maiyyat

by salil2002 on October 11, 2008, 03:25:00 PM
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kii aaj dekha maine sapko sab mere paas thay
kuch thay muskura rahe aur kuch udaas thay
thi mehfil meri woh aakhri aur hum bekaraar thay
jiske liye zindgi di jaane woh kahaan thay

tumne toh kaha tha kii meri maut par aaoge
jab main sounga aakhri neend tum lori sunaoge
phir kyun aaj meri aakhri shaam main tum nahin thay
kyun har aankh nam thi phir bhi tum chup rahe thay

na socha tha kabhi kii tum itne patthar dil hoge
chaha tha ek baar toh mujhe apni baahon main loge
mar to raha hoon par is tarah zinda rahoonga
teri har hansi mein ek jhalak ban rahoonga
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2008, 05:36:40 PM »
Bohot Khoob Salil Applause
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pandit
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2008, 06:35:58 PM »
gud one sahil ji....
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salil2002
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2008, 05:46:45 AM »
again thnks to pandit bhai and celmira ji
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2008, 08:21:34 AM »
Nice One Salil Ji,.
Yunhi Bardte rahiye,.
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2008, 10:07:43 AM »
thnks bhai
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2008, 01:31:49 PM »
Bahut achhe salil...

Aakhri tha safar har shakhs ki aankh nam thi,
na jaane kyon teri aankhein ashqon se kam thi,
phir bhi chalo tasalli hui ye jaanke sanam,
Meri maut pe na afsoz na tujhe khwahish-e-gam thi...
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2008, 02:13:59 PM »
angel ji kya baat hai
mere mehboob na samajh tu bewafa mujhko
maine sirf tujhse mohabbat ki thi
main kaise dekhta tujhko jaate huye
tere saath meri rooh jo chal padi thi
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2008, 03:25:37 PM »
Bahut achhe salil...

Aakhri tha safar har shakhs ki aankh nam thi,
na jaane kyon teri aankhein ashqon se kam thi,
phir bhi chalo tasalli hui ye jaanke sanam,
Meri maut pe na afsoz na tujhe khwahish-e-gam thi...



bahut acche angel.......
yar muze yaha shayari.kese post karte he samz nahi a raha plz meri madat karo.....




ulfat me kabhi easa bhi hota he.....
hasti he ankhe magar dil rota he...
samazte he manjil jise ham apani.wo
hamsafr kisi aur ka hota he......
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2008, 02:51:45 AM »
angel ji kya baat hai
mere mehboob na samajh tu bewafa mujhko
maine sirf tujhse mohabbat ki thi
main kaise dekhta tujhko jaate huye
tere saath meri rooh jo chal padi thi


very nice...

maana tu bewafa nahi par wafayein tu nibha na saka,
waada kiya tha tune apni hifazat karne ka sada,
main rahun na rahun to bhi kya hai gila aye sanam,
iraada kiya tha tune zindagi ka saath nibhane ka sada...
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: October 13, 2008, 02:52:56 AM »


bahut acche angel.......
yar muze yaha shayari.kese post karte he samz nahi a raha plz meri madat karo.....




ulfat me kabhi easa bhi hota he.....
hasti he ankhe magar dil rota he...
samazte he manjil jise ham apani.wo
hamsafr kisi aur ka hota he......

Thanks...
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«Reply #11 on: October 13, 2008, 07:17:21 AM »
bohut khoob salil ji Applause
and nice reply u angel ji
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«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2008, 09:52:15 AM »
Nice One Again,.
Husnaina Ji,. And Salil,.
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«Reply #13 on: October 14, 2008, 02:20:49 PM »
Thanks bhawna and azeem...
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«Reply #14 on: October 16, 2008, 05:35:04 AM »
angel ji bahut achche ..............aap toh qaafi seekh gaye ho ha ha ha
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