Main use bepanah chahta rha.....soudagar

by soudagar on August 24, 2012, 04:01:33 AM
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Wo mere diye pyar ke khat jalata raha
phir bhi main use dil hi dil me chahta rha

har bar samne milne par wo najar churata rha
phir bhi main use apni aakhon me basata rha

har mehfil mein wo meri chaht ka majaq udata rha
phir bhi main uski hansi ke sang muskrata rha

har bar dil pe mere wo  chot pahunchata rha
phir bhi main uski rahon se kante uthata rha

wo bas mujhe chhod sabke sang batlata rha
phir bhi main use apne khawabo mein lata rha

wo  apne dil ke dard mujhse chhupata rha
 phir bhi main uske gam jaan unhe apnata rha

wo gairo ke sang apni khusiyan manata rha
main akela hi jashan uski khushi ka manata rha

har bar  dil tod wo mera mujhe rulaata rha
mera gunah itna tha main use bepanah chahta rha
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2012, 04:17:13 AM »
bahut khoob,achhi peshkash.dheron daad soudagar ji.
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2012, 04:26:10 AM »
bahut khoob soudagar beta hazaron daad
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2012, 04:48:02 AM »
pathar samajh vo mujhe thokar marta raha
phir bhi mai uspar apni jindgi nisar karta raha
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2012, 05:35:59 AM »
wah saudagar ji, dhero dad aapki iss rachna ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2012, 08:45:54 AM »
Bahut bahut bahut shukriya hasan sir
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2012, 08:57:52 AM »
bohat umda andaz achi ghazal bohat c daad....
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2012, 09:39:34 AM »
bahut khoob saudagar ji
lut jaate hai apni chahat ki khatir
luta dete hain to bhi apni chahat ki khatir

chahat kambakhat hai hi aisee cheeaz dosto
jismenlute raho aur luta do har cheez dosto
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2012, 11:21:37 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Soudagar ji... bahut sundar peshkash... bahut pasand aayaa mujhe ...!!!

mere chitaa ke aag se apna ghar roshan kiyaa usne
mere mohabbat ke badle me bas nafrat hi diyaa usne
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2012, 04:23:55 PM »
Bahut dard hai Karan Sahab
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa huaa bhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai
ye aapka field nahi ..khush rahiye

Bahut umda likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #10 on: August 24, 2012, 04:50:29 PM »
bahut bahut bahut shukriya saini sir bas aise hi apna aashirwad mujh par banaye rakhein
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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2012, 05:20:34 PM »
bahut khoob poonama ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2012, 09:36:11 PM »
very very nice
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2012, 02:36:05 AM »
very  very very nice.
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2012, 05:40:14 PM »
Shukriya nandbahu ji
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