Manane nhi aaya..Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 18, 2011, 02:10:03 PM
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Ek arse se naraaz baithi hu,
koi mujhe manane nhi aaya,

dil mein judai ki aag lagi hai,
koi use bujhane nhi aaya,

bechain hai dil sadiyo se merra,
koi mujhe behelane nhi aaya,

shama kab ki bujh chuki hai aashao ki,
koi use jalane nhi aaya,

sabne khilone ki tarah istemal kiya,
koi mujhe apna banane nhi aaya,

phool muskurahat k le jate hai sab,
koi merra gulistan mahekane nhi aaya,

gumo ka dher ban gyi hai zindgi merri,
koi merra jahan sajane nhi aaya,

ehsan bahut logo ne jataye hai..
koi aaj tak merra sath nibhane nhi aaya.........
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2011, 03:30:40 PM »
Bahaut dard bhara likha hai di..
Aur shayad mere dil kay jazbaat saaf
zahir kar diye apne iss kalam main..
Dil ki gehrayion se daad..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2011, 03:42:20 PM »
Shukriya rahim....
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2011, 04:31:51 PM »
Brokenluv ji---
aaj sahi mayne me aapne apne iss user id ko sarthak kiya.
well poetry ki baat karen to
Shandaar Zazbaat wit lajawaab ehsaas.
gussa bhi pyar bhi aur dard bhi.
3 chijon ka khubsurat milawat.
jaisa ki aapki post mujhe hamesha ek saddy ehsaas karati hai aaj bhi wahi hua.
""
apne zazbaaton ko zinda rakh
           kuchh din aur
hadd ki inteha ho jaane de ab
           kuchh din aur
""
aas ki deep ko jalaye rakh
         kuch din aur
snam ko betaqlluf me bhulaye rakh
   kuch din aur !
""
thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2011, 04:54:21 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya nirala ji..merri har post mein zyadatar gum rehta hai per har alfaz sache dil se likha hota hai aur aap jaise dosto k itne khubsurat comments ko padhkar merra dard kuch hadh tak kam ho jata hai.shukriya ji..aur bahut khoob likha hai apne..Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2011, 05:09:29 PM »
 sad5 sad5 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
no words to describe what i m feeling
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2011, 05:16:00 PM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 18, 2011, 05:09:29 PM
sad5 sad5 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
no words to describe what i m feeling

I can understand...wont ask u too say anything more..Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2011, 05:19:31 PM »
Geet ji bahut achhi poem hai aapki...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


mein aaya na manaane ko.......Humnaam
Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 18, 2011, 02:10:03 PM


Ek arse se naraaz baithi hu,
koi mujhe manane nhi aaya,

dil mein judai ki aag lagi hai,
koi use bujhane nhi aaya,

bechain hai dil sadiyo se merra,
koi mujhe behelane nhi aaya,

shama kab ki bujh chuki hai aashao ki,
koi use jalane nhi aaya,

sabne khilone ki tarah istemal kiya,
koi mujhe apna banane nhi aaya,

phool muskurahat k le jate hai sab,
koi merra gulistan mahekane nhi aaya,

gumo ka dher ban gyi hai zindgi merri,
koi merra jahan sajane nhi aaya,

ehsan bahut logo ne jataye hai..
koi aaj tak merra sath nibhane nhi aaya.........
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2011, 06:15:13 PM »
Bahut Sunder Likha Hai Aapne Geet Ji Itna Dard Bhara Ehsaas Phir Sath Mein Itna Gussa Wah Kya Baat Hai Phir Pyar Bhi Chalka Diya..
Wah Wah.. Har Baar Ki Tarah Bahut Khub Applause Applause


U Na Tum Mujhe Itna Yaad Kiya Karo
U Apne Dard Ka Mujhe Ehsaas Na Dilaya Karo

Khudko Tum Akele Hone Ka Tana Na Diya Karo
Apni Yadoon Ka Gila Shikwa Bhi Na Kiya Karo

Kyu Itna Gussa Dikhati Ho Tum Mujh Par
Kabhi Pyar Se Bhi Samjha Diya Karo

Pta Hai Tumhe Bahut Yaad Aati Hai Ab Meri
Par Meri Majburio Ko Bhi Samjha Jaya Karo

Kya Btayen Tumko Kitna Karte Hai Yaad
Hisab Lagana Ho To Apni Sansien Geen Liya Karo
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2011, 03:14:57 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya anaam ji n shihab ji...
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2011, 03:16:04 PM »
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 18, 2011, 06:15:13 PM
Bahut Sunder Likha Hai Aapne Geet Ji Itna Dard Bhara Ehsaas Phir Sath Mein Itna Gussa Wah Kya Baat Hai Phir Pyar Bhi Chalka Diya..
Wah Wah.. Har Baar Ki Tarah Bahut Khub Applause Applause


