~*~ Main chand ki tarha hoon ~*~ by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Tamam doston ko, Valentines day bahaut bahaut mubarak ho..Dil se dua hai kay jiske haath main bhi apke pyaar ko dor ho, woh chorre na choot paye..!

Sach kahoun toh socha nahin tha kay kuch likh paunga aj..
Sab aj mohobat pe likh rahe hai..Mager mujse likha nahin jaega mohobat par..Sorry..

Jitna bhi likh paya hoon, bas dil ko bahane kay liye..

Kya bataun kitna tanha rehgaya uske jane kay baad,
14 feb ka dinn mere calendar se hi mitgaya sahib..

Sabki baahon main koi na koi hai jo uski khwaish tha,
Mere liye toh bas woh ek armaan banke rehgaya sahib..

Bhale hi hazaron main rehta ho; akela hi hai ‘Khamosh’,
Chand ki tarha muskurate rehna main bhi seekhgaya sahib..

Qasam hai yaaron maine bas dil kholke sachi mohobat ki thi,
Najane kya khata hogayi kay woh mujhe bhoolgaya sahib..

Log kehte hai kay bhool jao usse aur agey barr chalo ‘Khamosh’,
Mujhe toh ab tak uske jane ka yakeen hi nahin aya sahib..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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Re: ~*~ Main chand ki tarha hoon ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2011, 01:24:50 PM »

Kya Kahoon Bhai Rahim!!!

Har Ek lafz Dil Pe Dastak De Gaya..

Bahut bahut Bahut Khooooob Mere Bhai..

Par Mere Bhai.....Kuch Kehna Chahunga Par Apni Nazm Ke Zariye kahunga..

par abhi filhaal ke liye Lajawaab mere dost


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Re: ~*~ Main chand ki tarha hoon ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2011, 02:02:04 PM »

very sweet rahim bhai....
bht bht khoob....


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Re: ~*~ Main chand ki tarha hoon ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2011, 03:04:52 PM »

kya dist--dil se likhoge to dil me dastak to hogi na.
itne gahre ehsaas mohabbat ke dard ki pahle mene feel nahi kari kabhi.
ab aapki rachnao ko mai koi soch to manta hi nahi--
sirf sach manta hu aapke nagmo ko.
dil ko lagti h aur kisi ki yaad aa jaati hai
""
tu khusnaseeb hai dost ye maan ke chal
kuch pal ko hi sahi kisi ke pahlu me samaya
aise bhi log hain jahan me 'nir'
pahlu me jiske pal bhar mohabbat raas na aaya
""
behad umda peshkash Rahim ji.
may god bless u
thanx


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Re: ~*~ Main chand ki tarha hoon ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2011, 06:11:42 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 14, 2011, 01:24:50 PM

Apka teh teh dil se shukriya mere Khwaish dost..
Apki uss nazm ka teh dil se intezar rahega..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Main chand ki tarha hoon ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2011, 06:12:26 PM »

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 14, 2011, 02:02:04 PM

very sweet rahim bhai....
bht bht khoob....

Teh dil se shukriya Priya di..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Main chand ki tarha hoon ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2011, 06:14:05 PM »

Quote from: nirala on February 14, 2011, 03:04:52 PM

Nirala dost,
teh teh dil se shukriya..
haan soch nahin hai, sach hai..
kya karein dil hai jo likwata hai..
Khush rahiye..

Aur haan, bahaut achi 4 lines kahi hai apne..
Applause

Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Main chand ki tarha hoon ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2011, 06:14:42 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on February 14, 2011, 06:02:26 PM

Bahut Khub Rahim Bhai

ALLAH Pak Aapko Sukoon Bakshe Aameen

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Ameen..
Teh dil se shukriya Majid bhai..
Khush rahiye..!


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