**Maine kabhi socha na tha**

by dead heart on May 07, 2009, 05:36:15 AM
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dead heart
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Woh mujhe aise dokha degi,maine kabhi socha na thaa,
Ansuon ain dooba degi mere pyaar ko,maine kabhi socha na tha...

Haar baar pyaar pe nazmein likha karta tha Rahim,
Bewaffai pe ghazal likhunga,maine kabhi socha na tha...


Maaf kardena doston bahaut kam likh paya...
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 08:20:05 AM »
bahut khoob dh ji.
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salil2002
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 08:44:00 AM »
Woh mujhe aise dokha degi,maine kabhi socha na thaa,
Ansuon ain dooba degi mere pyaar ko,maine kabhi socha na tha...

Haar baar pyaar pe nazmein likha karta tha Rahim,
Bewaffai pe ghazal likhunga,maine kabhi socha na tha...


Maaf kardena doston bahaut kam likh paya...
rahim bhai kam ho ya zyaada ....jo bhi likha hai aapne dil se likha hai

mere khayalon k sheeshon mein
 har dum ek chehra rehta hain
jo mujhse jab hota hoon tanha
teri hi baatein kehta hain
qayi baar samjhaya maine usko
tujhe mujhse mohabbat nahin hai
magar phir bhi jaanu na uski main aadat
woh teri hi yaadon mein rehta hai
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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 09:25:48 AM »
Shukriya Salil bhaijan aur Madhuwesh jee...

Bahaut khoob Salil bhaijan... Applause
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 09:35:39 AM »
Woh mujhe aise dokha degi,maine kabhi socha na thaa,
Ansuon ain dooba degi mere pyaar ko,maine kabhi socha na tha...

Haar baar pyaar pe nazmein likha karta tha Rahim,
Bewaffai pe ghazal likhunga,maine kabhi socha na tha...


Maaf kardena doston bahaut kam likh paya...


zabardast likhaa hai aapney....D.H
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 03:16:39 PM »
Rahim, bohot achcha likha hai ! God bless you !

Nice addition Salil
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2009, 05:51:42 PM »
Rahim Bhai.. Alfaaz kam Ho ya zyada.. Basssss Dil Ko Chhoone Chahiye.. aur aapke Likhe Alfaaz apna kaam kar gaye hain..!! Dilon Ko Chhoo gaye Hain.. Bahut accha Likha hai aapne.. Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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dead heart
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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2009, 07:41:41 PM »
Shukriya Shukriya Mann bhaijan, Shihab bhaijan, Talat di aur K_A jee..Allah aap sabhi ko salamat rakhe aur khushi bakshe...
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