U Na Tum Mujhe Itna Yaad Kiya Karo
U Apne Dard Ka Mujhe Ehsaas Na Dilaya Karo

Khudko Tum Akele Hone Ka Tana Na Diya Karo
Apni Yadoon Ka Gila Shikwa Bhi Na Kiya Karo

Kyu Itna Gussa Dikhati Ho Tum Mujh Par
Kabhi Pyar Se Bhi Samjha Diya Karo

Pta Hai Tumhe Bahut Yaad Aati Hai Ab Meri
Par Meri Majburio Ko Bhi Samjha Jaya Karo

Kya Btayen Tumko Kitna Karte Hai Yaad
Hisab Lagana Ho To Apni Sansien Geen Liya Karo

Bahut bahut shukriya rishi ji bahut khoob likha apne....shukriya ji...
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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2011, 03:19:46 PM »
geet ji.........ab kya kahu me.....

wese ek tnsn he muje aaj apki ye 2 post dekhi he jo aaj ki nahi pahle ki he......ye kaha rah jati he ........nahi dekh pata to mera nuksaan tha na........well wese is post ke jawab me mene kuch dino pahle ek post ki thi......shayad apne bhi dekhi hogi......iske jawab me kafi sahi he wo...

lijiye pesh he........aur ha apne jo likha he bahot hi umda he...

Ruthi He Wo Ek Arse Se
Aaj Muoka He Muje Use Manane To Do

Le Agosh Me Gile Shikwe  Dur Kar Dunga Ek Pal Me
Aa Gaya Hu Unke Dar Par Unhe Bhi Kadam Badane To Do

Ye Hi To Rasme He Ishq Ki Gahraiyo Ki
Aaj Na Thamo Muje Ye Rasme Nibhane To Do

Kyu Karte Ho Meri Mout Ka Intjaar Ee Duniya Walo
In Sasoo  Ki Kadiyo Ko Ek Martba Tut Jane To Do

Aajmana He Muje Aaj  Apni Is Mohhabat Ko
Use Do Kadam Chalne Aur Dagmagane To Do

Anjaam – E – Kahani  To Hume Bhi Pata He Aur Unhe Bhi He
Jo Sunenge Dastan Meri Ishq Ki Unke Liye Ise Dilchasp Banane To Do………………………….
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2011, 03:21:58 PM »
Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Humesha Ki tarah bahutttttttt Khoob!!!!

Humesha Di tarah lajawaab Ji..tooooo Good

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«Reply #13 on: January 19, 2011, 03:23:19 PM »
Quote from: Matrix Guy on January 19, 2011, 03:19:46 PM
geet ji.........ab kya kahu me.....

wese ek tnsn he muje aaj apki ye 2 post dekhi he jo aaj ki nahi pahle ki he......ye kaha rah jati he ........nahi dekh pata to mera nuksaan tha na........well wese is post ke jawab me mene kuch dino pahle ek post ki thi......shayad apne bhi dekhi hogi......iske jawab me kafi sahi he wo...

lijiye pesh he........aur ha apne jo likha he bahot hi umda he...

Ruthi He Wo Ek Arse Se
Aaj Muoka He Muje Use Manane To Do

Le Agosh Me Gile Shikwe  Dur Kar Dunga Ek Pal Me
Aa Gaya Hu Unke Dar Par Unhe Bhi Kadam Badane To Do

Ye Hi To Rasme He Ishq Ki Gahraiyo Ki
Aaj Na Thamo Muje Ye Rasme Nibhane To Do

Kyu Karte Ho Meri Mout Ka Intjaar Ee Duniya Walo
In Sasoo  Ki Kadiyo Ko Ek Martba Tut Jane To Do

Aajmana He Muje Aaj  Apni Is Mohhabat Ko
Use Do Kadam Chalne Aur Dagmagane To Do

Anjaam – E – Kahani  To Hume Bhi Pata He Aur Unhe Bhi He
Jo Sunenge Dastan Meri Ishq Ki Unke Liye Ise Dilchasp Banane To Do………………………….

Waah bahut khoob utkarsh ji...aur shukriya merri kavita ko pasand karne k liye...iska reply zarur karna chahungi jald hi laut kar karungi..
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«Reply #14 on: January 19, 2011, 03:27:52 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 19, 2011, 03:21:58 PM
Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Humesha Ki tarah bahutttttttt Khoob!!!!

Humesha Di tarah lajawaab Ji..tooooo Good

  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut shukriya ji tusi ande nhi ho per aaj aaye te merre thread te nazar paayi shukriya oda..Usual Smile
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