Marna Acha Laga

by pakipimpsta on May 08, 2009, 05:48:30 PM
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Dor say deka tujay  to acha laga,
isleay main agay bharnay laga,
jab kareeb aya to tum na miley,
to teray darwazay kay samnay bheat kay marna acha laga....

By:Waqar
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2009, 05:51:36 PM »
nice lines pakipimpsta ji!!

Hokar juda teri gali main sakoon paya
bahoot ghumi dunia,
per tri gali sa na kahin skoon paya!!
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pakipimpsta
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2009, 05:55:40 PM »
shukriya  pooja ji!!

sakoon aj kal khana milta hai wasay:p
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2009, 06:08:57 PM »
skoon milta nahi, upjaana padta hai
armaano apne ko, khud he samjhana padta hai
jab ban jaaye santulan, dil aor armaano ke bich
bas wahin per sakoon ko basana padta hai!!!


Upjaana shabd is liye use kiya gaya hai ki .. jis tarah jameen per hal chala kar, kissan fasal ugata hai... ussi tarah insaan ko apne atma per vicharo ka hal chala kar... sakoon ko apne dil main upjaana padta hai!!

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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2009, 06:17:52 PM »
Nice one Paki Ji
N really good response Pooja Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2009, 12:57:04 AM »
bahut khoob waqar ji n pooja ji.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2009, 05:02:18 AM »
Dor say deka tujay  to acha laga,
isleay main agay bharnay laga,
jab kareeb aya to tum na miley,
to teray darwazay kay samnay bheat kay marna acha laga....

By:Waqar

Bahoot bahoot khoob Pakipimsta Ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2009, 05:05:24 AM »
nice lines pakipimpsta ji!!

Hokar juda teri gali main sakoon paya
bahoot ghumi dunia,
per tri gali sa na kahin skoon paya!!
skoon milta nahi, upjaana padta hai
armaano apne ko, khud he samjhana padta hai
jab ban jaaye santulan, dil aor armaano ke bich
bas wahin per sakoon ko basana padta hai!!!


Upjaana shabd is liye use kiya gaya hai ki .. jis tarah jameen per hal chala kar, kissan fasal ugata hai... ussi tarah insaan ko apne atma per vicharo ka hal chala kar... sakoon ko apne dil main upjaana padta hai!!



Wah wah Pooja DI kya baat kahi hai aapne.. The Explaination is Really Worthy.. Isse hume bhi kuch sikhne ko mil gaya.. As always U r too Good! Usual Smile
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pakipimpsta
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2009, 04:51:57 AM »
very nice pooja jee and thank you everyone for your support:p
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2009, 06:03:29 AM »
Nice one Paki Ji
Pooja ji bahut achha support kiya hai aapne Applause Applause
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