MAJBOORIYON KI DASTAAN

by khwaish on August 06, 2008, 04:23:01 PM
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Waqt Ka Har Lamha Tayaar Hai Guzarne Ke Liye
Par Khauf Sa Hai,Har Shaks Ke Dil Mein,
Kehta Hai,Bahut Door Hai Meri Manzil,
Bahut Se  Kadam Baaki Hai,
Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Mein Chalne Ke Liye....


Gareebi Aur Muuflisi Ke daur Se
Jo Guzara Ho,
Phir Usse Darr Ki Baat Ka,
Varna Gham Ka Saaya Bhi Bahut Hota Hai Darne Ke Liye....

Usne Ujaalo Mein Bhi Apne Haath Mein Chirag Jalaye Rakha,
Jisne Ki Thi Mushakat Andhero Mein Chalne Ke Liye...

RIshte Nibhaane Walo Ko, Salaam Hai "KHWAISH" Ka,
Varna Aajkal Rishte Bante Hai Yahan Par Toot Kar Bikharne Ke Liye....

Koi Aena Aisa Bhi ho Jo Andar Ki Mail Ko Insaan Se Roobaroo Kara Sake,
Varna Bahut Aaene Hai Bazaar Mein Sajne-sawarne Ke Liye....

Kabhi Uss Shaks Se Pucho Majbooriyon Ki Dastaan,
Jo Ladta Hai Har Din Ek Nayi Jung Apne Halaat Se,
Sirf Do Pal Jeene Ke Liye....

Baat Karni Hai To Koi Faayde Ki Kar "KHWAISH"
varna Kis Ke Paas Kahan  Hai Waqt!!
Yahan Par Do Pal Bhi Teharne Ke Liye....

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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2008, 04:27:23 PM »
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Khwaish ji, app hamesha he insaani bhawnao per likhte hai, hamesha ki tarah bahoot achi tarah se apne yah rachna, rachi hai!!! yah lines to kamal ki likhi hai apen:

RIshte Nibhaane Walo Ko, Salaam Hai "KHWAISH" Ka,
Varna Aajkal Rishte Bante Hai Yahan Par Toot Kar Bikharne Ke Liye....

Koi Aena Aisa Bhi ho Jo Andar Ki Mail Ko Insaan Se Roobaroo Kara Sake,
Varna Bahut Aaene Hai Bazaar Mein Sajne-sawarne Ke Liye....
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2008, 05:25:10 PM »
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jo chand baaten insaan ko insaan banaye rakhe hue hai...unhe aapne bakhoobi shabdon ka jama pahnaya hai.....is anupam krati ke liye..badhai...khawish ji sweekar karen
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2008, 08:32:38 PM »
khwaish ji,

aapki soch ki baarikiyaan,aapki kalam ki awaaz,aapka likhne ka andaaz...yakeeenan aapke prati samman mein sada vridhi karvaata rehta hain mere antarmun mein.aapa shukriya.

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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2008, 04:40:42 AM »
Waqt Ka Har Lamha Tayaar Hai Guzarne Ke Liye
Par Khauf Sa Hai,Har Shaks Ke Dil Mein,
Kehta Hai,Bahut Door Hai Meri Manzil,
Bahut Se  Kadam Baaki Hai,
Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Mein Chalne Ke Liye....

RIshte Nibhaane Walo Ko, Salaam Hai "KHWAISH" Ka,
Varna Aajkal Rishte Bante Hai Yahan Par Toot Kar Bikharne Ke Liye....

Koi Aena Aisa Bhi ho Jo Andar Ki Mail Ko Insaan Se Roobaroo Kara Sake,
Varna Bahut Aaene Hai Bazaar Mein Sajne-sawarne Ke Liye....



wah wah ....
Bahut khoob Khwaish ji..bahut hi acha likha hai aap ne..
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2008, 05:34:01 AM »
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WAH WAH BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAIN APNE KHWAISH JI.
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2008, 06:02:13 AM »
Beautiful Creation Khwaish... Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2008, 04:42:51 PM »
Khwaish ji, apki rachna ko kai baar parra.. ajj kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.,. shayad pasand aaye..


