...~~Meena hathooN mein liye~~...

by HumTum on June 12, 2005, 02:38:56 AM
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Mere sharaabi bahiyooN ik khoshish aap sab ko mehkhaney tak le janey ki  !!


aao maikhaane chalien  honey deewaane chalieN
angoor ki betii ko dene nazraane chaleiN

hum they nadaan bahut taubaa kar baithe
ek kasam todney doosri khaane chaleiN

Meena haathon mein liye saaki muntzar rindo
dil na uska torien, jaam chhalkaane chaleiN

shek-o-pandit bhi vahaan nazrein bachaa aate
peechha karein unka, unke bahaane chaleiN

maikade meiN yaaro sabhi apne hain wahaan
na farak koi karein apnaa banaane chaleiN

"HumTum" chhoti hai umar aur chaahtein kitni
kisko ham apnaaein, kis se hoke begaane chaleiN
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2005, 06:33:28 AM »
Arre, hum tum itni ghuudh hindi....toh i cant understand but jo thoda bahuta samajh ayaya nice spec. these last lines "HumTum" chhoti hai umar aur chaahtein kitni
kisko ham apnaaein, kis se hoke begaane chaleiN " very touchy
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2005, 11:37:51 AM »
wah ji wah!!

kcuh lines to mujhe bhi samajh nahin ayi sad5  par jo samajh aya bohot acha tha  :D
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2005, 12:24:05 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Arre, hum tum itni ghuudh hindi....toh i cant understand but jo thoda bahuta samajh ayaya nice spec. these last lines "HumTum" chhoti hai umar aur chaahtein kitni
kisko ham apnaaein, kis se hoke begaane chaleiN " very touchy


Shukriya Isha :wink:  jo samj nhi aayi uskey liye sorry ji sad5
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2005, 12:24:32 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah!!

kcuh lines to mujhe bhi samajh nahin ayi sad5  par jo samajh aya bohot acha tha  :D

aap ko kabhi kuch samj aata hai kya
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2005, 02:16:06 PM »
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wah ji wah!!

kcuh lines to mujhe bhi samajh nahin ayi sad5  par jo samajh aya bohot acha tha  :D

aap ko kabhi kuch samj aata hai kya


 sad5
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2005, 05:34:48 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Mere sharaabi bahiyooN ik khoshish aap sab ko mehkhaney tak le janey ki  !!


aao maikhaane chalien  honey deewaane chalieN
angoor ki betii ko dene nazraane chaleiN

hum they nadaan bahut taubaa kar baithe
ek kasam todney doosri khaane chaleiN

Meena haathon mein liye saaki muntzar rindo
dil na uska torien, jaam chhalkaane chaleiN

shek-o-pandit bhi vahaan nazrein bachaa aate
peechha karein unka, unke bahaane chaleiN

maikade meiN yaaro sabhi apne hain wahaan
na farak koi karein apnaa banaane chaleiN

"HumTum" chhoti hai umar aur chaahtein kitni
kisko ham apnaaein, kis se hoke begaane chaleiN


wah humtum,kya baat hai yaar,gazab ka likha hai,excellent but y is meena sad.Cheer her up now,gussa kar diya Puzzled !
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2005, 06:31:49 PM »
wah!!!!!!!!!!!!   bahot  khoob  ..........hum  tum..........
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2005, 06:52:48 PM »
lol nidhi

arre rehne do usko nidhi sad5  yeh humesha mere sath dishmani karta hai  sad5
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2005, 01:36:12 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Mere sharaabi bahiyooN ik khoshish aap sab ko mehkhaney tak le janey ki  !!


aao maikhaane chalien  honey deewaane chalieN
angoor ki betii ko dene nazraane chaleiN

hum they nadaan bahut taubaa kar baithe
ek kasam todney doosri khaane chaleiN

Meena haathon mein liye saaki muntzar rindo
dil na uska torien, jaam chhalkaane chaleiN

shek-o-pandit bhi vahaan nazrein bachaa aate
peechha karein unka, unke bahaane chaleiN

maikade meiN yaaro sabhi apne hain wahaan
na farak koi karein apnaa banaane chaleiN

"HumTum" chhoti hai umar aur chaahtein kitni
kisko ham apnaaein, kis se hoke begaane chaleiN


wah humtum,kya baat hai yaar,gazab ka likha hai,excellent but y is meena sad.Cheer her up now,gussa kar diya Puzzled !


Shukriya Nidhi ji ......  pta nhi Nidhi ji isko kya ho jata .... bat baat pe gussa ... aap hi samjo isey !!
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2005, 01:36:42 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
wah!!!!!!!!!!!!   bahot  khoob  ..........hum  tum..........


Shukriya Waheed ...
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2005, 01:38:24 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
lol nidhi

arre rehne do usko nidhi sad5  yeh humesha mere sath dishmani karta hai  sad5


aree aree ..... kaun si dhusmani ki baat ker rhi hai yaar !! meiney to yun hi likh diya !! well .... sorry !! ab to maan ja na !!
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nikki
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2005, 01:40:15 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Mere sharaabi bahiyooN ik khoshish aap sab ko mehkhaney tak le janey ki  !!


aao maikhaane chalien  honey deewaane chalieN
angoor ki betii ko dene nazraane chaleiN

hum they nadaan bahut taubaa kar baithe
ek kasam todney doosri khaane chaleiN

Meena haathon mein liye saaki muntzar rindo
dil na uska torien, jaam chhalkaane chaleiN

shek-o-pandit bhi vahaan nazrein bachaa aate
peechha karein unka, unke bahaane chaleiN

maikade meiN yaaro sabhi apne hain wahaan
na farak koi karein apnaa banaane chaleiN

"HumTum" chhoti hai umar aur chaahtein kitni
kisko ham apnaaein, kis se hoke begaane chaleiN


tussi gr8 ho ...HumTum...
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2005, 01:43:17 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Mere sharaabi bahiyooN ik khoshish aap sab ko mehkhaney tak le janey ki  !!


aao maikhaane chalien  honey deewaane chalieN
angoor ki betii ko dene nazraane chaleiN

hum they nadaan bahut taubaa kar baithe
ek kasam todney doosri khaane chaleiN

Meena haathon mein liye saaki muntzar rindo
dil na uska torien, jaam chhalkaane chaleiN

shek-o-pandit bhi vahaan nazrein bachaa aate
peechha karein unka, unke bahaane chaleiN

maikade meiN yaaro sabhi apne hain wahaan
na farak koi karein apnaa banaane chaleiN

"HumTum" chhoti hai umar aur chaahtein kitni
kisko ham apnaaein, kis se hoke begaane chaleiN


tussi gr8 ho ...HumTum...


Thanks ji Thanks !!!

dil ke jazbatooN ko kiya hai bayaaN lafzoN mein
waseey hum shayar nhi yeh baat jaan lijiye !!!
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nikki
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2005, 01:45:15 PM »
dil ke jazbatooN ko kiya hai bayaaN lafzoN mein
waseey hum shayar nhi yeh baat jaan lijiye !!

likhte ho acha, padhte hain sabhi pyar se
hoti hai sabke chehre pe hassi(muskaan)
aap bhi maan lijiye..
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