Main jina chahti hu......

by brokenbyluv on February 12, 2010, 04:37:06 PM
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #105 on: March 14, 2010, 05:50:56 PM »
Thanks
Madhu-di......

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 14, 2010, 07:13:45 AM
Wah Koyal ji very touching and lovely lines.Geet ji,Shihab ji great work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #106 on: March 16, 2010, 05:09:01 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 14, 2010, 04:57:43 AM
Ye jeena bhee sakhee koi jeena hai...
Na koi apnaa hai naa koi sajna hai...

Har raat koi sapna sajana hai.....
Har subah hame use meetana hai....

Phir bhee dil kehta hai....
Main jina chahti hu......

sahi kaha tune..bahut khoob...


Sach hai ki koi nhi hai merra sathi,
jo de sake sakun is dil ko aesa koi apna nhi,
phir bhi main jina chahti hu uske intezar mein..
jiski ankho mein hogi merri haqiqat koi sapna nhi......
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #107 on: March 16, 2010, 05:10:34 PM »
thnx alot madhuji....
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #108 on: March 16, 2010, 05:23:02 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on March 14, 2010, 06:24:10 PM

  Chal Kar Yun Zindagi Ke Safar Mein Bas
        Maine Har Rishety Ko Pehchaan Liya Hai.

               Na Dikha Mujhey Yun Jhuthe Khwab Dost
                    Aakhir Maine Apni Auqat Ko Jaan Liya Hai.


Vo suraj hai aur jahan ko roshan karta hai,
vo tara hai aur asma ko paawan karta hai,
usi diwangi se beinteha chahti hu main tujhe..
jaisi mhbt barasti hui bundo se saawan karta hai......
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shabbir143
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«Reply #109 on: March 17, 2010, 11:47:23 AM »
Wah Yahan Bhi Kya Khoob Mehfil Saji Hai
Humari Nazron Se Kaise Bach Gayi...hmhm
Kya Khoob Yaar Ek Dusre Ke Jazbaton Ko Samajhke
Aap Dono Rep Karte Hain..Bohat Hi Badiya
Maza Aa Gaya Padke......
Yahan Bhi Har Rang Dekhne Ko Mila...

Great Job Both..Brokenbyluv Ji N Maju...

Keep It Up...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #110 on: March 18, 2010, 06:45:45 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya shabbir ji...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #111 on: March 25, 2010, 07:54:09 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on March 25, 2010, 07:25:06 PM
  Kar Ke Hume Is Qadar Deewaana Aey Sanam
        Phir Khud Hi Bechainyon Ke Jaam Pilate Ho.

               Gar Karte Ho Humse Muhabbat To Phir Kyun
                   Karke Auron Se Guftgu Hume Yun Jhalate Ho.


Terri is jalan se merri mhbt zinda hai,
terri chaht bhi har pal mujhpe meherban hai,
tu tadpta hai tou merri ruh b machal uthti hai..
terri iss tadap se hi tou merri mhbt jawan hai......
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #112 on: March 27, 2010, 08:48:51 PM »
waah ji waah bahut khoob...aur shukriya...


Koi mujhe bhi pyar kar le beinteha,
yahi khuda se roz dua mangti thi main,
tujhe paake yu lagta hai merre ajnabi..
ki tujhe hi apna humsafar mangti thi main......
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #113 on: March 27, 2010, 09:16:47 PM »
Achchhi mehfil jami hai
Bahut hi anand milta hai
Aap dono bahut umda likhte ho
Geet aur Shihab Ji, likhte raho
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #114 on: March 27, 2010, 09:45:16 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #115 on: March 29, 2010, 08:42:14 AM »
Waah kya baat hai..bahut khoob...


Ek baat puchu tou kya jawab doge,
merri har bechain dhadkan ka kya hisab doge,
janti hu hamara milan mumkin nhi..
merri bepanah mhbt ka mujhe kya khitab doge......
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #116 on: March 29, 2010, 02:32:02 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji & Shihab Bhai.. Lajawab daur chal raha Hai Shayari ka.. Bahut Khooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause



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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #117 on: March 29, 2010, 02:51:16 PM »
wah Wah BBL ji. bahut achha likha hai.
Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 29, 2010, 08:42:14 AM
Waah kya baat hai..bahut khoob...


Ek baat puchu tou kya jawab doge,
merri har bechain dhadkan ka kya hisab doge,
janti hu hamara milan mumkin nhi..
merri bepanah mhbt ka mujhe kya khitab doge......
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«Reply #118 on: March 29, 2010, 05:04:56 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya mann ji n suresh ji....
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«Reply #119 on: March 30, 2010, 10:39:46 PM »
Geet ji,

Bahut hi sundar shabdon me aapne apne dard ko bayaan kiya hai. Jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai. Bahut khoobsurat kavita hai aapki ye.

ab to jaane q har chehre me tum nazar aate ho,
saamne ho nahi par khayalo me aa jaate ho,
chahta hoon lakh bhulaana tumhaari yaadon ko,
par har baar tum roop badalke saamne aa jaate ho...!!!


Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 12, 2010, 04:37:06 PM
Kuch beete waqt ki yad se ankhe nam hai,
iss baraste sawan mein khud ko bhigona chahti hu,

bahut hi bechain hai aaj ye dil merra,
kisi ki agosh mein madhosh hona chahti hu,

koi pyar se hath fere merre chehre pe,
un hatho ko narmi mein apne ashko ko sanjona chahti hu,

merre yaar ko na le jaye koi bandhan mujhse door,
aaj ki raat uske pyar mein khona chahti hu,

aaj tak merra har rishta adhura raha hai,
kisi k hasil se apne har gum ko dhona chahti hu,

intezaar hai terra aaj bhi merre humsafar,
terre sath main apne adhure khuab pirona chahti hu......
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