Khauf ajj ke jamane mai her jagah paaya hai
Jitna bhi jaana zindagi ko, dil bhar ayya hai

Majboor hai her insaan, apne zajbaato main
Warna kaha kisi ne yaha per kuch bhi paaya hai

Bedard insaan bhi nahi khush, uske sawarth ne usse sataya hai
Mar mar kar jeete hai jo aoro ke liye, unhone bhi yaha kaya paaya hai

Garrebo ko maara gareebi ne, ameero ko lalach ne dafnaya hai
Her Rishte ki niv hue sawarthi, sari dunia ek moh-maya hai

Sahi kaha dost, yaha kaha kab kis ke paas, waqat paaya hai
Her koi kare intzaar sahi waqat ki, jo kabhi kisi ne, na paaya hai

Khauf ajj ke jamane mai her jagah paaya hai
Jitna bhi jaana zindagi ko, dil bhar ayya hai…
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2008, 06:56:03 AM »
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bahut hi khoobsurti se likha hai har sabd
bahut khoob khwaish ji

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pooja ji bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne
hamesha ki taeh
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2008, 11:35:03 AM »
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Khwaish ji, app hamesha he insaani bhawnao per likhte hai, hamesha ki tarah bahoot achi tarah se apne yah rachna, rachi hai!!! yah lines to kamal ki likhi hai apen:

RIshte Nibhaane Walo Ko, Salaam Hai "KHWAISH" Ka,
Varna Aajkal Rishte Bante Hai Yahan Par Toot Kar Bikharne Ke Liye....

Koi Aena Aisa Bhi ho Jo Andar Ki Mail Ko Insaan Se Roobaroo Kara Sake,
Varna Bahut Aaene Hai Bazaar Mein Sajne-sawarne Ke Liye....


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..Aapne Yeh Kavita ko Padha, samjha aur phir saraha..bahut bahut shukriya aapka...Kuch insaan ki majbooriyon par Likhna chahta tha,bas phir jo aaya likhta chala gaya...shukriya
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2008, 11:46:07 AM »
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jo chand baaten insaan ko insaan banaye rakhe hue hai...unhe aapne bakhoobi shabdon ka jama pahnaya hai.....is anupam krati ke liye..badhai...khawish ji sweekar karen

Bahut Bahut shukriya bekararji...
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2008, 11:50:44 AM »
khwaish ji,

aapki soch ki baarikiyaan,aapki kalam ki awaaz,aapka likhne ka andaaz...yakeeenan aapke prati samman mein sada vridhi karvaata rehta hain mere antarmun mein.aapa shukriya.

Prateek

Prateekji aapko yeh kavita pasand aayi,yeh jaankar behad khushi hui..Ummed karta hoon aap aage bhi yuhi saath dete rahoge..shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2008, 12:11:43 PM »
wah wah ....
Bahut khoob Khwaish ji..bahut hi acha likha hai aap ne..


Thankyou so much Punam for Appreciating!!
Bahut Acha Laga Aapko Yahan Dekh Kar...Thankyou
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2008, 02:59:09 AM »
Waqt Ka Har Lamha Tayaar Hai Guzarne Ke Liye
Par Khauf Sa Hai,Har Shaks Ke Dil Mein,
Kehta Hai,Bahut Door Hai Meri Manzil,
Bahut Se  Kadam Baaki Hai,
Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Mein Chalne Ke Liye....


Gareebi Aur Muuflisi Ke daur Se
Jo Guzara Ho,
Phir Usse Darr Ki Baat Ka,
Varna Gham Ka Saaya Bhi Bahut Hota Hai Darne Ke Liye....

Usne Ujaalo Mein Bhi Apne Haath Mein Chirag Jalaye Rakha,
Jisne Ki Thi Mushakat Andhero Mein Chalne Ke Liye...

RIshte Nibhaane Walo Ko, Salaam Hai "KHWAISH" Ka,
Varna Aajkal Rishte Bante Hai Yahan Par Toot Kar Bikharne Ke Liye....

Koi Aena Aisa Bhi ho Jo Andar Ki Mail Ko Insaan Se Roobaroo Kara Sake,
Varna Bahut Aaene Hai Bazaar Mein Sajne-sawarne Ke Liye....

Kabhi Uss Shaks Se Pucho Majbooriyon Ki Dastaan,
Jo Ladta Hai Har Din Ek Nayi Jung Apne Halaat Se,
Sirf Do Pal Jeene Ke Liye....

Baat Karni Hai To Koi Faayde Ki Kar "KHWAISH"
varna Kis Ke Paas Kahan  Hai Waqt!!
Yahan Par Do Pal Bhi Teharne Ke Liye....



Sach mein dilko chhu gayi aapki ye poem.
har ek lafz behtareen...
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2008, 03:13:37 PM »
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WAH WAH BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAIN APNE KHWAISH JI.

Bahut bahut shukriya ANKITJI..
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