Masumiyat to dekhiye.......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on December 27, 2008, 01:24:32 PM
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Masumiyat to dekhiye mere huzoor ki
Turbat pe meri poochte hain yeh kiska mazar hain

Jannat ki huro se zara kehna abhi aana nahi hain mumkin
Ek muddat se humko us nazneen ka intezar hain

Khushboo hain na rang hain na titliyaan hain koi
Meri zindagi me aayee yeh kaisi bahar hain

Apno ka gumaan nahi khud ka bhi nishaan nahi
Chaya ab har gadi sirf tera khumar hain

Becha khudhi ko humne jinki khushi ki khatir
Keemat laga gaye woh meri yeh kaisa bazaar hain

Chun chun kar diye the jinhe phool apne daman ke
Mere daman me jo lage hain woh un phoolo ke khar hain

Muje maut kabki aa jati jo tera intezaar na hota
Farishte maut ke bhi shayed tujse milne ko bekarar hain

Sabkuch kaha tha tumne bas yeh ek baat nahi boli
Sirf tuje nahi "SAJID humko bhi tujse pyaar hain

Woh jante the kuch na kahege hum apni safaiee me  
Dete rahe woh ilzam itna unko humpe aitbaar hain

Jo teer kabhi chala tha mere hatho se tere dushmano par
Who teer aaj mere hi seene ke aar paar hain

GHAYEL meri dua ab kyon na kabul ho
Har waqt mere samne tasweere yaar hain


                                     -Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2008, 02:46:41 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 27, 2008, 01:24:32 PM
Masumiyat to dekhiye mere huzoor ki
Turbat pe meri poochte hain yeh kiska mazar hain

Jannat ki huro se zara kehna abhi aana nahi hain mumkin
Ek muddat se humko us nazneen ka intezar hain

Khushboo hain na rang hain na titliyaan hain koi
Meri zindagi me aayee yeh kaisi bahar hain

Apno ka gumaan nahi khud ka bhi nishaan nahi
Chaya ab har gadi sirf tera khumar hain

Becha khudhi ko humne jinki khushi ki khatir
Keemat laga gaye woh meri yeh kaisa bazaar hain

Chun chun kar diye the jinhe phool apne daman ke
Mere daman me jo lage hain woh un phoolo ke khar hain

Muje maut kabki aa jati jo tera intezaar na hota
Farishte maut ke bhi shayed tujse milne ko bekarar hain

Sabkuch kaha tha tumne bas yeh ek baat nahi boli
Sirf tuje nahi "SAJID humko bhi tujse pyaar hain

Woh jante the kuch na kahege hum apni safaiee me 
Dete rahe woh ilzam itna unko humpe aitbaar hain

Jo teer kabhi chala tha mere hatho se tere dushmano par
Who teer aaj mere hi seene ke aar paar hain

GHAYEL meri dua ab kyon na kabul ho
Har waqt mere samne tasweere yaar hain
                                     -Sajid Ghayel
Myaan zara sambhaal key!
Hai khoob, magar un ko sunaanaa na ye gazal!
Beyhtar hai, kabhi ghar mein bhi gaanaa na ye gazal!
Warnah huzoor, faaqahmast rahnaa parheygaa;
Bas, kah diyaa 'abd' ney, baarhaa na kaheygaa!!
                               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2008, 02:54:18 PM »
Waah Waah Bohat Badhiya Sajid Bhai,.
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Aur Aapne Bhi Bhi Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Abd Bhaijaan,.
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2008, 02:57:32 PM »
Uske Chehre Ki Maasoomiyat Se Kisi Ko Bhi Lagta Nahi "Azeem,.
Ke Ye Wo Balaa Hai, Jiske Diye Zakham, Na Dikhaane Ke Rehte Hain,.
Na Chupaane Ke Rehte Hain,.
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2008, 03:13:40 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on December 27, 2008, 02:46:41 PM
Myaan zara sambhaal key!
Hai khoob, magar un ko sunaanaa na ye gazal!
Beyhtar hai, kabhi ghar mein bhi gaanaa na ye gazal!
Warnah huzoor, faaqahmast rahnaa parheygaa;
Bas, kah diyaa 'abd' ney, baarhaa na kaheygaa!!
                               - abd bundeli


Pet to bhar jayega rooh bhookhi rahegi abd
Mere masoom armano ki zameen sookhi rahegi abd
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2008, 03:16:21 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 27, 2008, 02:57:32 PM
Uske Chehre Ki Maasoomiyat Se Kisi Ko Bhi Lagta Nahi "Azeem,.
Ke Ye Wo Balaa Hai, Jiske Diye Zakham, Na Dikhaane Ke Rehte Hain,.
Na Chupaane Ke Rehte Hain,.

