!!!!!main sharaabi

by pritam tripathi on December 17, 2012, 05:38:49 PM
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kabhi tune kaha tha mujhe bewafa....
main sharabi bana to galat kya kiya...

main to peeta gaya tha mujhe na pata...
saath baitha mere koi saaki na tha..

jab talak thi sharab mere paimane me...
ye dukh tha mera jo mujhe pilata gaya...

botal khali kari magar mujhe na chadi...
ye to tera hi gam tha jo chada kar gaya...

raat bhar baithkar hum ye sochte rahe....
kya galti kari jo mujhe tu rula kar gaya
 
jab nikla sadak pr main jhoom kar...
logon ka tana mujhe nacha kar gaya....

subah utha to mujhko ye maaloom na tha...
raat me kaun shaks mujhko sula kar gaya...
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«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2012, 01:11:35 AM »
laajawaab
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2012, 04:06:00 AM »
kya bat kya bat
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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2012, 05:09:53 AM »
waah waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2012, 07:43:58 AM »
kya bat kya bat
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«Reply #5 on: December 18, 2012, 07:44:11 AM »
Pritam Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne waaH behad umda khayaal aur behad
khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai jee waaH...

Waqai bade umdaa khayaal rahe... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aapki kalam meiN achchi rawaani hai janab... thoda sa tecnicaly
correction kar lijiye... Aap gazab dhaoNge is ka andaaz ho raha
hai hume... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2012, 01:17:52 PM »
laajawaab
saini ji shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: December 18, 2012, 01:19:38 PM »
kya bat kya bat
prashad ji thanks
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2012, 01:20:28 PM »
waah waah waah bahut khoob
aqsh ji thanks
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«Reply #9 on: December 18, 2012, 01:21:40 PM »
kya bat kya bat
nand bandhu ji thanks
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«Reply #10 on: December 18, 2012, 01:25:04 PM »
Pritam Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne waaH behad umda khayaal aur behad
khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai jee waaH...

Waqai bade umdaa khayaal rahe... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aapki kalam meiN achchi rawaani hai janab... thoda sa tecnicaly
correction kar lijiye... Aap gazab dhaoNge is ka andaaz ho raha
hai hume... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


parwaaj ji aadaab
bahut bahut shukriya sir sarahne ke liye
aapne jo bhi kaha hai woh sar aankhon par
agli baar sahi karne ki kosis karunga
bas hi aise hi hausla badhate rahiye
thanks a lot sir
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