Main To Bas Usi Ka Tha,.

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Uski Pasand Wo Hi Jaane,.
Main To Bas Usi Ka Tha,.

Uske Liye Main Kuch Bhi Nahi,
Aur Wo Sawaal Meri Zindagi Ka Tha,.

Wo Mera Koi Lafz Na Jaane,.
Mujhe Andaaz Uski Khamoshi Ka Tha,.

Mili Na Use Kabhi Rahaat Mujhse,.
Main Khud Hatt Gaya Raste Se Uske,.
Sawal Jab Uski Khushi Ka Tha..

Jalana Parda Mujhe Apna Ghar "Doston,.
Jab Shehar Mein Masla Roshni Ka Tha,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2010, 08:37:02 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bht khub bhai ...bht pyara likha hai tumne...

yunhi likhte raho khush raho......
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2010, 08:50:10 PM »
Azeem Sahab Aadaab!

Janab kia kaheN ab aapki is kalaam par hum... Sach kah raheN hai jab humne yahaaN join kiya tab humne dekha yahaaN kaisi kaisi kalaam aati humare joi ke bad ke kuch din tak hume koi bhi aisi kalaam nahi mili jo dil ko waqai mutmaiN kar sake..  Par jab kuch achche shayaroN ko padha to thoda thik laga isliye ruk gaye yahaaN phir aapke ek do kalaam nazar se guzare jahaaN aapke ahsaas aur andaaz ki dil se waah nikali .... aapke kalam meiN utna zor nahi mehsus hua hume.. per aapke jazbe aur aapke khayaal ko lafzoN meiN dhalna behad achcha laga... Yeh IShq, Pyaar mohobbat dard per sabhi likhate hai aur koi badi baat nahi hai.... Par aap jaise jag bii per likhana yakeenan bahut badi baat hai ..... Salaam Janab Aapke jazbe ko dil se Salam..

Aapki yeh kalaam behad umdaa hai, Aur iska jazba agar koi samjh jaye to yakeenan aapne kai masoom bachoN ke qatiloN ko sahiN rasta dikhaya hai..... Allah aapko humesha khush rakhe.. Aur aapki kalam meiN beintehaaN zor bakhshe.... Aameen           

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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2010, 08:53:40 PM »
bahut khoob Azeem ji... bahut hi umda likha hai aapne... dil khush ho gaya ye padh ke...!!!

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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2010, 09:10:09 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bht khub bhai ...bht pyara likha hai tumne...

yunhi likhte raho khush raho......

Shukriya Sis,.
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2010, 03:22:31 AM »
Badi khubsoorat nazm hai Azeem bhaijan..hamesha hi parrne main maza ata hai..dil choo jate hai lavz apke..! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2010, 10:26:01 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem!!!

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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2010, 02:56:15 PM »
Shukriya Parwaaz Ji,.
Klaskar Ji,.
Rahim Bhai,.
khwaish Bhai,.
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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2011, 11:11:05 AM »
Bahut Khoob Azeem ji
Uski pasand vo hi jane mai to bas usi ka tha...
Uske liye mai kuch bhi nahi aur wo sawaal meri mai jindgi ka tha....

Is dard ka koi ilaaj nahi
hai, lekin vo mere paas nahi

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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2011, 08:08:58 PM »
Bahut Khoob Azeem ji
Uski pasand vo hi jane mai to bas usi ka tha...
Uske liye mai kuch bhi nahi aur wo sawaal meri mai jindgi ka tha....

Is dard ka koi ilaaj nahi
hai, lekin vo mere paas nahi



Shukriya MKV ji,.
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