Bohat khoob reply chote aur tareef ke liye nawazish karam
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2008, 03:42:48 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 27, 2008, 02:54:18 PM
Waah Waah Bohat Badhiya Sajid Bhai,.
NIce One,.
Aur Aapne Bhi Bhi Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Abd Bhaijaan,.
Thanks Jaanasheen ji!
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2008, 03:55:03 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 27, 2008, 03:13:40 PM
Pet to bhar jayega rooh bhookhi rahegi abd
Mere masoom armano ki zameen sookhi rahegi abd
Rooh key pet kahaan hotaa hai meyrey bhaayee!
Mujh ko batlaanaa, agar us ney ho gazak khaayee?
Kaash, maasoom rahey hotey wo armaan itney:
Deykhney sey nazar aatey hain, meyhrbaan, jitney!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2008, 04:15:53 PM »
bahoot khoob ghayelji...

masumiyat ka chehra, chot de gayi gehara,
kar gayi is kadar "ghayel" ki har cheez mein nazar aata hain usi ka chehra..........masumiyat ka chehra








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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2008, 05:32:49 PM »
Quote from: cara on December 27, 2008, 04:15:53 PM
bahoot khoob ghayelji...

masumiyat ka chehra, chot de gayi gehara,
kar gayi is kadar "ghayel" ki har cheez mein nazar aata hain usi ka chehra..........masumiyat ka chehra


Bohat shukriyaa tareef aur khoobsurat jawab ke liye
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2008, 05:46:29 PM »
Sajid bro,

Behtareen kalam Applause Applause Applause

Har ek sher kabil-e-tareef hai. Yeh wala sher dil ko choo gaya sad5

Becha khudhi ko humne jinki khushi ki khatir
Keemat laga gaye woh meri yeh kaisa bazaar hain
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2008, 06:21:57 PM »
Wah! kamaal ka likha hai aap ne Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2008, 02:26:15 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 27, 2008, 01:24:32 PM
Masumiyat to dekhiye mere huzoor ki
Turbat pe meri poochte hain yeh kiska mazar hain

Jannat ki huro se zara kehna abhi aana nahi hain mumkin
Ek muddat se humko us nazneen ka intezar hain

Khushboo hain na rang hain na titliyaan hain koi
Meri zindagi me aayee yeh kaisi bahar hain

Apno ka gumaan nahi khud ka bhi nishaan nahi
Chaya ab har gadi sirf tera khumar hain

Becha khudhi ko humne jinki khushi ki khatir
Keemat laga gaye woh meri yeh kaisa bazaar hain

Chun chun kar diye the jinhe phool apne daman ke
Mere daman me jo lage hain woh un phoolo ke khar hain

Muje maut kabki aa jati jo tera intezaar na hota
Farishte maut ke bhi shayed tujse milne ko bekarar hain

Sabkuch kaha tha tumne bas yeh ek baat nahi boli
Sirf tuje nahi "SAJID humko bhi tujse pyaar hain

Woh jante the kuch na kahege hum apni safaiee me 
Dete rahe woh ilzam itna unko humpe aitbaar hain

Jo teer kabhi chala tha mere hatho se tere dushmano par
Who teer aaj mere hi seene ke aar paar hain

GHAYEL meri dua ab kyon na kabul ho
Har waqt mere samne tasweere yaar hain


                                     -Sajid Ghayel

Wah Wah Sajid Ji, Bahut hi khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2008, 06:59:27 AM »
Rajbir, Rajesh and Deepati tum sabka bohat shukriyaan jo tum logho ne mere kalam ko saraha.
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«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2008, 07:08:07 AM »
bahoot khoob SG
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