- Mayusi Ka Mausam -

by Meena on September 04, 2005, 12:13:19 PM
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Kabhi kabhi dil bohot udas sa ho jata hai, ek mayusi si cha jati hai dil pe. ussi jazbaato ke nam meri yeh poem hai:

Mayusi ka mausam zindagi me kuch is tara se cha gaya,
Ke dil me chupa maut ka arman woh jagha gaya

Kushiyon ko ruksat kiya humne ansowon ki doli me,
Kamoshi aur tanhyi jaise saathioyn se woh mila gaya,

Zindagi ke andhere me badak rahe hai aaj hum,
Jabse  har asha aur har umeed ke diye ko woh buja gaya,

Juriyan hai chehre pe aur ankhen hai kali kali,
Apni pehechan is tara se who mere chehre pe saja gaya!
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2005, 12:24:31 PM »
wow ek se badh kar ek poem hain aapke...!!!
bahut khoob likha hai meenu sis...!!!

but
kabhi kabhi mayusi ka mausam cha jana bhi zindagi ka ek modh hai...
aur zindagi kabhi kisi ek liye ek jaisi nahin hoti hai aur pal pal badalta rehta hai...
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Amanush...
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2005, 12:28:30 PM »
Jab bhi ye dil oudass hota hai
Jaane kaun aas paas hota hai


(Gane ki bol hai)

Usual Smile
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HumTum
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2005, 01:59:18 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Kabhi kabhi dil bohot udas sa ho jata hai, ek mayusi si cha jati hai dil pe. ussi jazbaato ke nam meri yeh poem hai:

Mayusi ka mausam zindagi me kuch is tara se cha gaya,
Ke dil me chupa maut ka arman woh jagha gaya

Kushiyon ko ruksat kiya humne ansowon ki doli me,
Kamoshi aur tanhyi jaise saathioyn se woh mila gaya,

Zindagi ke andhere me badak rahe hai aaj hum,
Jabse  har asha aur har umeed ke diye ko woh buja gaya,

Juriyan hai chehre pe aur ankhen hai kali kali,
Apni pehechan is tara se who mere chehre pe saja gaya!


waah waah ..... bhoot khoob Meena - JIII ....  kcuh nhi likhunga ...fir khoge ke chinese mein lecture diya sad5


Juriyan hai chehre pe aur ankhen hai kali kali,
Apni pehechan is tara se who mere chehre pe saja gaya


yeh lines bahut achi hai ..... aur kha hai kitni baar ke cream lagaya kro ankhoon pe  ... manti ho baat ko  Puzzled !

mujhey tum bhool jaana chahte ho
ke khud ko aazmaana chaahte ho

likhe the jo kabhi maine wafaa ke
vo saare khat jalaana chaahte ho

mitaa kar kaagazo ke chand tukre
mujhey dil se mitaana chaahte ho

ujaada aashiyaan meri wafaa ka
makaan kiska sajaana chaahte ho

rakho woh baat yaaro se bhi chupa ke
dusmano se jo chhupaana chaahte ho

ke mat chhino kisi ki muskuraahat
agar tum muskuraana chaahte ho !!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2005, 02:20:46 PM »
awesum....Meena sis kamaal ka likhti ho aap..........really very very beautifull.................padh kar bahut hi acha laga....
tussi gr8 ho Humtum ...jawaab ho to aap jaisa...wah ji wah
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2005, 05:22:08 PM »
Amazing work sis.......bohat hi khoob likha hai.

And humtum.....kya kahoon aapse main to waise hi aapki poetry ki fan hoon,jaisi poetry mujhe pasand hai aap bilkul waisi likhte hain Usual Smile .
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2005, 08:14:59 AM »
very  nice  meena  ..........hum  tum
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2005, 10:32:55 AM »
Meena n Humtum............... Just superb !!!!
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2005, 10:41:39 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Kabhi kabhi dil bohot udas sa ho jata hai, ek mayusi si cha jati hai dil pe. ussi jazbaato ke nam meri yeh poem hai:

Mayusi ka mausam zindagi me kuch is tara se cha gaya,
Ke dil me chupa maut ka arman woh jagha gaya

Kushiyon ko ruksat kiya humne ansowon ki doli me,
Kamoshi aur tanhyi jaise saathioyn se woh mila gaya,

Zindagi ke andhere me badak rahe hai aaj hum,
Jabse  har asha aur har umeed ke diye ko woh buja gaya,

Juriyan hai chehre pe aur ankhen hai kali kali,
Apni pehechan is tara se who mere chehre pe saja gaya!




