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marhoom bahayaat
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taptish ke liye mera hi ghar mila.
karne ko qalam mera hi sar mila.
raha hamesha aalam-e-khiza aitraaf mere.
bahut mushkil se sooka shajar mila.
raha dur-b-dur apne hi shahr mein.
puchoo.N sawaal zindagi se kabhi gar mila.
hui fanaa khaqsaari jaane kaise jahaan se.
darmiyaan khudgarzi ke her ek bashar mila.
mohabbat-o-kuloos MARHOOM ka zayaa hota raha.
mere hi marham ko zakhm aksar mila.
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2012, 04:17:38 PM » |
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Bahut khoob MB saheb Kya baat hai.. matle se maqte tak..dard hi dard janaab. Bahut hi umda kalaam  |
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2012, 04:18:43 PM » |
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MARHOOM BAHAYAT SAHEB , BAHUT BAHUT KHUBSURAT GHAZAL HAI .
KAISE TAAREEF KARUN . PARH KE TABIAT KHUSH HO GAI .
BAHUT MUBARAKBAAD.
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2012, 04:55:17 PM » |
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Bahut khoob ayse hi likhte rahiye Darmiyaa khudgarji ke her ek basar mila khuda ne pahle hi kah diya dunya to hai dard phir tu dard se kyun bahagne laga
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 05:54:34 PM » |
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taptish ke liye mera hi ghar mila.
karne ko qalam mera hi sar mila.
raha hamesha aalam-e-khiza aitraaf mere.
bahut mushkil se sooka shajar mila.
raha dur-b-dur apne hi shahr mein.
puchoo.N sawaal zindagi se kabhi gar mila.
hui fanaa khaqsaari jaane kaise jahaan se.
darmiyaan khudgarzi ke her ek bashar mila.
mohabbat-o-kuloos MARHOOM ka zayaa hota raha.
mere hi marham ko zakhm aksar mila.
khub' apni barbadi ka manoj kis kis se karta gila mera naseeb hi jab meri badnasibi se gale mila |
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2012, 07:09:43 PM » |
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bahot khoob,
simply superb!
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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2012, 12:34:49 AM » |
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Laajawaab balki superb bahut bahut mubarak baad
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2012, 12:51:51 AM » |
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very nice
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2012, 02:27:16 AM » |
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Marhoom jee bade dino baad aap ko paRhaa .........bahut khoob! ek achchhee ghazal par dheroN mubaarakbaad kubool farmaayeN.......
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«Reply #10 on: September 22, 2012, 04:48:58 AM » |
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Superbbbbbb ,dard me dubi hue gajal pesh ki hain apne marhoom Sahab ji ..
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«Reply #11 on: September 22, 2012, 04:53:27 AM » |
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nice......
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«Reply #12 on: September 22, 2012, 09:55:33 AM » |
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«Reply #13 on: September 22, 2012, 12:19:01 PM » |
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Bahut khoob MB saheb Kya baat hai.. matle se maqte tak..dard hi dard janaab. Bahut hi umda kalaam thank you sir |
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«Reply #14 on: September 22, 2012, 02:45:07 PM » |
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Waah waah mb ji kya kehne. Zabardast qalaam !!
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