----- /// Main kya kahun ///--- klaskar

by klaskar on May 05, 2010, 12:03:43 AM
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kuch aisa asar tha uski aankhon me ki KYA KAHUN,
un nasheeli aankhon me kyu main kho gaya KYA KAHUN,
izhaar kabhi kiya hi nahi usne apne hothon se,
main jaane kya soch uski raah takta raha KYA KAHUN,



kabhi usne apna haal-e-dil mujhse nahi kaha,
par main uske aankhon k bharose baitha raha,
khata uski nahi ye asar uski aankhon ka tha,
jo main unpe anjaana sa aetbaar karta raha,

main us anjaane se aetbaar ke baare me KYA KAHUN,
kaisa aetbaar tha us aetbaar pe mujhe KYA KAHUN,
mere armaano ka gala is qadar ghonta mere aetbaar ne,
kis tarah tadap k dum toda mere armaano ne KYA KAHUN,



mulaqaaton ka wo silsila kuch is tarah chalta raha,
har us mulaqaat me usne mujhse bas itna kaha,
chhodungi na main tera saath marte dum tak,
aur main un jhoote waado pe aetbaar karta raha,

main uske un jhoote waadon ke baare me KYA KAHUN,
main apne un tute khwaabon ke baare me KYA KAHUN,
socha tha sheeshe ka mahal khada karenge hum ek din,
ab un tute kaanch ke tukdo ke baare me KYA KAHUN,



wo zaalim nazar mujhe har lamha yaad aata raha,
us nazar ka iqraar mujhe har pal yaad aata raha,
maine to har baar apne dil ka haal use bataya tha,
uska har baar hasi me uda dena mujhe yaad aata raha,

main uski us qaatil hasi ke baare me KYA KAHUN,
main uski us zaalim nazar ke baare me KYA KAHUN,
main to uski aankhon pe bharosa kar baitha raha,
un aankhon ne mujhe kaise loota ab main KYA KAHUN,



barson se main jiska raah yun takta raha,
jiske liye main apne dil ko samjhaaata raha,
aaj mujhe chhod wo jaane kyun dur chali gayi,
jiske liye main bas intzaar yun karta raha,

kal tak jo mere dil me  rehti thi uske baare me KYA KAHUN,
ab uski yaadein kyun meri aankhon se behte hain KYA KAHUN,
kuch anjaana sa bandhan hai usse ab bhi jo baandhe hai mujhe,
us anjaane andekhe bandhan ke baare me ab main KYA KAHUN...


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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2010, 12:23:31 AM »
Wah wah !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bhut khoob kapil !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very gud ANDAZ>>>>jst beautiful pheskash

Main uska rasta dekhti rehi ki "Kya Kahun"
Main uske Yakin pe yakin karti rehi ki " kya kahun"
Ana tha usse meri gali paar voh koi aur hi Raah chaal pada
Meri Ankhain aaj taak uska rasta takti rehi ki " kya kahun"

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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2010, 12:45:55 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Neel... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon... aapne apne likhe in panktiyon se mere is kavita ka samman aur bhi badha diya.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne ...


ye chaar panktiyaan kuch aisa asar kar gayi,
aapke bina kahe hi humse har baat keh gayi,
ab aur kehne sunne me rakha hi kya hai,
bina kahe hi ye saare dard bayaan kar gayi...

Quote from: neelgold on May 05, 2010, 12:23:31 AM
Wah wah !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bhut khoob kapil !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very gud ANDAZ>>>>jst beautiful pheskash

Main uska rasta dekhti rehi ki "Kya Kahun"
Main uske Yakin pe yakin karti rehi ki " kya kahun"
Ana tha usse meri gali paar voh koi aur hi Raah chaal pada
Meri Ankhain aaj taak uska rasta takti rehi ki " kya kahun"

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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2010, 05:55:26 AM »
SUBHANALLAH.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

