.....lehrein kab apna thiknaa kahi banati hain takarti hai sahilo se aur fir lout jaati hain milti hai chot jo chattaano ke takarane se woh khud hi apne seene pe usko jhel jaati hain |
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2006, 03:39:39 PM » |
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very nice ranjna ji (2 deep thoughts)...............
rehte nahi zami per.udte nahi aasma main
ki ye sara jahan hi ghar apna hai
manzil ka thikana na jana hai maine
ki mujhko bus raah-e-safar karna hai
dhoond legi khud manzil ek na ek din mujhe
ki pathrayi aankhon mai sabr itna hai.
.............@fahi@..............
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2006, 11:06:44 AM » |
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bahut khub PJAG.............
dil darta hai ab in aankho mein sapne basane se
dar lagta hai ab mujhko teri raha-A-gujar pe aane se
chhoo jaaye teri yaade yadi hame bhule se bhi kabhi
toh fir dar lagta hai un yaado ke bichar jaane se..........
talash karte rahen hain hum sehara mein aab ko
ab toh dar lagta hai hamko badal ke bhi bars jaane se
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2006, 06:16:09 AM » |
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very nice ranjana ji.........
barsenge jo badal kabhi,bunde bankar main aaunga
sapne sajaoge gar palko per,yaad bankar main aaunga
darti hai kyun mujhe dil main tu basane se
hongi jo ankhein teri nam,ashk bankar main aaunga
...............@fahi@................
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«Reply #13 on: June 14, 2006, 10:19:45 AM » |
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bahut khub...........
aaye jo ashak ban ke meri aankho mein tum kabhi
hum apni aankho ko band kar lenge.......
rakh lenge in ashako ko seepe mein band moti ki tarah
aur tere saath jindagi ke kuch madhur pal jee lenge
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«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2006, 11:21:10 AM » |
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2 gud ranjana ji..........
teri aankhon main band hoker,halat apni kuch sawar jayegi
yadon main sang tere rehkar,teri dhadkan dil mai utar jayegi
chahe mile ek lamhe ka saath hi, sang jeene ke liye
us ek pal mai tere saye tale meri zindagi puri guzar jayegi.
............@fahi@................
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