Mat Kar Dil Mere Khud Par Itna Gumaan..............Nikhaar

by Nikhaar on December 22, 2010, 05:53:41 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 14, 2011, 12:27:24 PM »
Pooja Yeh Tumhaari sab best Creations me se ek Hai.. Har ek Lafz Lajawab hai.. Har ek Jumla apni Kahani si kahata Nazar aata hai.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan kiya hai aapne... Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen dil se..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #16 on: January 14, 2011, 12:44:05 PM »

Kyu karta hai mere dil tu khud par itna gumaan
Tere bina bhi chalega , chalta hai tujh se aaj jo naam

Na hogi sooni wo mehfil tere jaane se
Jis mehfil mein banaayi thi tune apni pehchaan

Kyu soche tu itna uss shakhs k baare mein
Kal tera saath tha uske paas,aaj kisi aur ka hai
Iss par chup rehna hi bhala,
khuch kahega toh hoga yaaraana badnaam

Chal tu bhi chal sang mere yha se,
dekh apni jagah kisi aur ko
tu seh na paayega
Na de paayega tu ye imtihaan

Mudatt se na mila tu uss se,
iss tarah hi door ho gaya wo tujhse
Mud kar na dekh peeche ab tu
Chal ab yha se,na ruk karne ko dua,na slaam

Kyu rota hai dil mere tu,kyu kare khud se shikwa
Maana uske paas aur bhi hai,tere paas sirf wo tha
Yahi hai khaas iss rishte ki pehchaan
Yu ro na kar khud ka tu apmaan

Salaah hai meri tujhe,maan ja ae dil mer
Adhoori khwaishon k liye mat jaga khud mein koi armaan

Mat kar mere dil khud par tu itna gumaan
Nahi wo vishwaas paas tere,jis par karein tu itna maan
Mat kar khud par itna gumaan
Rehne de khud ko tu ab Gumnaam.



Apni Tanhaiyon Mein BHi Saath Apne Paaya Hai Tujhe
Dil Ke Iss Veeran Ghar mein Basaya Hai Tujhe

Mujhse Meri Tanhai Jab Bhi kuch sawal Puchti,Tu Mere Saath Thi!!
 Sahi maayne Mein "Khwaish"  Ne Apna Banaya Hai Tujhe

Apni Pehchaan Main Har Ek Se Chupata Raha
Par Apna Har Ek Zakhm Dikhaya Hai Tujhe...

"Khwaish" Lafzon ka saudaagar Hai Yeh Duniya Jaanti Hai!!!
APne Jazbaaton Ko Lafzon Mein Dhaalkar Sunaya Hai Tujhe..

Eh Mere Humraaz!!! Tere Mujhpar Bahut Se Ehsaan Hai!!!
Har Mushkil Raah Par Jo Apne Saath Paaya Hai Tujhe...

Aakhir Tujhe Main Kya Naam Doon!!! Yeh Nahi jaanta Main!!
par Apni Zindagi ka Ek Eham Hissa Banaya Hai Tujhe...

"Khwaish" Tujhse Door Hokar Bhi Kahi Door Nahi!!
"Khwaish" kehta Hai kisi Pathar Ko Tu Chuu Jaye To
Uss Par Bhi "Nikhaar" Aa Jaaye!!!

Bas Ek Baar Muskuraa De "Pooja"
Dekh Aaj "Khwaish" Ne Phir Se Manaya Hai Tujhe

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #17 on: January 14, 2011, 12:49:45 PM »
uffffff...........

khwaish ji kya lkiha he ji......

super duper mindblowing...........dil se likha har lafj lagta he..........bahot khub sahab maja aa gaya...khwaish ne fir se manaya he tuje......hayy mastam line ji
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«Reply #18 on: January 14, 2011, 01:38:58 PM »
uffffff...........

khwaish ji kya lkiha he ji......

super duper mindblowing...........dil se likha har lafj lagta he..........bahot khub sahab maja aa gaya...khwaish ne fir se manaya he tuje......hayy mastam line ji


Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Uthkarshji..

Aur Ji Haan Bahut Dil Se Likha Gaya Kalaam Hai Yeh...

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Aapka icon_flower
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«Reply #19 on: January 14, 2011, 02:33:35 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai nikhaar ji...har lafz dil ko chhu gya...
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«Reply #20 on: January 17, 2011, 05:27:55 AM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........

khwaish ji kya kahen....no words can describe my feelings....

oo pooja ki bachhci kahan hai tu..waiting for ur reply on this....jaldi se ao re.....we all missng u yaar......love u re..
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«Reply #21 on: January 17, 2011, 04:42:45 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........

khwaish ji kya kahen....no words can describe my feelings....

oo pooja ki bachhci kahan hai tu..waiting for ur reply on this....jaldi se ao re.....we all missng u yaar......love u re..

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Anuji...Aapne Waqt Diya..

Thankyou Soooooooo Much!!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: January 17, 2011, 05:09:11 PM »
bahut khub nikhaar ji--

"Na hogi sooni woh mehfil tere jaane se,
Jis mehfil main banayi thi tune apni pehchan.."

Bahaut bahaut khoob di..
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut umda lekhni hai Nikhaar Ji
Keep it up
well done Nikhaar jee!keeps writing on.....
bht khubsurat peshkash..par kuch achch anahin laga ye padhkar..aur wo main aapko keh chuki hun nikhaar....
sorry if u felt bad...
aap sabka dil se shukriya doston....
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«Reply #23 on: January 17, 2011, 05:12:45 PM »
Rulaa diyaa naa Pooja-di..... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

Badi-di ho meri tumko kya salaah du sakhee
Dard ko baanto-bhulaao naa badhaao kabhee

Bachchan ji ki ess kavita ko padho aur
samjho ess ka marm, yahi jeevan hai...
Bisri baat bhula kar aage badho....


