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«Reply #90 on: July 02, 2006, 01:21:21 PM » |
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gumnam ji bahut acche
yeh hain meri jhulfo ke kaale saaye
inse bhalla aap kaise bach paayenge
rasata milega aapko inhi mein ulajh ke
tabhi aap apni manzil ke kareeb aa paayenge BAHUT KHUB RANJANA JI.........
GUJAARE CHAND LAMHE JO TERI JULFO KE SAAYE MEIN,
USE FIR CHANDANI SE BHI BADI TAKLEEF HOTI HAI. |
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«Reply #91 on: July 02, 2006, 03:45:30 PM » |
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nice gumnam ji.........
mere dil mai chub rahi hai bebasi is qadar
ki aankhon mai dariya hai phir bhi pyaasa hoon .
................@fahi@...................
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ranjana
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«Reply #92 on: July 02, 2006, 04:24:16 PM » |
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bahut khub gumnam and fahi ji.........
dunaiya ki bheed mein is kadar akele hain
jaane kitne chehare ird gird mere hain
bas tasali hai dil mein si baat ki mujhe
yadi main idhar tanah hun toh..........
woh bhi udher isi dard ko jhele hain
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«Reply #93 on: July 02, 2006, 04:48:54 PM » |
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Kya baat hai Ranju.....Fahi....Gumnaam ji
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gumnam
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«Reply #94 on: July 05, 2006, 02:15:15 PM » |
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THANKS BADNAANM SHAYAR,PJAG,N RANJANA.......
MANZIL MILE NA MILE IS BAAT KA KOI GAM NAHI,
MANZIL KI JUSTJU MEIN MERA KAARWA TO HAI.
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«Reply #95 on: July 05, 2006, 04:52:19 PM » |
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chali thee main veraano mein apni manzil ko talshane
haat mere reit ke siva kabhi kuch na bhi na aaya
samjha thaa jise apni raha ka musafir hamane
woh toh nikala bas ek dhundhala sa saaya
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«Reply #96 on: July 09, 2006, 02:46:08 PM » |
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chali thee main veraano mein apni manzil ko talshane
haat mere reit ke siva kabhi kuch na bhi na aaya
samjha thaa jise apni raha ka musafir hamane
woh toh nikala bas ek dhundhala sa saaya BAHUT KHUB RANJANA JI..... |
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«Reply #97 on: July 09, 2006, 03:35:26 PM » |
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itz gr8 gumnaam ji.....saadgi se itni badi baat kehna .....bahut khub........... de raha hai mausam phir mere dard ko hawa ki barish mai barasne laga hai mera sawan bhi ....................@fahi@.................... THANKS BADNAANM SHAYAR,PJAG,N RANJANA.......
MANZIL MILE NA MILE IS BAAT KA KOI GAM NAHI,
MANZIL KI JUSTJU MEIN MERA KAARWA TO HAI. |
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«Reply #98 on: July 10, 2006, 04:37:40 AM » |
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shukriya gumnam ji.........bahut khub fahi........
is baar sawan mein thaa kuch dard aisa
ki barsa toh aankho se bhi barsaat hone lagi
umar bhi katati rahi saanse bhi chalti rahi
fir kyu kyu ruk ruk ke maut ki baat hone lagi
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«Reply #99 on: July 10, 2006, 05:07:06 AM » |
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nice 1 ranjana..............
jale hue dil ko aur tadpa na aey khuda
ki kahi jala na de ye duniya ko tadap se
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«Reply #100 on: July 10, 2006, 03:15:51 PM » |
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jab tak na chubhenge kaante peroo.n mein
zindagi ke dard ka ehasas na hoga
bhatakate rahenge tanaha -tanaha is kadar raahao mein
ki manzile pass hogi aur khud ko bhi rasata na malum hoga
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«Reply #101 on: July 12, 2006, 02:41:59 PM » |
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itz gr8 gumnaam ji.....saadgi se itni badi baat kehna .....bahut khub........... de raha hai mausam phir mere dard ko hawa ki barish mai barasne laga hai mera sawan bhi ....................@fahi@.................... THANKS BADNAANM SHAYAR,PJAG,N RANJANA.......
MANZIL MILE NA MILE IS BAAT KA KOI GAM NAHI,
MANZIL KI JUSTJU MEIN MERA KAARWA TO HAI.
TERI HAR BERUKHI KO RUTBA DIYA HUMNE,
MOHBBAT KA HAR EK KARZ ADA KIYA HUMNE,
MAT SOCH KI HUMNE TUMHE BHULA DIYA,
KHUDA SE PEHLE TERA HI SAJDA KIYA HUMNE... |
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«Reply #102 on: July 12, 2006, 05:45:18 PM » |
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very nice words gumnam ji....
din raat hamne jise duwao mein manga
usse kab milan hamara ho paana thaa
main theri raat ki kali parchhayi
woh subeh ka chehara suhhaana thaa
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«Reply #103 on: July 14, 2006, 01:58:41 PM » |
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very nice words gumnam ji....
din raat hamne jise duwao mein manga
usse kab milan hamara ho paana thaa
main theri raat ki kali parchhayi
woh subeh ka chehara suhhaana thaa SHUKRIYA RANJANA JI........BAHUT KUB LIKHA AAPNE.....MIND BLOWING......
BIKHARI HUI JULFO KO GIRAHMEER BANA LE,
RAKHNA HAI MUJHE QAID TO ZANZEER BANA LE.
KAGAJ PE LAKEEREIN TO BAHUT KHEECH LI TUMNE,
AB SABKO MILA KE MERI TASVEER BANA LE. |
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«Reply #104 on: July 14, 2006, 02:06:02 PM » |
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wah kya baat hai ji ....  kabhi teri nazaro mein maine apne liye pyaar dekha thaa thaa nahi tu meri haatho ki lakeero mein shayad bas tujhko apne tasvur mein hi maine apne dil ak har raaz kaha thaa aaj bhi main apne dil ko yun samjha leti hun banaati hun teri tasveer aur dil mein chhipa leti hun |
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