Masal masal ke aankhe............Parvana

by Parvana shan on May 13, 2012, 02:47:47 AM
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Masal masal ke aankhe lal kiye baitha hu.
Bahut bura m apna haal kiye baitha hu.

Jawab mil nahi rahe h kahi se bhi.
Khud se bahut se sawal kiye baitha hu.

Ris ris ke lahoo aankho me bhar raha h.
Aaj fir dil halaal kiye baitha hu.

Chirago ki hifajat ko hawao ko rakh choda h.
Jra dekhiye kya kamal kiye baitha hu.

Na aao, fans ke gir jao na kahi.
Eard gird bato ka jaal kiye baitha hu.

Bahut samhali h par ab parvah nahi rahi.
Sanso ko aaj behal kiye baitha hu.
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2012, 04:00:38 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2012, 04:43:29 AM »
apnee haalat ka kyaa khoob bayaan kiyaa hai
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2012, 07:46:28 AM »
very Nice...
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2012, 08:44:51 AM »
Quote from: Parvana shan on May 13, 2012, 02:47:47 AM

Masal masal ke aankhe lal kiye baitha hu.
Bahut bura m apna haal kiye baitha hu.
ek dumm bacho.n wali haalat hai tumhari.khuda khair kare icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Jawab mil nahi rahe h kahi se bhi.
Khud se bahut se sawal kiye baitha hu.
diwaar ke kaan hote hain muh nahin is liye jawaab kaise mile gaa icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Ris ris ke lahoo aankho me bhar raha h.
Aaj fir dil halaal kiye baitha hu.
ajeeb bimaari paal rakhi hai tumne.! Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Chirago ki hifajat ko hawao ko rakh choda h.
Jra dekhiye kya kamal kiye baitha hu.
hawaa kab se tumhaari wafaadar ho gayi hai.....!
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Na aao, fans ke gir jao na kahi.
Eard gird bato ka jaal kiye baitha hu.
acha guftaar ke ghazi ho tum........!mujhe aise jaal kaatne aate hain Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Bahut samhali h par ab parvah nahi rahi.
Aankho ko aaj behal kiye baitha hu.
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good one........!
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2012, 01:10:54 PM »
Khoob kaha! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2012, 02:33:04 PM »
Parwaana Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab... achche khayaalaat hai aur khoob
achchi adaaygi bhi... kafi khoob khayaaloN ko achche
lafzoN meiN dhala hai aapne... Usual Smile

humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rhaiye .... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2012, 06:07:23 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Parvana ji....!!!
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