~~"MATLABI MOHABBAT KI REET"~~

by k.shael on February 28, 2009, 05:52:53 AM
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Mujhe Chahne ka gunaah mat kar dena tum kahiin
Saja ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki tanhayi…

Pyaar beshak tu luta de jaan se bhi jyada iss pathar pe,
Badle ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki ruswayi…

Laakh shiddat se nibha to har wafa apne dil ki,
Reham ke tour pe milegi ta umar ki bewafayi….

Ho chahe laakh gile shikwe tujhe meri inn baton se
Par maine aaj ki matlabi mohabbat ki har reet tujhe batayi…

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2009, 06:00:34 AM »
Shally,Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Har Ek Alfaaz,Har Ek Ashaar Dard Se Lipta Hua..Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2009, 06:16:14 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on February 28, 2009, 06:00:34 AM
Shally,Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Har Ek Alfaaz,Har Ek Ashaar Dard Se Lipta Hua..Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Khwaish Ji,

Aacha laga aapko mere thread me dekhkar,

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2009, 07:06:53 AM »
Bohat khoob Shally..... Clapping Smiley

Tanhaiee mile Ruswaiee mile ya mile Bewafaiee
GHAYEL ne zindagi apni SHALLY, teri chau_khat pe chod aayee

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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2009, 07:57:33 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 28, 2009, 05:52:53 AM
Mujhe Chahne ka gunaah mat kar dena tum kahiin
Saja ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki tanhayi…

Pyaar beshak tu luta de jaan se bhi jyada iss pathar pe,
Badle ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki ruswayi…

Laakh shiddat se nibha to har wafa apne dil ki,
Reham ke tour pe milegi ta umar ki bewafayi….

Ho chahe laakh gile shikwe tujhe meri inn baton se
Par maine aaj ki matlabi mohabbat ki har reet tujhe batayi…

Shally.


Bahut khoob dear.. Last four lines super creation  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2009, 09:34:15 AM »
bahoot khoob shally
teri har baat se mujhe kuch yun guman hota hai,
tujhe meri wafao-on par khud se jyada bharosa hai,
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2009, 11:16:15 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 28, 2009, 05:52:53 AM
Mujhe Chahne ka gunaah mat kar dena tum kahiin
Saja ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki tanhayi…

Pyaar beshak tu luta de jaan se bhi jyada iss pathar pe,
Badle ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki ruswayi…

Laakh shiddat se nibha to har wafa apne dil ki,
Reham ke tour pe milegi ta umar ki bewafayi….

Ho chahe laakh gile shikwe tujhe meri inn baton se
Par maine aaj ki matlabi mohabbat ki har reet tujhe batayi…

Shally.

superb shally ..really a good one.........and sorry dear actually i m not gettin time to read ur creations........
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2009, 11:35:33 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 28, 2009, 05:52:53 AM
Mujhe Chahne ka gunaah mat kar dena tum kahiin
Saja ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki tanhayi…

Pyaar beshak tu luta de jaan se bhi jyada iss pathar pe,
Badle ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki ruswayi…

Laakh shiddat se nibha to har wafa apne dil ki,
Reham ke tour pe milegi ta umar ki bewafayi….

Ho chahe laakh gile shikwe tujhe meri inn baton se
Par maine aaj ki matlabi mohabbat ki har reet tujhe batayi…

Shally.

Nice one Shally Ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2009, 04:57:57 AM »
 Applause Applause

Wonderfull creation Shally ... 
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2009, 11:42:21 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 28, 2009, 05:52:53 AM
Mujhe Chahne ka gunaah mat kar dena tum kahiin
Saja ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki tanhayi…

Pyaar beshak tu luta de jaan se bhi jyada iss pathar pe,
Badle ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki ruswayi…

Laakh shiddat se nibha to har wafa apne dil ki,
Reham ke tour pe milegi ta umar ki bewafayi….

Ho chahe laakh gile shikwe tujhe meri inn baton se
Par maine aaj ki matlabi mohabbat ki har reet tujhe batayi…

Shally.

Applause Applause superb piece of writing..amazing Shally jee...
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2009, 11:45:04 AM »
well written Sajid jee,Bekarar jee aur Akash jee...
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«Reply #11 on: March 01, 2009, 12:49:09 PM »
Bohat BOhat Bohat Achche Shally, Bohat dard Bhara Hai Ye,.
 Nice One,.
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2009, 06:58:24 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 28, 2009, 05:52:53 AM
Mujhe Chahne ka gunaah mat kar dena tum kahiin
Saja ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki tanhayi…

Pyaar beshak tu luta de jaan se bhi jyada iss pathar pe,
Badle ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki ruswayi…

Laakh shiddat se nibha to har wafa apne dil ki,
Reham ke tour pe milegi ta umar ki bewafayi….

Ho chahe laakh gile shikwe tujhe meri inn baton se
Par maine aaj ki matlabi mohabbat ki har reet tujhe batayi…

Shally.


wah shally bahut pyara likha hai aap ney hamesha ki tarah

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«Reply #13 on: March 02, 2009, 07:03:22 AM »
Bahoot hi acha shally ji Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 02, 2009, 07:22:50 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 28, 2009, 05:52:53 AM
Mujhe Chahne ka gunaah mat kar dena tum kahiin
Saja ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki tanhayi…

Pyaar beshak tu luta de jaan se bhi jyada iss pathar pe,
Badle ke tour pe milegi ta-umar ki ruswayi…

Laakh shiddat se nibha to har wafa apne dil ki,
Reham ke tour pe milegi ta umar ki bewafayi….

Ho chahe laakh gile shikwe tujhe meri inn baton se
Par maine aaj ki matlabi mohabbat ki har reet tujhe batayi…

Shally.


waah...shally yaar..kya likha hai sach mein bahot bahot hi badhiya tarika hai likhne ka tere...aur Title to waqaee bahot hi khub diya hai...din b din Tum to kamal kar rahi ho..

allah Tuze is farebi aur matlabi duniyaa se bachaaye..yehi dil se dua hai..dear.

 
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