Mana ki tum

by honeyrose on December 12, 2007, 12:00:25 PM
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Mana ki tum jeete ho zamane k lye,
ek bar jee k to dekho hamare liye.
dil ki kya aukaat apke samne,
hum to jaan bhi de denghe
apko pane ke liye.

Apni palko par kisiko na bithao,
kyuki palko par to sapne baste hai,
bithana hai to dil me bithao,
kyuki dil me sirf apne baste hai.

Khasmosh say lab ankhoon
main nami hoti hai
Teri yaad jo aati hai to kuch
aaisi aada hoti hai
 
Ankhoon ko band kar k us ko
main sochoon to
Khamosh andharay main
bas uski nigaah hoti hai

kabhi to bahar aayege
kabhi to zindagi muskurayege
rote huey hans denge hum
unke aagosh mei kho jayenge hum
sad5
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2007, 12:46:53 PM »
Nice collections...thanks for sharing with us.
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2007, 01:14:48 PM »
good 1 full of emotions...
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HumTum is back
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2007, 11:56:22 AM »
Honey ....  nice sharing. 


Chehra jo hatta du chehre se
Tujhe log kahenge harjaai
Majboor hoom mein dil ke hathon
Manzuur nahin teri ruswaai !!
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2007, 12:22:31 PM »
Manzuur nahin teri ruswaai !! ...nice lines HumTim ji..
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2007, 12:29:09 PM »
Thank Honey!


Le chla jaan meri ruth ke jana tera
Aseey aane se to acha tha na aana tera
Tu jo ae zulf pareshaan rha karti thi
kiske ujade dil mein hai thikana tera !!
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«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2007, 12:33:36 PM »
Good one
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2007, 06:04:06 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2007, 09:31:46 PM »
Bohat khoob Honeyrose & HumTum...
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ppradeep_kkumar
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2007, 04:51:51 AM »
hi how r u. mughe aapki shyari bhout aachi lagi.

kya hum aache dost ban sakte hain. plz tell me,

my contact no. 9910779689

i wait for your call.


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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2007, 06:39:22 AM »
wah wah! wah wah!
Mana ki tum jeete ho zamane k lye,
ek bar jee k to dekho hamare liye.
dil ki kya aukaat apke samne,
hum to jaan bhi de denghe
apko pane ke liye.

Apni palko par kisiko na bithao,
kyuki palko par to sapne baste hai,
bithana hai to dil me bithao,
kyuki dil me sirf apne baste hai.

Khasmosh say lab ankhoon
main nami hoti hai
Teri yaad jo aati hai to kuch
aaisi aada hoti hai
 
Ankhoon ko band kar k us ko
main sochoon to
Khamosh andharay main
bas uski nigaah hoti hai

kabhi to bahar aayege
kabhi to zindagi muskurayege
rote huey hans denge hum
unke aagosh mei kho jayenge hum
sad5
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kudrat
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2007, 07:53:13 AM »
mask keep writing please i am your big fan
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jassworld
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2007, 08:34:44 AM »
Mana ki tum jeete ho zamane k lye,
ek bar jee k to dekho hamare liye.
dil ki kya aukaat apke samne,
hum to jaan bhi de denghe
apko pane ke liye.

Apni palko par kisiko na bithao,
kyuki palko par to sapne baste hai,
bithana hai to dil me bithao,
kyuki dil me sirf apne baste hai.

Khasmosh say lab ankhoon
main nami hoti hai
Teri yaad jo aati hai to kuch
aaisi aada hoti hai
 
Ankhoon ko band kar k us ko
main sochoon to
Khamosh andharay main
bas uski nigaah hoti hai

kabhi to bahar aayege
kabhi to zindagi muskurayege
rote huey hans denge hum
unke aagosh mei kho jayenge hum
sad5

Arz hai..!! Gaur kariyega..!!

"Yun milke mulakaat na ho saki,
honth kaampe magar baat na ho saki,
Meri khamosh nighaein har baat keh gayi,
aur unki shikayat hai ki baat na ho saki..!!"
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mask
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2007, 08:54:36 AM »
zarranawaji ka shukriya..

magar abhi to hamne kuch kaha bhi nahi
   hui shab, lagi pyas, chale aaye yunhi

hai saman baithne bithane ka,
   kuch peene ka aur pilane ka
afsaane sunane ka aur sunane ka
   aa jau, le lo maza tarranum ka

ke aaj fir hui jawan mehfil-e-yaar hai
   aa gaye voh ghadi, isika to intezaar hai

chalkenge fir pyale aaj sharab main
  maaf karna khuda, fir na kah dun kuch teri shaan main

hu main parwana aur jalne ki pyaas hai
   gira de nakab ek baar bas yahi aas hai


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jassworld
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«Reply #14 on: December 14, 2007, 09:26:49 AM »
zarranawaji ka shukriya..

magar abhi to hamne kuch kaha bhi nahi
   hui shab, lagi pyas, chale aaye yunhi

hai saman baithne bithane ka,
   kuch peene ka aur pilane ka
afsaane sunane ka aur sunane ka
   aa jau, le lo maza tarranum ka

ke aaj fir hui jawan mehfil-e-yaar hai
   aa gaye voh ghadi, isika to intezaar hai

chalkenge fir pyale aaj sharab main
  maaf karna khuda, fir na kah dun kuch teri shaan main

hu main parwana aur jalne ki pyaas hai
   gira de nakab ek baar bas yahi aas hai




kya baat hai mask..bahut khoob..
Aapka andaaz bahut hi pasand aaya..!!

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