-----/// Main bhool paataa naheen ///----- Hriday

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wo   chehraa   ab  bhi   nazar se duur jaataa naheen
bandhan pyaar kaa aasaani se  tut  paataa   naheen
maine  laakh   koshish  ki   bhulaane   ki  usko  lekin
kuch to hai khaas , main use  bhool  paataa naheen

har   naam    ke saath  naam uusi   kaa aataa rahaa
har khwaab  me  bas uusi ka  chehraa   aataa rahaa
lamhaa  ek   bhi   nahi   din kaa   aisa ki wo duur ho
haseen chehra uskaa  har lamhaa yaad  aataa rahaa

pyaari   aankhen     uski  jheel  si  ab  bhi  yaad hain
pyaari  baatein    uski    saari   ab   bhi     yaad  hain
bhoolaa kuch  bhi naheen main  usse duur jaake bhi
pyaari   mulaaquaatein    usse    ab   bhi    yaad hain

chaahaa  bahut  maine   mitaa du  har nishaani uski
dil  me  likhe   us     naam   ko  mitaa paataa naheen
tadap_ta  hai   dil    mera    aaj   bhi  use   yaad  kar
dil ka dard apne main  kisi ko dikhaa paataa naheen

pyaar tha mera , pyaar hai wo , pyaar rahega sadaa
wo duur hai, par ab bhi  mujhse  judaaa to naheen
hai yakeen mere yaaron ko wo kabhi aayegi naheen
kaise maanlu main baat unki, wo khudaa to naheen


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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2012, 05:13:29 AM »
bahut khoobsoorat nazm kapil badhaai ho
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2012, 05:52:24 AM »
wo   chehraa   ab  bhi   nazar se duur jaataa naheen
bandhan pyaar kaa aasaani se  tut  paataa   naheen
maine  laakh   koshish  ki   bhulaane   ki  usko  lekin
kuch to hai khaas , main use  bhool  paataa naheen

har   naam    ke saath  naam uusi   kaa aataa rahaa
har khwaab  me  bas uusi ka  chehraa   aataa rahaa
lamhaa  ek   bhi   nahi   din kaa   aisa ki wo duur ho
haseen chehra uskaa  har lamhaa yaad  aataa rahaa

pyaari   aankhen     uski  jheel  si  ab  bhi  yaad hain
pyaari  baatein    uski    saari   ab   bhi     yaad  hain
bhoolaa kuch  bhi naheen main  usse duur jaake bhi
pyaari   mulaaquaatein    usse    ab   bhi    yaad hain

chaahaa  bahut  maine   mitaa du  har nishaani uski
dil  me  likhe   us     naam   ko  mitaa paataa naheen
tadap_ta  hai   dil    mera    aaj   bhi  use   yaad  kar
dil ka dard apne main  kisi ko dikhaa paataa naheen

pyaar tha mera , pyaar hai wo , pyaar rahega sadaa
wo duur hai, par ab bhi  mujhse  judaaa to naheen
hai yakeen mere yaaron ko wo kabhi aayegi naheen
kaise maanlu main baat unki, wo khudaa to naheen


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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2012, 06:10:05 AM »
behatreen Nazm pesh kee hai
aur kaafi dino baad aapne kuch likha..
vahi rang, vahi andaaz, vahi suroor.
bahut umda peshkash hriday jee
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2012, 06:17:38 AM »
Very Nice!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2012, 07:56:29 AM »
bahut khoob Hriday ji, badhai, bahut dino bad aapki rachna padhne ko mili
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2012, 08:08:01 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Kapil ji,dard bhari peshkash,superb. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2012, 08:18:35 AM »
Hriday ji hriday ko cho jati hai ap ki nazam
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2012, 08:21:22 AM »
Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah dard me bubhi hue zabardast creation Hirday ji ..!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2012, 10:35:15 AM »
Bahut  achhi  Nazm  hai , Hriday  ji .
Khas  taur se  aakhri  band bahut  hi  khunbsurat  hai .
Bahut  badhaai .
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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2012, 01:30:09 PM »
 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! nice creation
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«Reply #11 on: September 27, 2012, 04:53:57 PM »
wah bhai wah kya baat hai mkv ji ne sahi kaha wahi ishq wahi dard wahi mahak aapke nazm mein lajawab creation... we all missed u lot..........awesme creation.........

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«Reply #12 on: September 28, 2012, 03:04:03 AM »
BAhut Khub Likha HAi App ne Kapil Ji Baddai Ho
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«Reply #13 on: September 28, 2012, 03:11:18 AM »
BOHUT KHUB HRIDHAY BHAI
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«Reply #14 on: September 28, 2012, 11:47:58 AM »
bahut khub hridayji

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