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«Reply #15 on: June 14, 2006, 02:44:44 PM » |
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bahut khub ji..............
samandar se mil kar dariya ko kya mila
woh jab mila usse toh woh bhi khara ho gya
ek rawani thee uske paas samandar mein milne se pehle
mil ke us se dariya bhi thahara paani ho gya bahut khub.....
SAMUNDAR TO ASTITVA MITATA HAI JAHAAN KA,
FIR BHI LEHREIN NAHI TOD PAATI SEENA CHATTAAN KA.....lehrein kab apna thiknaa kahi banati hain takarti hai sahilo se aur fir lout jaati hain milti hai chot jo chattaano ke takarane se woh khud hi apne seene pe usko jhel jaati hain
Na jaane saahil ne maujo se kya kah dala,
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«Reply #16 on: June 15, 2006, 02:30:41 AM » |
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aaj na puch mujhe se ki kaise jee rahi hum tere bagair
kati hai kaise yeh tanha raate hamne aaj tak tere bagair....
gujarate rahe hum raho se na jaane kahan kahan
per paa sake na koi bhi manjil hum aaj bhi tere bagair.........
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«Reply #17 on: June 15, 2006, 07:22:42 AM » |
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chal rahi hai tanha rato main........saans dhadkan ki
nikal rahi hai in andhero mai.............phir aas tadpan ki.
.............@fahi@.............
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«Reply #18 on: June 15, 2006, 08:10:49 AM » |
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chal rahi hai tanha rato main........saans dhadkan ki
nikal rahi hai in andhero mai.............phir aas tadpan ki.
.............@fahi@............. very nice fahi!  yeh ratein tanha han to sirf unki vajah se, in ankhon mein ansun han to sirf unki vajah se, khush rehte the hum pehle, lekin abb udas han sirf unki vajah se.. |
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«Reply #19 on: June 15, 2006, 10:36:08 AM » |
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very nice blue angel ji............ teri raaton ki tanhayi main baste hai mere sapne bhi tere sine ki dhadkan main hote hai kuch dard apne bhi .........@fahi@.......... chal rahi hai tanha rato main........saans dhadkan ki
nikal rahi hai in andhero mai.............phir aas tadpan ki.
.............@fahi@............. very nice fahi! yeh ratein tanha han to sirf unki vajah se, in ankhon mein ansun han to sirf unki vajah se, khush rehte the hum pehle, lekin abb udas han sirf unki vajah se.. |
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«Reply #20 on: June 15, 2006, 10:40:34 AM » |
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jab hamne apne sapno mein teri ahahat dekhi
ek roshni si apni mohabbat ki raho mein dekhi
din bhar tujhko soch ke rahe hum udas udas
aaj hamne usko aankho mein ek nami si dekhi
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«Reply #21 on: June 15, 2006, 11:14:36 AM » |
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meri aankhon ke nami se woh udass ho gaye
log kehte the jinhe pani ,aaj woh khass ho gaye
fasle hai darmiyan hamare jismo ke magar
aisa laga jaise woh ruh ke ahsaas ho gaye
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«Reply #22 on: June 16, 2006, 04:38:08 AM » |
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jab dekha hamne ki aankhe kisi ki nam thee
rooh thee beqarar aur unse na milne ki majburi bahut thee
ahasas a mohbbat dil mein thaa do no ke bahut
per lagata hai waqt ko hi yeh hamari kahaani napasand thee
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«Reply #23 on: June 16, 2006, 05:09:28 AM » |
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ishq ko majboor karta ye waqt hai
dil ko chaknachur karta ye waqt hai
tanhayi mai jab bhi aankhon mai sapne sajata hu
terii yaadon ko mujhsese door karta ye waqt hai
kehna chahta hu tujhse haal-e-dil maine jab bhi
jafa ki batein dhikhkar kasoor karta ye waqt hai
kaise jee sakunga main tujh bin ab tu hi bata
ki har saans mai tere surur bharta yeh waqt hai
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«Reply #24 on: June 16, 2006, 05:32:52 AM » |
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very nice.......waqt ....per aapka likha sach mein kamal hai aur sach hai..
kat jaata yeh waqt bhi jo saath tera hota
yun katati na tanah raat ,yun tanaha na mera savera hota
kar lete hum tujh se jee bhar ke pyaar
jo mere haato mein haath tera hota........
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«Reply #25 on: June 16, 2006, 05:43:47 AM » |
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ye aapki hi samajh hai jisse aapne samajh liya................very nice ranjan aji...........
mana ki aaj nahi hai ,mera haath tere haath main
per yadein to hai basi hui tere dil ke har jajwat main
gar phir bhi milne ki aas hai to vaada raha mera tujhse
aaunga main phir ashk bankar teri aankhon ki barsaat main
...............@fahi@.................
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«Reply #26 on: June 16, 2006, 05:46:20 AM » |
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bahoot khoob ranju and pjag
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«Reply #27 on: June 16, 2006, 10:14:31 AM » |
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Shukriya pankhuri .....PJAGji bahut khub......
har raaze dil ho bayan yeh jaruri toh nahi
dil jalta rahe gum ke chiraago se
phir bhi andhara na ho dur jindagi ki raho se
yeh baat jaruri toh nahi..............
aap rahe meri aankho mein asaq ban ke
fir bhi meri aankho seh ho unki barsaat
yeh jaruri toh nahi.................
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«Reply #28 on: June 16, 2006, 11:34:25 AM » |
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very nice reply(karara sa ) ranjana ji..........
meri niyat per gar zara bhi shak ho to kehna
aaye jo jafa ka aalam ,mujhme nazar to kehna
meri ishq ke junoon ko tune samjha nahi hai sanam
teri ankhon mai na aaye barsaat-e-manzar to kehna.
..............@fahi@..................
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«Reply #29 on: June 16, 2006, 04:03:50 PM » |
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hm......nice reply.........sochne per majbur kar dete hain aap........
tujhe per shaq karke hum kya paayenge
gum rakhenge dil mein aur fir muskaryenge
bas jaaynge teri aankh mein roshni ban ke
fir apne vajood se hat kar haale dil tujhe sunayenge
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