MAJBOORIYON KI DASTAAN

by khwaish on August 06, 2008, 04:23:01 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 09, 2008, 03:15:52 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on August 07, 2008, 06:02:13 AM
Beautiful Creation Khwaish... Applause

Thanks a lot Mahiya...
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«Reply #16 on: September 09, 2008, 03:22:42 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 07, 2008, 04:42:51 PM
Khwaish ji, apki rachna ko kai baar parra.. ajj kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.,. shayad pasand aaye..


Khauf ajj ke jamane mai her jagah paaya hai
Jitna bhi jaana zindagi ko, dil bhar ayya hai

Majboor hai her insaan, apne zajbaato main
Warna kaha kisi ne yaha per kuch bhi paaya hai

Bedard insaan bhi nahi khush, uske sawarth ne usse sataya hai
Mar mar kar jeete hai jo aoro ke liye, unhone bhi yaha kaya paaya hai

Garrebo ko maara gareebi ne, ameero ko lalach ne dafnaya hai
Her Rishte ki niv hue sawarthi, sari dunia ek moh-maya hai

Sahi kaha dost, yaha kaha kab kis ke paas, waqat paaya hai
Her koi kare intzaar sahi waqat ki, jo kabhi kisi ne, na paaya hai

Khauf ajj ke jamane mai her jagah paaya hai
Jitna bhi jaana zindagi ko, dil bhar ayya hai…

Bahut Bahut khoob!! pooja aapki likhi iss kavita ki har ek line mein sachai bhari hai..bahut ache.. Applause Applause Applause
Aur Shukriya appke saath ka.. notworthy
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«Reply #17 on: September 09, 2008, 03:26:25 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on August 08, 2008, 06:56:03 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut hi khoobsurti se likha hai har sabd
bahut khoob khwaish ji

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pooja ji bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne
hamesha ki taeh
 Applause Applause Applause




Baadal

bahut bahut shukriya baadal..aap bhi kuch likhte to maza aata..
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«Reply #18 on: September 09, 2008, 03:29:30 PM »
Quote from: angel4u on August 18, 2008, 02:59:09 AM
Sach mein dilko chhu gayi aapki ye poem.
har ek lafz behtareen...


Bahut Bahut shukriya Angel aapka..aapne padha aur phir saraha..

thank you so much..
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«Reply #19 on: September 09, 2008, 07:53:55 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on September 09, 2008, 03:22:42 PM
Bahut Bahut khoob!! pooja aapki likhi iss kavita ki har ek line mein sachai bhari hai..bahut ache.. Applause Applause Applause
Aur Shukriya appke saath ka.. notworthy

Thanks Khwaish ji!
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«Reply #20 on: May 30, 2009, 05:32:54 PM »
too gud ...=]
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«Reply #21 on: June 01, 2009, 05:19:44 AM »
Quote from: urooj_love on May 30, 2009, 05:32:54 PM
too gud ...=]

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Urooj_Love Ji..
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