<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 12, 2012, 01:11:09 PM
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<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4  icon_flowerlove4 icon_flower love4
Ehsaason k samandar me doobti rahi
Tere lafzon me bigadti sanwarti rahi

Registan si ankhon ki pehli barish bani
Tere sukhe labon pe bikharti rahi

Lehja lehja tera jab bhi badalta raha.
Main bhi mausam ki tarha badalti rahi

Resha resha bunta raha tu mujhe.
Main har pal naye rang me dhalti rahi

*KasaK* keh rahi tumse ae meri zindagi.
Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi...!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 01:54:00 PM »
  Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou !

Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much for posting this  and coming back with your lovely post....!!!

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause taarif bhi karni padegi kyaa?Huh? padh to pehle hi chukaa hoon.. taarif bhi pehle kar chukaa.. ab bas reply hi de deta hoon kyun??? chalega na Huh???


tere  geeton  ko apne hothon pe sajaataa rahaa
tu hai kareeb  khud  ko  main  samjhaataa rahaa

banke khwaab mere aankhon me jo aataa rahaa
wo  meraa  apna   hai , ye mujhe bataataa rahaa

banke  dhup ,  har   din  ki   meri  tu roshni bani
banke  chandaa  raaton  ko  tu  hi  aataa  rahaa

koi  dekh  naa  le  kahin  teri   tasveer ko jaanaa
teri tasveer  ko  is  jahaan  se  chhipaataa  rahaa

muskuraaun, meri zindagi me koi wajah to  nahi
tu hai meri ye soch ke main  muskuraataa  rahaa

ek  'Kasak'  jo   uth_ti   thi  is  'Hriday' me kabhi
wo banke aag, mere dil  ko  bas   jalaataa  rahaa

main dhundta rahaa tujhe jaane kahaan kahaan
naa  mili  tu  kahin ,  main  bas  tadaptaa  rahaa

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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2012, 01:56:44 PM »
waah waahh
khoobsooraat

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

behad khobsorat
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2012, 02:00:02 PM »
Very nice and full of innocent feelings.

Keep them coming and Mr. Hriday Nice reply.
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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2012, 02:06:27 PM »
kya baat hai ana ji..bahut hi badhya andaz aur alfaz hai..isi trah likhte rahiye

hriday ji tareef to aapki karni padegi kya reply hai..ekdum mast
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2012, 02:08:31 PM »
Registan si ankhon ki pehli barish bani
Tere sukhe labon pe bikharti rahi Lehja

lehja tera jab bhi badalta raha.
Main bhi mausam ki tarha badalti rahi

Resha resha bunta raha tu mujhe.
Main har pal naye rang me dhalti rahi Applause Applause

ye ashaar behad khoob rahe
Bahut bahut mubarakbaad Kasak jee
is khoobsurat kalaam par.
Dard bhare ashaar..par dard me bhi khushi..rang bharna naheen bhooli aap. sach hi to hai..dard hoga to aansu to bahenge hi..par jab koi dekhne vaala hi na ho to dikhaane ka kya fayda.
ye andaaz khoob raha..
aaj ke din 12.12.12 ko aapne nirala bana diya ye post kar.
bahut bahut accha laga padhkar..
aise hi likhti rahiye..
aati rahiye..
Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2012, 02:23:28 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautiful, awesome creation
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2012, 02:35:25 PM »
beautiful
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2012, 02:45:37 PM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 12, 2012, 01:11:09 PM
<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4  icon_flowerlove4 icon_flower love4
Ehsaason k samandar me doobti rahi
Tere lafzon me bigadti sanwarti rahi

Registan si ankhon ki pehli barish bani
Tere sukhe labon pe bikharti rahi

Lehja lehja tera jab bhi badalta raha.
Main bhi mausam ki tarha badalti rahi

Resha resha bunta raha tu mujhe.
Main har pal naye rang me dhalti rahi

*KasaK* keh rahi tumse ae meri zindagi.
Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi...!!
 love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4  icon_flowerlove4 icon_flower love4


Bahuttttttttttttt Bahutttttttttttttttt Khooooooooob!!!!!

Its a Pleasure to see u back Writing.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Bahut Hi Khoobsurti se aapne apne Ehsaaso Ko sajaya Hai lafzon mein..

Bahut AChe Dear.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2012, 04:47:45 PM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 12, 2012, 01:11:09 PM
<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4  icon_flowerlove4 icon_flower love4
Ehsaason k samandar me doobti rahi
Tere lafzon me bigadti sanwarti rahi

Registan si ankhon ki pehli barish bani
Tere sukhe labon pe bikharti rahi

Lehja lehja tera jab bhi badalta raha.
Main bhi mausam ki tarha badalti rahi

Resha resha bunta raha tu mujhe.
Main har pal naye rang me dhalti rahi

*KasaK* keh rahi tumse ae meri zindagi.
Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi...!!
 love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4  icon_flowerlove4 icon_flower love4

gr8 ma'am
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«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2012, 06:59:31 PM »
Kasak Jee Aadaab!


M Realy happy to see you again with this nice post... Usual Smile
Behad khoobs ahsaas O khayaal aur umda adaaygi rahi aapki
is kalaam meiN... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe jee... Humari dheroN daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

And Kapil jee may bee humne aapki kalaam par reply diyaa hai
but woH instant post thi yeH nahi pata tha.. bahut khoob janab
bada achcha reply kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2012, 07:38:10 PM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 12, 2012, 01:11:09 PM
<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4  icon_flowerlove4 icon_flower love4
Ehsaason k samandar me doobti rahi
Tere lafzon me bigadti sanwarti rahi

Registan si ankhon ki pehli barish bani
Tere sukhe labon pe bikharti rahi

Lehja lehja tera jab bhi badalta raha.
Main bhi mausam ki tarha badalti rahi

Resha resha bunta raha tu mujhe.
Main har pal naye rang me dhalti rahi

*KasaK* keh rahi tumse ae meri zindagi.
Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi...!!
 love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4  icon_flowerlove4 icon_flower love4
nice
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«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2012, 08:10:51 PM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 12, 2012, 01:11:09 PM
<>* Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi. *<>

love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4  icon_flowerlove4 icon_flower love4
Ehsaason k samandar me doobti rahi
Tere lafzon me bigadti sanwarti rahi
mujhe ab tak aisa mauqa nahin mila .u r very lucky Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Registan si ankhon ki pehli barish bani
Tere sukhe labon pe bikharti rahi
kya sharabi sher hai kasak . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Lehja lehja tera jab bhi badalta raha.
Main bhi mausam ki tarha badalti rahi
main is baat ki qayal nahin hoon. main utna hi sunti hoon jitna bardaasht kar sakoon icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Resha resha bunta raha tu mujhe.
Main har pal naye rang me dhalti rahi
kya nasah hai ji aap ke lfzon mein main bhi fida ho gayi Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
*KasaK* keh rahi tumse ae meri zindagi.
Main shabnam thi sholon si jalti rahi...!!

hasil e ghazal hua ye sher to. bahut khoob ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4 icon_flower love4  icon_flowerlove4 icon_flower love4


nasheela andaaz hai kalaam ka....!
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«Reply #13 on: December 13, 2012, 02:11:05 AM »
kasak mohtarma umda bayaangi rahio aapki, is umda peshkash pe meri dheroN daad aur ek rau qubool farmaaiye....!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: December 13, 2012, 03:34:57 AM »
Bohut khoob kasak jee umda peshkash hai dheerrron daaad qubool kareN
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