mann ambar se..... manjum

by manjum on April 02, 2011, 08:15:18 AM
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Mann ambar se jab aansu ka baadal jharta hai.
Tum kya jano mann ke andar kya bikharta hai.

Banana chahte hain kab ham bandh nayano par,
Inhin aansu main dhulke ye mann aur nikharta hai.

Giri bijli jo sapnon par to ghabarane se kya hoga,
Inhin kuchh awasaron par hontho par ek geet tirta hai.

Wo jab aayi thi ik aandhi wo parawar aaya tha,
Usi main bhiga hai ye mann aur ab tak nitarta hai.

Subah patton pe jab dikhti hain nanhin oss ki bunde,,
Karo viswas suna "mann" fir se sanwarta hai.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2011, 08:21:17 AM »
uff…
bht umda ghazal.
jada kuch bolne ko shabd nahi mere pass.
be happy
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2011, 08:23:52 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya niralaji.... aapne pasand kiya....

sath rahiega.....
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2011, 08:24:13 AM »
Quote from: manjum on April 02, 2011, 08:15:18 AM
Mann ambar se jab aansu ka baadal jharta hai.
Tum kya jano mann ke andar kya bikharta hai.

Banana chahte hain kab ham bandh nayano par,
Inhin aansu main dhulke ye mann aur nikharta hai.

Giri bijli jo sapnon par to ghabarane se kya hoga,
Inhin kuchh awasaron par hontho par ek geet tirta hai.

Wo jab aayi thi ik aandhi wo parawar aaya tha,
Usi main bhiga hai ye mann aur ab tak nitarta hai.

Subah patton pe jab dikhti hain nanhin oss ki bunde,,
Karo viswas suna "mann" fir se sanwarta hai.

manju "mann"







Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Anju ji..

Lajawaab!!! Hauslo Ko Buland Karti Hui Yeh peshkash Mann Ko Lubha Gayi..


Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas

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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2011, 08:27:08 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji....... aapne pasand kiya....

duaye dete rahie... sath rahie........
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2011, 10:10:36 AM »
bht bht khoob manju ji...
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2011, 03:49:10 PM »
Manjum Jee Aadaab!

Aapki kalaam ho to aur bhi dilchhaspi badh jati hai padhne meiN humari... KyuN ke aapke ahsaas O khayaal to khoob hai hi aur aapki bayaani bhi behad khoob rahti isliye... Usual Smile

Chaliye aapki kalaam par aate haiN.... Usual Smile

           


Quote from: manjum on April 02, 2011, 08:15:18 AM
Mann ambar se jab aansu ka baadal jharta hai.
Tum kya jano mann ke andar kya bikharta hai.

Behad sahiN farmaya Manjum jee daad Usual Smile
Waqai koi kia jaane kise ke dil ka haal Usual Smile         

Banana chahte hain kab ham bandh nayano par,
Inhin aansu main dhulke ye mann aur nikharta hai.

Muaf kijiyeNga Manjum jee hume aapki paheli line samajh nahi aayi... Means hume aapka yeH sher hi samjh nahi aaya icon_scratch         

Giri bijli jo sapnon par to ghabarane se kya hoga,
Inhin kuchh awasaron par hontho par ek geet tirta hai.

Waah yeH behad khoo kaha hai daad daad Usual Smile         

Wo jab aayi thi ik aandhi wo parawar aaya tha,
Usi main bhiga hai ye mann aur ab tak nitarta hai.

Hmmm kafi achcha sher hai daad Usual Smile         

Subah patton pe jab dikhti hain nanhin oss ki bunde,,
Karo viswas suna "mann" fir se sanwarta hai.

Maqta bhi bahut achcha raha Manjum jee daad Usual Smile         

manju "mann"



Aise hi likhate rahiye..
Koshish Jari rakhiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2011, 03:57:15 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
MAST Poem Manju.....khoob achhe shabdon ka upyog aur behtareen bhaav....

Kaise naapoge mere mann kee peer
Rehte ho tum dost nadiya kay teer
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2011, 06:21:41 PM »
BAHUT KHUB

Quote from: manjum on April 02, 2011, 08:15:18 AM
Mann ambar se jab aansu ka baadal jharta hai.
Tum kya jano mann ke andar kya bikharta hai.

Banana chahte hain kab ham bandh nayano par,
Inhin aansu main dhulke ye mann aur nikharta hai.

Giri bijli jo sapnon par to ghabarane se kya hoga,
Inhin kuchh awasaron par hontho par ek geet tirta hai.

Wo jab aayi thi ik aandhi wo parawar aaya tha,
Usi main bhiga hai ye mann aur ab tak nitarta hai.

Subah patton pe jab dikhti hain nanhin oss ki bunde,,
Karo viswas suna "mann" fir se sanwarta hai.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2011, 07:42:27 PM »
Bahut hi taazgi bhara kalaam raha manju mann ji..
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2011, 03:55:33 AM »
Quote from: manjum on April 02, 2011, 08:15:18 AM
Mann ambar se jab aansu ka baadal jharta hai.
Tum kya jano mann ke andar kya bikharta hai.

Banana chahte hain kab ham bandh nayano par,
Inhin aansu main dhulke ye mann aur nikharta hai.

Giri bijli jo sapnon par to ghabarane se kya hoga,
Inhin kuchh awasaron par hontho par ek geet tirta hai.

Wo jab aayi thi ik aandhi wo parawar aaya tha,
Usi main bhiga hai ye mann aur ab tak nitarta hai.

Subah patton pe jab dikhti hain nanhin oss ki bunde,,
Karo viswas suna "mann" fir se sanwarta hai.

manju "mann"


Very Impressive Creation ..... Manjum Ji !

Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... !!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2011, 03:39:46 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya manzilji....... sath dene ke lie...

sath rahiega......
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2011, 03:45:25 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya parwazji.....

hame bhi jab bhi kuchh likhte hain to aapke coment ka intzar hota hai...

parwazji  aapne jo dusre sher ki baat kahi to ham kahna chah rahe the ki... jaise nadi ke pani ko rokne ke lie bandh (dam) banaya jata hai pani bahar na aa sake... to ham aapne aankho main koi dam nahin banana chahte matlab aansuo ko rikna nahin chahte.... pata nahin bata pae ki nahin ki ham kya kahna chah rahe the......

yahi wajh hai ki aapke comment ka intzar rahta hai ki aap ek ek baat ko samjhte aur samjhate hain..

sath rahiyega.....
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2011, 03:47:24 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya annamji.... bas kuchh hindi shabdo ka prayog kiya hai... pasand karne ke lie thanks... aapki line bhi sundar aur bahut badiya hain..

sath rahie.....
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«Reply #14 on: April 04, 2011, 03:49:41 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya shihabji.......

pasand karne ke lie...

sath rahie.......
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