maut bhi nahin aati:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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yoon toh har taraf alam hai jashn ka
sirf ek tere chehre par khushi nazar nahin aati
jo tere saath tha toh bhi tu udaas thi
ab yeh ghami kii chadar chehre se kyun nahin hatati

na kar afsos mera lamha samjh k bhool ja
maaf kii maine khata nahin shikwa ab koi baaki
lutf ootha is shaam ka ,'yeh shaam toh haseen hai
kehte hai log kii raunake laut kar nahin aati

dekh jal na jaaye kaahin sholon k khel mein
galatfehmi hai teri kii rakh mein aag nahin aati
jo jal gaya roshan kar k kissii kii zindgi
kehte hai aisi mohaabat ko"saahil" maut bhi nahin aati


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Roja

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2009, 07:45:49 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on February 09, 2009, 07:42:47 AM

Wah Salil ji... bahut accha laga aapko padkar


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salil2002

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2009, 08:10:18 AM »

Quote from: Roja on February 09, 2009, 07:45:49 AM

Wah Salil ji... bahut accha laga aapko padkar

shukriya hosla afzaai ka

kissii kii din muskuraana tum mujhe yaad karke
meri chahat thi kii labon par ek hansi dekhoon


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salma786

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2009, 08:32:46 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on February 09, 2009, 07:42:47 AM

Bahoot hi khoob likha hai apne saahil ji Clapping Smiley


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salil2002

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2009, 08:37:39 AM »

Quote from: salma786 on February 09, 2009, 08:32:46 AM

Bahoot hi khoob likha hai apne saahil ji Clapping Smiley

thanks salma ...........nice to c u on my thread


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salma786

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2009, 08:41:36 AM »

Its ma pleasure to read ur gud creation always Usual Smile


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k.shael

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2009, 08:43:07 AM »

Bahut khoob likha hai Salil,
As always gud one from ur side

Shally.


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pankshivam

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2009, 09:39:04 AM »

Bahot Dard Hai Salil Bhai
Dil Ko Chho Liya Aapne
Bahoot Khoob


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salil2002

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2009, 02:09:22 PM »

Quote from: salma786 on February 09, 2009, 08:41:36 AM

Its ma pleasure to read ur gud creation always Usual Smile

Quote from: pankshivam on February 09, 2009, 09:39:04 AM

Bahot Dard Hai Salil Bhai
Dil Ko Chho Liya Aapne
Bahoot Khoob

thanks a lot salma and shivam bhai...will try to write even better


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salil2002

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2009, 02:11:44 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on February 09, 2009, 08:43:07 AM

Bahut khoob likha hai Salil,
As always gud one from ur side

Shally.

thnks shally dear.........

honthon pe kuch dabi huyi si baat hai
aao mein choomo lab tere aur saare raaz khol doon
bahut tanhaayi main reh liye tum jaanemann
baahon mein aao mein dil k saaz chhed doon


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dead heart

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2009, 05:21:31 PM »

Saahil bhai...kamal ka likha hai apne... yeh lines toh lajawab thi...dil ko chu gayi...

Quote from: salil2002 on February 09, 2009, 07:42:47 AM

dekh jal na jaaye kaahin sholon k khel mein
galatfehmi hai teri kii rakh mein aag nahin aati
jo jal gaya roshan kar k kissii kii zindgi
kehte hai aisi mohaabat ko"saahil" maut bhi nahin aati

unki palkein toh hume duniya se chupati hai,
jane anjane hume deewana banati hai,
sach kaha hai apne Saahil,
hume jaise pyaar karne walon ko toh maut bhi nahin ati hai...


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salil2002

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Re: maut bhi nahin aati

«Reply #11 on: February 10, 2009, 05:16:48 AM »

Quote from: dead heart on February 09, 2009, 05:21:31 PM

Saahil bhai...kamal ka likha hai apne... yeh lines toh lajawab thi...dil ko chu gayi...
nice to c u again on my thread i always wait for ur heartiest comments and lovely shayaris.........

ho sake toh aaj na jao mujhe chhod kar
haan main aaj kii raat ji lena chahta hoon
kal savere naya suraj hoga tumhare liye
main ban k saaya tere saath rehna chahta hoon

unki palkein toh hume duniya se chupati hai,
jane anjane hume deewana banati hai,
sach kaha hai apne Saahil,
hume jaise pyaar karne walon ko toh maut bhi nahin ati hai...


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