wah bohut achaa likha meena ji
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2005, 03:13:58 PM »
Quote from: "salma4u"
wow ek se badh kar ek poem hain aapke...!!!
bahut khoob likha hai meenu sis...!!!

but
kabhi kabhi mayusi ka mausam cha jana bhi zindagi ka ek modh hai...
aur zindagi kabhi kisi ek liye ek jaisi nahin hoti hai aur pal pal badalta rehta hai...


shukriya salma sis!!!! sahi kaha ke yeh bhi zindagi ka ek hissa hai:

badalte rahe mausam, badalte rahe lamhe,
hum to chalte rahe par na thi koi manzil samne!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2005, 03:14:42 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Kabhi kabhi dil bohot udas sa ho jata hai, ek mayusi si cha jati hai dil pe. ussi jazbaato ke nam meri yeh poem hai:

Mayusi ka mausam zindagi me kuch is tara se cha gaya,
Ke dil me chupa maut ka arman woh jagha gaya

Kushiyon ko ruksat kiya humne ansowon ki doli me,
Kamoshi aur tanhyi jaise saathioyn se woh mila gaya,

Zindagi ke andhere me badak rahe hai aaj hum,
Jabse  har asha aur har umeed ke diye ko woh buja gaya,

Juriyan hai chehre pe aur ankhen hai kali kali,
Apni pehechan is tara se who mere chehre pe saja gaya!

It's Beautiful Meena....
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2005, 03:17:09 PM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Jab bhi ye dil oudass hota hai
Jaane kaun aas paas hota hai


(Gane ki bol hai)

Usual Smile


wow chachu, nice to c u back!!!!! :D

tanhaiyo se bandan jod liya hai,
jabse is duniya se muh mod liya hai!!
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: September 05, 2005, 03:22:30 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
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waah waah ..... bhoot khoob Meena - JIII ....  kcuh nhi likhunga ...fir khoge ke chinese mein lecture diya sad5


Juriyan hai chehre pe aur ankhen hai kali kali,
Apni pehechan is tara se who mere chehre pe saja gaya


yeh lines bahut achi hai ..... aur kha hai kitni baar ke cream lagaya kro ankhoon pe  ... manti ho baat ko  Puzzled !

mujhey tum bhool jaana chahte ho
ke khud ko aazmaana chaahte ho

likhe the jo kabhi maine wafaa ke
vo saare khat jalaana chaahte ho

mitaa kar kaagazo ke chand tukre
mujhey dil se mitaana chaahte ho

ujaada aashiyaan meri wafaa ka
makaan kiska sajaana chaahte ho

rakho woh baat yaaro se bhi chupa ke
dusmano se jo chhupaana chaahte ho

ke mat chhino kisi ki muskuraahat
agar tum muskuraana chaahte ho !!!!


lol thank u humtum ji...chinese me nahin par aap jab punjabi bolte ho to zada ache lagte ho  :wink: ek bar phir se apne bohot hi acha likha!!

aaj woh humse yuh baat karte hai ajnabiyon ke jaise,
nahin jante wo ke unke bina pal guzarte hai sadiyon ke jaise!
honton pe hasi dekh kar sochte hai woh ke hhume koi gum nahin,
nahin jante woh ke jee rahe hai hum yaha quaidiyon ke jaise!
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2005, 03:24:39 PM »
nikki:
thanx kuddiye, humaesha ke liye meri poem pasand karne ke liye!!!

nidhi:
shukriya sis!!!!

waheed:
thanx waheed!!!!

talat:
thanx kuddiye!

amit:
shukriya ji shukriya!

aryaan ji:
thank u!!!!

 :D
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pagal_nahi_masoom_houn
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«Reply #14 on: September 05, 2005, 03:36:02 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Kabhi kabhi dil bohot udas sa ho jata hai, ek mayusi si cha jati hai dil pe. ussi jazbaato ke nam meri yeh poem hai:

Mayusi ka mausam zindagi me kuch is tara se cha gaya,
Ke dil me chupa maut ka arman woh jagha gaya

Kushiyon ko ruksat kiya humne ansowon ki doli me,
Kamoshi aur tanhyi jaise saathioyn se woh mila gaya,

Zindagi ke andhere me badak rahe hai aaj hum,
Jabse  har asha aur har umeed ke diye ko woh buja gaya,

Juriyan hai chehre pe aur ankhen hai kali kali,
Apni pehechan is tara se who mere chehre pe saja gaya!


bohat ala  realy heart touching thx  for sharing
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