maN ye beyKal or bhi beKal ho jaaYegaa,....

by laaiba on May 06, 2013, 04:25:42 PM
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too jo  aankhon se oujhal ho jaaYe gaa,...
au.r bhi  dil  ghum se boujhal ho jaaYegaa,

saaTh meiRaa tum ne choDaa jo gar kabhee
dil ka gulshan phir se jungle ho jaaYe gaa,

gar mohabbat mein jafaa raa.s aa gayee
phir jeenaa mushkil hi har pal ho jaaYegaa
 
hij.r kee talKhee ko  sehtaa nahin hai ab,..
dil mohabBat mein hi paaGal ho jaaYegaa

yaa.d kee raaHon pe chalTaa rahaa Agar
man ye beykal or bhi beykal ho jaaYegaa,...
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2013, 04:54:41 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on May 06, 2013, 04:25:42 PM

too jo  aankhon se oujhal ho jaaYe gaa,...
au.r bhi  dil  ghum se boujhal ho jaaYegaa,

saaTh meiRaa tum ne choDaa jo gar kabhee
dil ka gulshan phir se jungle ho jaaYe gaa,

gar mohabbat mein jafaa raa.s aa gayee
yun to jeenaa or bhi mushkil ho jaaYegaa
 
hij.r kee talKhee ko  sehtaa nahin hai ab,..
dil mohabBat mein hi paaGal ho jaaYegaa

too meRey humRaa.h chaltaa rahaa to phir
raaStaa  bhee khoo.d  maNzil ho jaaYegaa,.

yaa.d kee raaHon pe chalTaa rahaa Agar
man ye beykal or bhi beykal ho jaaYegaa,...

veriii gud
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2013, 05:08:06 PM »
thnku,.......
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2013, 05:52:14 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2013, 05:54:52 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on May 06, 2013, 04:25:42 PM

too jo  aankhon se oujhal ho jaaYe gaa,...
au.r bhi  dil  ghum se boujhal ho jaaYegaa,

saaTh meiRaa tum ne choDaa jo gar kabhee
dil ka gulshan phir se jungle ho jaaYe gaa,

gar mohabbat mein jafaa raa.s aa gayee
yun to jeenaa or bhi mushkil ho jaaYegaa
 
hij.r kee talKhee ko  sehtaa nahin hai ab,..
dil mohabBat mein hi paaGal ho jaaYegaa

too meRey humRaa.h chaltaa rahaa to phir
raaStaa  bhee khoo.d  maNzil ho jaaYegaa,.

yaa.d kee raaHon pe chalTaa rahaa Agar
man ye beykal or bhi beykal ho jaaYegaa,...
waah waah lajawaab laaiba ji,,
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2013, 06:00:31 PM »
Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!


Kya baat hai jee waaH badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne, Ahsaas O khayaal behad umda aur khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

HaaN jee aapke kafiyoN meiN Manzil aur mushkil hum kafiye nahi baNte haiN... Kal, pal... chal jaise kafiye aayeNge.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...  bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2013, 06:18:00 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

  Laiba ji,
          bahut umda ghazal likhi hai, waaaaah waaaaaaaah
                      
               ......... S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2013, 06:25:05 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on May 06, 2013, 04:25:42 PM

too jo  aankhon se oujhal ho jaaYe gaa,...
au.r bhi  dil  ghum se boujhal ho jaaYegaa,

saaTh meiRaa tum ne choDaa jo gar kabhee
dil ka gulshan phir se jungle ho jaaYe gaa,

gar mohabbat mein jafaa raa.s aa gayee
yun to jeenaa or bhi mushkil ho jaaYegaa
 
hij.r kee talKhee ko  sehtaa nahin hai ab,..
dil mohabBat mein hi paaGal ho jaaYegaa

too meRey humRaa.h chaltaa rahaa to phir
raaStaa  bhee khoo.d  maNzil ho jaaYegaa,.

yaa.d kee raaHon pe chalTaa rahaa Agar
man ye beykal or bhi beykal ho jaaYegaa,...


Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoooob laaiba Ji...

too jo  aankhon se oujhal ho jaaYe gaa,...
au.r bhi  dil  ghum se boujhal ho jaaYegaa,

saaTh meiRaa tum ne choDaa jo gar kabhee
dil ka gulshan phir se jungle ho jaaYe gaa,

hij.r kee talKhee ko  sehtaa nahin hai ab,..
dil mohabBat mein hi paaGal ho jaaYegaa

 Waaah Waaah Waaah.......Bahut Hi Khoonbsurat Aur Dilkash Ashaar..

Haan,Agar Aap Woh Kaafiye Ko Badal Sako Yeh Ghazal Aur Bhi Be-Misaal Ho Jaaye

Bahut Ache Laaiba Ji..

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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2013, 06:45:58 PM »
shukria islaah ke liye parwaz ji or khwaish ji ,........
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2013, 08:09:30 PM »
Nice......
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2013, 08:44:31 PM »
Bohat Khub Laaiba Jee!

yaa.d kee raaHon pe chalTaa rahaa Agar man
ye beykal or bhi beykal ho jaaYegaa,...




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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2013, 12:51:06 AM »
bahut Khoob......
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2013, 02:21:05 AM »
Bahut Khub Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab
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«Reply #13 on: May 07, 2013, 12:31:40 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: May 08, 2013, 03:40:17 PM »
bahut   khoob   laiba  jee ,  dheron  daad.....
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