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<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

Ehsaason k samandar me doobti rahi
Tere lafzon me bigadti sanwarti rahi

Registan si ankhon ki pehli barish bani
Tere sukhe labon pe bikharti rahi

Lehja lehja tera jab bhi badalta raha.
Main bhi mausam ki tarha badalti rahi

Resha resha bunta raha tu mujhe.
Main har pal naye rang me dhalti rahi

*KasaK* keh rahi tumse ae meri zindagi.
Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi...!!


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 01:54:00 PM »

Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much for posting this and coming back with your lovely post....!!!

taarif bhi karni padegi kyaa? padh to pehle hi chukaa hoon.. taarif bhi pehle kar chukaa.. ab bas reply hi de deta hoon kyun??? chalega na ??

tere geeton ko apne hothon pe sajaataa rahaa
tu hai kareeb khud ko main samjhaataa rahaa

banke khwaab mere aankhon me jo aataa rahaa
wo meraa apna hai , ye mujhe bataataa rahaa

banke dhup , har din ki meri tu roshni bani
banke chandaa raaton ko tu hi aataa rahaa

koi dekh naa le kahin teri tasveer ko jaanaa
teri tasveer ko is jahaan se chhipaataa rahaa

muskuraaun, meri zindagi me koi wajah to nahi
tu hai meri ye soch ke main muskuraataa rahaa

ek 'Kasak' jo uth_ti thi is 'Hriday' me kabhi
wo banke aag, mere dil ko bas jalaataa rahaa

main dhundta rahaa tujhe jaane kahaan kahaan
naa mili tu kahin , main bas tadaptaa rahaa

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2012, 01:56:44 PM »

waah waahh
khoobsooraat

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behad khobsorat


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2012, 02:00:02 PM »

Very nice and full of innocent feelings.

Keep them coming and Mr. Hriday Nice reply.


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2012, 02:06:27 PM »

kya baat hai ana ji..bahut hi badhya andaz aur alfaz hai..isi trah likhte rahiye

hriday ji tareef to aapki karni padegi kya reply hai..ekdum mast


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2012, 02:08:31 PM »

Registan si ankhon ki pehli barish bani
Tere sukhe labon pe bikharti rahi Lehja

lehja tera jab bhi badalta raha.
Main bhi mausam ki tarha badalti rahi

Resha resha bunta raha tu mujhe.
Main har pal naye rang me dhalti rahi Applause

ye ashaar behad khoob rahe
Bahut bahut mubarakbaad Kasak jee
is khoobsurat kalaam par.
Dard bhare ashaar..par dard me bhi khushi..rang bharna naheen bhooli aap. sach hi to hai..dard hoga to aansu to bahenge hi..par jab koi dekhne vaala hi na ho to dikhaane ka kya fayda.
ye andaaz khoob raha..
aaj ke din 12.12.12 ko aapne nirala bana diya ye post kar.
bahut bahut accha laga padhkar..
aise hi likhti rahiye..
aati rahiye..
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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2012, 02:23:28 PM »

beautiful, awesome creation


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2012, 02:35:25 PM »

beautiful


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2012, 02:45:37 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 12, 2012, 01:11:09 PM

<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

Bahuttttttttttttt Bahutttttttttttttttt Khooooooooob!!!!!

Its a Pleasure to see u back Writing....

Bahut Hi Khoobsurti se aapne apne Ehsaaso Ko sajaya Hai lafzon mein..

Bahut AChe Dear..


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2012, 04:47:45 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 12, 2012, 01:11:09 PM

<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

gr8 ma'am


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2012, 06:59:31 PM »

Kasak Jee Aadaab!

M Realy happy to see you again with this nice post...
Behad khoobs ahsaas O khayaal aur umda adaaygi rahi aapki
is kalaam meiN...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe jee... Humari dheroN daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

And Kapil jee may bee humne aapki kalaam par reply diyaa hai
but woH instant post thi yeH nahi pata tha.. bahut khoob janab
bada achcha reply kiya hai aapne...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez..


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2012, 07:38:10 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 12, 2012, 01:11:09 PM

<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

nice


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2012, 08:10:51 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 12, 2012, 01:11:09 PM

<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

Ehsaason k samandar me doobti rahi
Tere lafzon me bigadti sanwarti rahi
mujhe ab tak aisa mauqa nahin mila .u r very lucky
Registan si ankhon ki pehli barish bani
Tere sukhe labon pe bikharti rahi
kya sharabi sher hai kasak .
Lehja lehja tera jab bhi badalta raha.
Main bhi mausam ki tarha badalti rahi
main is baat ki qayal nahin hoon. main utna hi sunti hoon jitna bardaasht kar sakoon
Resha resha bunta raha tu mujhe.
Main har pal naye rang me dhalti rahi
kya nasah hai ji aap ke lfzon mein main bhi fida ho gayi
*KasaK* keh rahi tumse ae meri zindagi.
Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi...!!

hasil e ghazal hua ye sher to. bahut khoob ji

nasheela andaaz hai kalaam ka....!


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #13 on: December 13, 2012, 02:11:05 AM »

kasak mohtarma umda bayaangi rahio aapki, is umda peshkash pe meri dheroN daad aur ek rau qubool farmaaiye....!! Usual Smile


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Re: <>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

«Reply #14 on: December 13, 2012, 03:34:57 AM »

Bohut khoob kasak jee umda peshkash hai dheerrron daaad qubool kareN


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