mehfil sajate rahe

by salil2002 on February 01, 2009, 07:57:36 AM
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dard mein dekha mujhe aur woh muskuraaye bahut
meri maut par jashn bhi manate rahe
kara har saal humein is kadar yaad
meri barse par mehfil sajate rahe

unka kehna tha kii meri maut ka oonhe yakeen nahin
toh kyun woh gairon kii baahon main jaate rahe
kehte thay kii teri gazlein mehfil mein gujengi
toh kyun woh meri gazlon ko aag mein jalate rahe

haan dard hai ab bhi bahut is seene mein
magar hum kyun teri mehfil main sabko rulaate rahe
tujhe toh mohabbat se nahin hai waasta
hum kyun apni dil kii shama ko jalate rahein
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2009, 08:03:09 AM »
Bahoth Bahoth qoob salil sahab acha qasa dard -e-dil bayan kar diya apne alfaaz me !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2009, 09:02:47 AM »
Nice lines salil...
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2009, 09:08:35 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on February 01, 2009, 07:57:36 AM
dard mein dekha mujhe aur woh muskuraaye bahut
meri maut par jashn bhi manate rahe
kara har saal humein is kadar yaad
meri barse par mehfil sajate rahe

unka kehna tha kii meri maut ka oonhe yakeen nahin
toh kyun woh gairon kii baahon main jaate rahe
kehte thay kii teri gazlein mehfil mein gujengi
toh kyun woh meri gazlon ko aag mein jalate rahe

haan dard hai ab bhi bahut is seene mein
magar hum kyun teri mehfil main sabko rulaate rahe
tujhe toh mohabbat se nahin hai waasta
hum kyun apni dil kii shama ko jalate rahein


Bahut khoob Salil ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2009, 09:10:29 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on February 01, 2009, 07:57:36 AM
dard mein dekha mujhe aur woh muskuraaye bahut
meri maut par jashn bhi manate rahe
kara har saal humein is kadar yaad
meri barse par mehfil sajate rahe

unka kehna tha kii meri maut ka oonhe yakeen nahin
toh kyun woh gairon kii baahon main jaate rahe
kehte thay kii teri gazlein mehfil mein gujengi
toh kyun woh meri gazlon ko aag mein jalate rahe

haan dard hai ab bhi bahut is seene mein
magar hum kyun teri mehfil main sabko rulaate rahe
tujhe toh mohabbat se nahin hai waasta
hum kyun apni dil kii shama ko jalate rahein


Very touching lines sweet bro.... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2009, 02:05:01 PM »
Bohat khoob Salil.... Clapping Smiley yeh 2 line dad samajh ke kabool kare..

Is kadar woh aaye meri kabr pe, ke ab yeh aalam hain
Shehar-e-khamosha* me mehfilo si raunak hain

                    -SG-

* Graveyard.
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2009, 10:18:22 AM »
Bohat Badhiya Hai Salil Bhai,.
And Very Nice Lines, Sajid Bhaiya,.
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2009, 10:22:11 AM »
Tu Hai To Raunakh Saare Jahaan Mein Hai,.
Warna Mehfil Bhi Lagti Hai, Shamshaan Ki Tarah,.

Tu Hai To Sab Kuch Hai Zindagi Mein Meri "Jaan,.
Tu Nahi To Main Zinda Hoon Ek Mare Hue Insaan Ki Tarah,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2009, 12:45:23 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause wah wah wah wah mere bhai...mere dil ko toh lines bahaut chugayi...dil udaas tha toh socha ke yoindia pe ajaun kuch mann halka karne ke liye...sach bataun toh mere bhai apke yeh chand lines ne ansu nikal diye...yaar bahaut acha likha hai apne...
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2009, 07:25:02 PM »
Bohot Khoob Salil...very nice creation !

Very nice replies Sajid Ji, Jansheen
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2009, 04:59:27 AM »
Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 01, 2009, 08:03:09 AM
Bahoth Bahoth qoob salil sahab acha qasa dard -e-dil bayan kar diya apne alfaaz me !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
Quote from: angel4u on February 01, 2009, 09:02:47 AM
Nice lines salil...

Quote from: Roja on February 01, 2009, 09:08:35 AM
Bahut khoob Salil ji
Quote from: honeyrose on February 01, 2009, 09:10:29 AM

Very touching lines sweet bro.... Applause
thank u ....Qadeer bhai, husaina, roja and jaya di
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2009, 05:03:02 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 01, 2009, 02:05:01 PM
Bohat khoob Salil.... Clapping Smiley yeh 2 line dad samajh ke kabool kare..

Is kadar woh aaye meri kabr pe, ke ab yeh aalam hain
Shehar-e-khamosha* me mehfilo si raunak hain

                    -SG-

* Graveyard.
bahut ummda likha hai mere bhai

haan dekho aaj raunak si hai sehar-e- khamosha mein
jaroor kaahin parvana jal k roshan ho gaya hai
haan dafna do ise aur chale jao khamoshi se
dekhte nahin sehar-e -khamosha ka har bashinda so gaya hai
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2009, 05:04:39 AM »
Quote from: dead heart on February 02, 2009, 12:45:23 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause wah wah wah wah mere bhai...mere dil ko toh lines bahaut chugayi...dil udaas tha toh socha ke yoindia pe ajaun kuch mann halka karne ke liye...sach bataun toh mere bhai apke yeh chand lines ne ansu nikal diye...yaar bahaut acha likha hai apne...



shukriya dead heart...itni izzat bakhsne k liye
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2009, 05:13:12 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on February 02, 2009, 07:25:02 PM
Bohot Khoob Salil...very nice creation !

Very nice replies Sajid Ji, Jansheen
thank u talat di
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2009, 05:15:51 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 02, 2009, 10:22:11 AM
Tu Hai To Raunakh Saare Jahaan Mein Hai,.
Warna Mehfil Bhi Lagti Hai, Shamshaan Ki Tarah,.

Tu Hai To Sab Kuch Hai Zindagi Mein Meri "Jaan,.
Tu Nahi To Main Zinda Hoon Ek Mare Hue Insaan Ki Tarah,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen-
nice one janasheen bhai

kii koi mere dar par dastak de chala jaaye
haan aisa kambhaqat nahin main kii mehmaa-nawaji na karoon
koi le le mera dil khele aur phir thak k tod de
mein koi khuda nahin kii oosse mere dost jawabi na karoon
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