Jeevan Main Ek Sitara Tha
Maana Vah Behad Pyara Tha
Vah Doob Gaya To Doob Gaya
Ambar Kay Aanan Ko Dekho
Kitne Iskay Taare Toote
Kitne Iskay Pyare Choote
Jo Choot Gaye Fir Kahan Mile
Par Bolo Toote Taaron Par
Kab Ambar Shok Manata Hai
Jo Beet Gayi So Baat Gayi

Jeevan Main Vah Tha Ek Kusum
They Us Par Nitya Nichavar Tum
Vah Sookh Gaya TO Sookh Gaya
Madhuvan Ki Chaati Ko Dekho
Sookhi Kitni Iski Kaliyan
Murjhaayi Kitni ballriyan
Jo Murjhayi Woh Fir Kahan Khili
Par Bolo Sookhe Phoolon Par
Kab Madhuban Shor Machata hai
Jo Beet Gayi So Bat Gayi

jeevan Main Madhu Ka Pyala Tha
Tumnay Tan Man De Daala Tha
Wah Toot Gaya To Toot Gaya
Madiralya Kay Aangan Ko Dekho
Kitne Pyale Hil Jaate Hain
Gir Mitti Main Mil Jaate Hain
Jo Girte Hain Kab Uthte Hain
Par Bolo Toote Pyalo Par
Kab Madiralaya Pachtata Hai
Jo Beet Gayi So Baat Gayi

Mridu Mitti Kay Hain Bane Hue
Madhu Ghoot Phoota Hi Kartay Hain
Laghu Jeevan Lekar Aaye Hain
Pyale Toota Hi Karte Hain
Fir Bhi Madiralaya Kay Andar
Madhu Kay Ghat Hai Madhu Pyale Hain
Jo Madakta Kay Maare Hain
Vey Madhu Loota Hi Kartay Hain
Va Kachcha Peene Wala Hai
Jiski Mamta Ghat Pyalon Par
Jo Sachchey Madhu Sey Jala Hua
Kab Rota Hai Chillata Hai
Jo Beet Gayi So Baat Gayi

Harivansh Rai Bachchan

thank u soooooooo much koyal......tumne mere liye waqt nikala aur itni acchi kavita share ki...bahut accha laga.....
its my fav. poetry....thank u so much dear
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«Reply #24 on: January 17, 2011, 05:30:23 PM »
shukriya rishi ji & cara ji.....bahut khoob likha hai aapne cara ji...bahut bahut shukriya

 Abhi ji sach kha aapne...mashuriyat insaan ko sab khuch bhla deti hai...bahut bahut shukriya......aapne hamesha saath diya hai...bahut bahut shukrana aapka

Khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko pasand aayi ye rachna MG ji....bahut bahut shukriya

Bakhubi samjha aapne dard ko Mann ji....jaan kar accha lga ki aapne iss rachna ko best rachna ka inaam diya....bahut bahut shukriya




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«Reply #25 on: January 17, 2011, 05:53:05 PM »

Apni Tanhaiyon Mein BHi Saath Apne Paaya Hai Tujhe
Dil Ke Iss Veeran Ghar mein Basaya Hai Tujhe

Mujhse Meri Tanhai Jab Bhi kuch sawal Puchti,Tu Mere Saath Thi!!
 Sahi maayne Mein "Khwaish"  Ne Apna Banaya Hai Tujhe

Apni Pehchaan Main Har Ek Se Chupata Raha
Par Apna Har Ek Zakhm Dikhaya Hai Tujhe...

"Khwaish" Lafzon ka saudaagar Hai Yeh Duniya Jaanti Hai!!!
APne Jazbaaton Ko Lafzon Mein Dhaalkar Sunaya Hai Tujhe..

Eh Mere Humraaz!!! Tere Mujhpar Bahut Se Ehsaan Hai!!!
Har Mushkil Raah Par Jo Apne Saath Paaya Hai Tujhe...

Aakhir Tujhe Main Kya Naam Doon!!! Yeh Nahi jaanta Main!!
par Apni Zindagi ka Ek Eham Hissa Banaya Hai Tujhe...

"Khwaish" Tujhse Door Hokar Bhi Kahi Door Nahi!!
"Khwaish" kehta Hai kisi Pathar Ko Tu Chuu Jaye To
Uss Par Bhi "Nikhaar" Aa Jaaye!!!

Bas Ek Baar Muskuraa De "Pooja"
Dekh Aaj "Khwaish" Ne Phir Se Manaya Hai Tujhe

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

i hav no words to express my feelings......
Pooja ko muskuraane k liye ,kabhi kisi ne iss Andaaz mein nahi kha......
so......specially for dis sweet poetry & poet.....a big smile......


Thank you soooooooo soooooooo soooooooooo much khwaish ji....thanx for dis lovely poetry...
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«Reply #26 on: January 17, 2011, 06:03:23 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........

khwaish ji kya kahen....no words can describe my feelings....

oo pooja ki bachhci kahan hai tu..waiting for ur reply on this....jaldi se ao re.....we all missng u yaar......love u re..
kya kasak di......meri bachhi kha se aa gayi yha...... tongue3
waise accha rha mai itne din gayab rahi....pta toh lga ki kaun kitna miss karta hai mujhe.... Usual Smile
hmm...reply....reply k liye lafjon ki talash ho rahi hai....jaise hi mil jaayega....jwaab haazir hoga aapke saamne.....khwaish ji ne itna accha likha hai k abhi toh lafj ghum hai...
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