BAHUT BAHUT KHUB.. Applause Applause

DIL ME GHAR KAR JANE WALI GHAZAL LIKHI HAI AAPNE.,
AANKHO KO NAMM KARNE WALI GHAZAL LIKHI HAI AAPNE..,
ISH GHAZAL KE BANANE WALE(KAPIL JI) KI TAREEF ME KYA KAHOON.,
APNE KISSA-E-MOHABBAT KI KYA KHOOB GHAZAL LIKHI HAI AAPNE..,

aise hi likhte rahiyega Kapil sahab.. icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2010, 09:25:39 AM »
Wah wah Bahot khoob Kapil ji, badi achhi nazm likhi hai aapne. Sab kuchh poori detail mein bataaya hai. Bahot khoob, shandaar.
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2010, 01:20:31 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Touhid ji... bahut jyaada taarif kar di aapne mere is kavita ki...bahut khoobsurat andaaz me aapne apne sher ke zariye mere kavita ki sundardta badha di hai... aapka comment padh k dil baag baag ho gaya... bahut bahut shukriya dost....


fasana hai mere dost ye meri mohabbat ka,
asar hai ye bas mere tute khwaabon ka,
humein kya pata ghazal kise kehte hain,
asar hai ye bas uski kuch yaadon ka...

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 05, 2010, 05:55:26 AM
SUBHANALLAH.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

BAHUT BAHUT KHUB.. Applause Applause

DIL ME GHAR KAR JANE WALI GHAZAL LIKHI HAI AAPNE.,
AANKHO KO NAMM KARNE WALI GHAZAL LIKHI HAI AAPNE..,
ISH GHAZAL KE BANANE WALE(KAPIL JI) KI TAREEF ME KYA KAHOON.,
APNE KISSA-E-MOHABBAT KI KYA KHOOB GHAZAL LIKHI HAI AAPNE..,

aise hi likhte rahiyega Kapil sahab.. icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2010, 02:28:10 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji... kavita likhte likhte mujhe pata hi nahi chala aur bahut lambi ho gayi... aapne ise apna waqt diya jiske liye main shukra guzar hoon...bahut bahut shukriya...!!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on May 05, 2010, 09:25:39 AM
Wah wah Bahot khoob Kapil ji, badi achhi nazm likhi hai aapne. Sab kuchh poori detail mein bataaya hai. Bahot khoob, shandaar.
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2010, 04:05:30 PM »
wah! wah! bohat bohat khoob klaskar ji. bohat hi khoobsoorati se likha hai aapne...
bohat khoob.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2010, 04:12:33 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Saurabh ji...!!!

Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on May 05, 2010, 04:05:30 PM
wah! wah! bohat bohat khoob klaskar ji. bohat hi khoobsoorati se likha hai aapne...
bohat khoob.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2010, 05:31:59 PM »
Applause Applause Kya baat hai Kapil dost..bahaut khoob!
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2010, 09:47:22 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on May 05, 2010, 05:31:59 PM
Applause Applause Kya baat hai Kapil dost..bahaut khoob!
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2010, 10:07:43 PM »
Wow Kapil ji,Neel ji,Touhid ji.kya kahun aap logo ke gazal ke baare mein.very touching ,lovely mindblowing creation.excellent.keep it up Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2010, 11:12:33 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 05, 2010, 10:07:43 PM
Wow Kapil ji,Neel ji,Touhid ji.kya kahun aap logo ke gazal ke baare mein.very touching ,lovely mindblowing creation.excellent.keep it up Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2010, 05:01:16 PM »
KAISA AITBAAR THA USS AITBAAR PER KYA KAHUN....BAHUT KHOOB KLASKAR JI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 06, 2010, 05:09:59 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya KA ji.... main aapka shukraguzaar hoon jo aapne meri is kavita ko waqt diya aur pasand kiya ... shukriya ...!!!

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KAISA AITBAAR THA USS AITBAAR PER KYA KAHUN....BAHUT KHOOB KLASKAR JI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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