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kaise chala aaun main laut kar phir is bahaar main
kii bhoola nahin main pichhli sardiyon kii raat abhi
bahut tanha tha main apni tanhaaiyon ke saath
magar na mayoos hua aur na roya kabhi
kii ab zakhm bhar gaya hai dard nahin hota
magar nahin mit paaya hai woh nishaan abhi
keh dena bhool jao oos beete huye pal ko hai aasaan
kaise bhoolon woh tareeqa bhi bata do kabhi
tumhe dekh kar yoon, mayoos toh hoon mein bhi
magar kaise keh doon kii tum chale jao abhi
aa jaana bas tum tab jab yeh rooh rukhsat hogi
maana kii laash ban chuka hoon magar saans chal rahi hai abhi
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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2008, 11:26:24 AM » |
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Salil Behtareen khayal  Keep going  |
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2008, 11:33:26 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2008, 11:37:39 AM » |
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kaise chala aaun main laut kar phir is bahaar main
kii bhoola nahin main pichhli sardiyon kii raat abhi
bahut tanha tha main apni tanhaaiyon ke saath
magar na mayoos hua aur na roya kabhi
kii ab zakhm bhar gaya hai dard nahin hota
magar nahin mit paaya hai woh nishaan abhi
keh dena bhool jao oos beete huye pal ko hai aasaan
kaise bhoolon woh tareeqa bhi bata do kabhi
tumhe dekh kar yoon, mayoos toh hoon mein bhi
magar kaise keh doon kii tum chale jao abhi
aa jaana bas tum tab jab yeh rooh rukhsat hogi
maana kii laash ban chuka hoon magar saans chal rahi hai abhi
Very nice bohat khoob likha hai salil bro..
Maayus na ho mere dost zakhm milte hai kabhi kabhi
Dard bhi hai aur yaadein bhi na bhool paate kabhi kabhi
Khushiyan tere kadam choome ye dua hai meri kudha se
Aayegi usse tere yaad fir ehsaas karoge uss pyaar ko ghadi ghadi.. |
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2008, 11:39:43 AM » |
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kaise chala aaun main laut kar phir is bahaar main
kii bhoola nahin main pichhli sardiyon kii raat abhi
bahut tanha tha main apni tanhaaiyon ke saath
magar na mayoos hua aur na roya kabhi
kii ab zakhm bhar gaya hai dard nahin hota
magar nahin mit paaya hai woh nishaan abhi
keh dena bhool jao oos beete huye pal ko hai aasaan
kaise bhoolon woh tareeqa bhi bata do kabhi
tumhe dekh kar yoon, mayoos toh hoon mein bhi
magar kaise keh doon kii tum chale jao abhi
aa jaana bas tum tab jab yeh rooh rukhsat hogi
maana kii laash ban chuka hoon magar saans chal rahi hai abhi
BAHUT KHOOB UMDA KALAM, JAISE DARD AUR DARD HI AANKHON AUR DIL ME BHAR DIYA... BY. K.SHAEL BHULENGE NAHI KABHI HAM TUJHE AE-BEDARD KI AAB BHI TUJHSE BEPANNAH MOHABBAT KARTE HAI... BHULENGE NAHI WO RAAT JO BITI TERI AAGAOSH ME,KI AAB BHI TANHA RAATON ME USS RAAT KI KHAWAISH KARTE HAI... |
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Daredevil
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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2008, 11:46:42 AM » |
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vo mere sabr ka imtihaan leti hain
is khamoshi ko jhhothhe apnapan ka naam deti.n hain
poochhte rahte hain hum bhi mausam'e'ishq se
kyun unki musqurahaten hamari jaan leti.n hain
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«Reply #6 on: October 25, 2008, 11:46:56 AM » |
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sirf intzaar nahi aitbaar bhi chahta hai ishq
beqaraari ke saath saath deedar chahta hai ishq
vo jo sapne me bhi kah de.n hume apna
use hi haqiqat maanta hai ishq
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«Reply #7 on: October 25, 2008, 11:47:18 AM » |
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Gair ban ke na mile.n ham tumhe.n apanaa kar le.n
ho ijaazat to ye chhotii sii tamannaa kar le.n
tez saaso.n me.n rachii pyaar kii shahanaayii ho
phuul saa cheharaa ho mahakii huii tanahaaii ho
niichii nazare.n jo uThe.n dekh ke pardaa kar le.n
*hamane allaah se yuu.N daad-e-wafaa maa.Ngii hai
jald mil jaa_o hame.n tum ye du_aa maa.Ngii hai
haa.N jo kah do to abhii shukr kaa sajadaa kar le.n
hai mukaddar par hame.n naaz mohabbat pe yaqii.n
jiite jii tumase judaa_ii kabhii mumakin hii nahii.n
marake bhii ham na judaa ho.nge ye waadaa kar le.n
Mehendi Hasan Sahab
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«Reply #8 on: October 25, 2008, 11:47:38 AM » |
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Apne haatho se chehre ko chupate kyu ho..... Mujhse sharmate ho to saamne aate kyu ho...... Tum kabhi meri tarah kar bhi do ikraa-e-wafaa.... Pyar karte ho to fir pyar chupate kyu ho.......  ? NM |
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2008, 11:47:51 AM » |
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vo humse ishq bhi aise karte hain jaise ehsaan karte hain
jaane kab janenge vo hum to is ada ka bhi ehtaram karte hain
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2008, 02:24:01 PM » |
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salil shally Good work
Nice sharing Rishii ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #12 on: October 26, 2008, 06:25:36 AM » |
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thnks rajbeer bhai , pooja ji, diya, rajesh
and rishii
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salil2002
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«Reply #13 on: October 26, 2008, 06:28:56 AM » |
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Very nice bohat khoob likha hai salil bro..
Maayus na ho mere dost zakhm milte hai kabhi kabhi
Dard bhi hai aur yaadein bhi na bhool paate kabhi kabhi
Khushiyan tere kadam choome ye dua hai meri kudha se
Aayegi usse tere yaad fir ehsaas karoge uss pyaar ko ghadi ghadi.. salaam bheja maine mehboob ko hawaon k raaste kehte hai log kii woh aandhiyon main kho gaya |
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: October 26, 2008, 06:32:57 AM » |
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BAHUT KHOOB UMDA KALAM, JAISE DARD AUR DARD HI AANKHON AUR DIL ME BHAR DIYA... BY. K.SHAEL BHULENGE NAHI KABHI HAM TUJHE AE-BEDARD KI AAB BHI TUJHSE BEPANNAH MOHABBAT KARTE HAI... BHULENGE NAHI WO RAAT JO BITI TERI AAGAOSH ME,KI AAB BHI TANHA RAATON ME USS RAAT KI KHAWAISH KARTE HAI... kar le khwahish tu ji bhar ke mere aagosh main aane kii magar yeh na bhool kii kasak aaj bhi oos raat kii hai jalte huye chiraag bhi shayad tha bekaraar kii roshni toh hai bujh chuki par dhuaan aaj bhi hai |
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on eTI community..
