-Marne Ki Dua Karo-

by Meena is back on January 11, 2006, 05:48:19 PM
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ek koshish...

Lambi umar ki nahin humare marne ki dua karo dosto,
Ke zindagi humari gumon ke samundar me doobne lagi,

Ek umar guzar di kaanton ki sej pe humne,
Ab nazuk phoolon ki chuan bhi hume chubne lagi,

Gum ke saye se gire hai hum kya denge kisi ko kushi ki chaon,
Toote khwabon ki leher dil me yuh hi sukhne lagi,

Bohot door ja rahe hai hum, mere jane ka gum na karna,
Dua kabul hui meri jab sansen meri rukhne lagi!
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2006, 06:32:12 PM »
wah wah kya baat hai meena ji...........spec. last 2 line.......good going kudiya!!!
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Princess21
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2006, 07:30:52 PM »
WAhhhhhh MEena kya baat hai.........Wow... yaar..buhat acha laga!!parh ke!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2006, 07:47:11 PM »
bahoot khoob meena ji...................

Kareeb Mout Khari Hai Zara Theher Jao..
Mehboob Se Aankh Lari Hai Zara Theher Jao..
Thaki Thaki see Fizayen Bujhe Bujhe Tare..
Bari Udaas Ghari Hai Zara Theher Jao..
Naheen Umeed Ke Ham AaJ Ki Seher DeKhen..
Yeh Raat Ham Per Kari Hai Zara Theher Jao..
Abhi Na Jao Ke Taron Ka Dil Dharakta Hai...
Tamam Raat Pari Hai Zara Theher Jao..
Phir Iske Baad Kabhi Hum Tum Ko Na Rokenge...
Labon Pe Saans Ari Hai Zara Theher Jao..
Pehle Mein Ji Bhar Ke Tum Ko Dekh To Lon...
Yeh Faisle Ki Ghari Hai Zara Thehr Jao...
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2006, 03:32:26 PM »
Meena -JI yeh kya ... yun zindgi se kaffa kaffa sa rehna .... apne humnafas se juda rehna ....  Meena -JI hum app ki zindgi haseen bna denge tum aao to shi !!!  kuch arz hai !!!


Ghum bhool jaengey tum aao to sahi
Dhukh muskurangey tum aao to sahi

woh ranjishein purani jo yaad hain tumhein
Dil se bhulaengey tum aao to sahi

phool gar nahin to rahoon mein kya hua
hum ankhein bichhangey tum aao to sahi

Fasl-e-gul mein gul hai chiragh-e aarzo
Phir se jalangey tum aao to sahi

:D  
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2006, 06:59:27 PM »
Ishu:
oh thank u kuddiye!  :D

Princess:
shukriya ji shukriya  :D

BS ji:
thank u thank u apne bhi acha likha hai!  :D

saansen meri rukhne lagi, aab teherne ka koi waqt nahin,
jee kar bhi kya karengi "Meena", jisme me umeed-e-rakht* nahin!

*rakht=blood

Humtum jiiiii
maine kaha shukriya ji shukriya...bada wadiya likha apne to! samajh bhi aa gayi  :D

jante hai hum ke tera saath hi mere gumon ki vidai hai,
par apne gum tujhe de kar tume rulaon kaise,

rehne do inhe mere, ke aab adat si hogayi inki,
diye hai takdeer ne jo zakhm unhe bulaon kaise!
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2006, 07:13:27 PM »
bahoot khoob Meena and HumTum ji!!
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2006, 07:23:54 PM »
shukriya..aab apne yaha pe kuch nahin likha  sad5
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Amanush...
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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2006, 10:02:47 PM »
Very nice...Meena Betiya ! Tumhare ehsaason ko padhkar bahout acha lagaa...!

Hum khoud dousron ki khushi ke tukron pe pal rahe hein
Sanjh ke suraj ki tarah jeewan-kshitij pe dhal rahe hein…


Chachu...

Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: January 16, 2006, 03:51:58 PM »
Excellent meena,and too good humtum.

"Marne ki dua karo to kubool nahi hoti,
      jeene ki dua karo,to zindagi nahi hoti,
      jise jo chahaiye wo to miltaa nahi,
      kyun bhagwan karta hai itni berukhi."
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2006, 04:49:52 AM »
meenu wonderfull... gr8 hum tum ji...nidhi ji wonderful... amanush ji nice... badnam shayari ji good one...
sabhi dostu ney bhut he acha likha hia...


Mere khayalon mein mehkisi teri tanhai hein
Mujhe her aahat pe lagen shayad milne too aayi hein
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2006, 07:01:58 AM »
Thanx sonu and wonderful,just in 2 lines u said a lot Usual Smile .
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2006, 08:32:46 AM »
"ek umra ki koshish se bhula di hai teri yaad
 varna ab tak teri yaadon ke saaye nahi jate"
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2006, 10:09:57 AM »
amazing Meena sis....n humtum...
Nidhi tum to gr8 ho..

everybody has written very well...Maine yeh post abb takk kyon nahi dekhi....really, its been very nice reading this post.

aye mere khuda meri yeh dua kabool ho jaye
tujhe(Meena sis) zamaane bhar ki khushiyan mile
aur tere hisse ke gum ...mere naam par manzoor ho jayein
maut ki dua na mang aye meri behna
abhi to bahut kuch hai zindagi mein
jo.. kuch hass kar, to kuch udasiyon mein hai sehna
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2006, 10:30:29 AM »
merne ki dua karu .....ya sajda karu tere aane ka,....

karu mai tujhse wafa ya karu jatan tujhe bhul jane ka.......

nibhau sath tera ya chod du tujhe in yado k samander me.....

tu hai ishq mai hu ashiq kaha se lau hausla ye sab tujhe bataneka.....
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